by Jackie J
Lady Penrose thought nothing odd that her husband was away travelling abroad and that her young maid Silvia was away visiting her sick aunt.
Lady Penrose thought nothing odd that her husband was away travelling abroad and that her young maid Silvia was away visiting her sick aunt.
Reginald was often away from Ringwood with
work and in recent times Silvia had been allowed compassionate leave to look
after her aunt, never for such an extended period but Silvia had explained her
aunt may not survive much longer and wanted to be with her at the end. It was
rare for domestics to be given leave in the nineteen twenties, whatever the
circumstances, but Lord Penrose insisted it was the right thing to do.
Ringwood was a palatial and secluded manor
situated three miles from the village of Tyne. The seclusion suited the
somewhat reclusive lifestyle of the Penroses. The postman, village traders
bringing deliveries, and a rare guest of Lord Penrose were the only visitors to
Ringwood.
When she had last returned from her family
visit, Silvia’s attitude toward her mistress, Lady Penrose, has been bordering on
insolence as she criticised the state of the manor. Lord Penrose, more often
than not, was siding with Silvia suggesting that just because the maid was away
it was no reason for the house to become unkempt.
On this particular absence, before she
left, the surly young maid had the audacity to prepare a list of duties that
should be carried out whilst she was away much to the annoyance of Lady Penrose
but to the amusement of her husband.
The list of duties, which Lady Penrose
purposely ignored, stayed pinned to the wall of the scullery for the first few
days. It was during the weekend and following the receipt of a letter from
Silvia, explaining that she would be away longer that was at first intended,
which tempted Lady Penrose to read the list and the attached note left by her
maid.
Her blood boiled reading the note, how
dare she, the little Madame. Slovenly! I will give her slovenly when she
returns!
Lady Penrose sat in the parlour and looking
around the room chuckled. That little
minx was right: the place was untidy, there was dust on the surfaces and a
mountain of dirty dishes sat in the scullery.
Lady Penrose read through the list again
and considered the attached note. She knew it would please her husband but was
she really going to follow instructions given to her by her maid? Well, it would teach that trollop of a maid a
lesson if the place was sparkling when she returned and her notice waiting for
her.
That evening Lady Penrose entered Silvia’s
quarters at the rear of the house, opened the closet and scowled at what she
saw, swearing under her breath. How dare she, how dare she the presumptuous
little tart! Hung on the rail maid’s dresses, the ones Silvia wore, four in
total, black calf length dresses with white laced trim to the collar and half
sleeves with a name embroidered on each. Not Silvia’s name but Lady Penrose’s
name, Isabella!
Lady Penrose slammed the closet shut and
stormed out of the room. Back in the main house she poured herself a glass of whiskey
and sat back onto the sofa. No way, there
was no bloody way. Lady Penrose slurped down her drink then poured another. She
was fuming. The note from Silvia had
suggested that, given that she would be cleaning, she should wear a maid’s
tunic that could be found in her closet. Seeing her name on the dresses was
just too much. The presumptuous bitch had first thought her mistress would even
consider wearing a maid’s uniforms and then had the audacity to embroider her
name on them. Argh.
After another whiskey, Lady Penrose’s
anger started to subside and she even giggled thinking of how her maid had gone
to the trouble of putting her name on the dresses. Perhaps she was just having
a bit of fun? Or too much time on her hands?
On Sunday Lady Penrose returned to
Silvia’s quarters and this time smiled at the dresses, removing one from the
rail. Holding it against her, Lady Penrose swished the dress about her in front
of the mirror and giggled. What would it matter, who would see her anyway and
she wasn’t going to carry out household duties in her own clothes anyway, was
she?
On Monday morning, wearing a maid’s dress
and an apron, Isabella set about cleaning the parlour, then the hallway, and by
lunch time was getting to grips with the washing up and the laundry.
Isabella flopped down at the kitchen table
and sighed hugging a mug of tea. Her underwear was uncomfortable: the silky
lingerie was not designed for a girl at work for sure and her fine denier
stockings had snagged in a number of places. And what about heels? Not for this
job.
The following day Isabella, resigned to
forego quality for comfort, rooted through Silvia’s drawers and found something
a lot more suitable: cotton underwear knickers, a bra, and a lace-trimmed petticoat
that she hoped would soften the harshness of the heavy woollen dress, which it
did to a certain extent. Coarser hosiery and low-heeled shoes also borrowed from
her maid completed Isabella’s ensemble.
Following the duties written on the list,
given to her by her maid, Isabella made good progress with her cleaning
throughout the manor, even taking some pride in her efforts and, having felt
the benefit of the unfashionable but practical underwear and matronly hosiery
and shoes, accepted this compromise.
Isabella had been cleaning in the kitchen
when the door bell rang and, wiping her hands on her apron and removing the
maid’s cap she had taken to wearing, went to answer the door without thought or
concern of how she was attired or looked bereft of makeup and her hair tied
back in a very simple style.
The door swung open and the surprised face
of her friend Claudia greeted her with a titter. Isabella at that moment froze
realising how she must look.
Claudia was a vivacious widow and a renowned
gossip from the village, an
acquaintance who Isabella tolerated rather than
admired. Of all the people to call this was the last person she would want to
see her dressed in her maid’s regalia.
“Oh my, Isabella you look, you look, well
invite me in, won’t you?”
Claudia stepped over the threshold and
giggled.
“Well, do I not get a curtsy, young lady?”
Isabella grinned and dropped a mock curtsy.
“Miss.”
Both giggled, Isabella from nervous
tension, Claudia from amusement and a sense of disbelief as they walked down
the hallway to the scullery.
“Well, this is a surprise, Isabella. What
are you doing dressed like this? Silvia is your maid, isn’t she?
Isabella set about preparing a pot of tea.
“Oh, it’s a long story, Claudia. When Silvia
is away, you know her aunt’s not well: she is dying as far as I understand. It
seems I let things go around the house. Reginald has mentioned it and, well,
Silvia made some suggestions.”
Isabella pulled the yolk of her bibbed
apron to one side and pointed to her name embroidered on the bust of the maid’s
dress.
“Silvia’s little joke.”
Claudia stood from her chair and ran her
fingers down the rough fabric of the heavy woollen dress and glanced at the lace
trim of the petticoat below its hem.
“Are you wearing all Silvia’s clothes? Her
underwear as well?”
Isabella blushed slightly.
“Well... yes, it is more comfortable.”
Claudia smiled.
“And does Reginald know you are playing at
being a maid?”
Isabella, a little hurt by the remark,
placed the tea pot down on the table.
“I’m not playing Claudia, I have been
cleaning and everything around you in this kitchen is spotless. All the pots are
clean, nothing is out of place. I’m doing a really good job.”
Claudia started to pour.
“Well, it’s nothing like you, Isabella. Anyway,
the postman gave me this on the drive. It has a foreign stamp on it, I presume
Reginald is away again?”
Isabella took the letter, opened it and
started to read, then sunk slowly into her chair.
“Oh, no! Bloody work! Reginald is going to
visit some plantations in Africa. He won’t be back until the end of the month.
That will be four more weeks!”
Claudia pushed Isabella’s cup of tea
towards her.
“Perhaps something stronger?”
Isabella sighed
“Yes, I think so, you know where it is.”
Claudia returned with a bottle of wine and
two glasses. The bottle was opened and soon drained. Claudia and Isabella
laughed about Silvia having the Mistress of the manor working as her own maid.
Claudia watched Isabella in her maid’s
uniform tidy away the teapot, cups and glasses, wipe the table and place the
empty wine bottle into the trash, a wicked smile on her face. Isabella was
always immaculately dressed and manicured, her hair perfect. However, today she
looked plain and ordinary, just like a common maid, just like a real maid
should. Claudia had always harboured a
modest degree of jealousy about Isabella, her looks, her wealth, being a Lady
and the wife of a Lord.
“Isabella, I was just thinking… With
Reginald being away until the end of the month…If you want I can come and stay
and I must say you seem very much at home being the maid, but a maid without a
mistress? “
Isabella turned from the sink and looked
at Claudia. Was she being serious? Was she suggesting that she would be her
mistress?
Claudia watched a soft blush grow across Isabella’s
face. Isabella did not say a word.
“Oh, dear you would like that, wouldn’t
you? Wouldn’t you just? Well, well, my pretty maid. Perhaps that is just what
we should do.”
Isabella squirmed uncomfortably, her
fingers fidgeting about her apron, her blush now in full bloom.
“Don’t be silly, Claudia. I am not a
maid.”
Claudia sensed Isabella’s obvious unease
but also noted that her suggestion was not dismissed out of hand and pushed
forward with a thinly disguised threat of exposing Isabella’s dalliance at
being a maid.
“Silly, it won’t be silly, Isabella. It
will be our little secret, we wouldn’t want anyone else to know what you have
been doing, would we, dear? I am sure I will make a good mistress for you and
you… Well, you will make a perfect maid, won’t you?”
Isabella was feeling awkward and unsure. The
prospect of what Claudia was suggesting had never crossed her mind. She couldn’t
allow Claudia to become her Mistress in her own home? A tinge of excitement started to build within Isabella,
her mind was in turmoil. Then the thought of Claudia exposing her, telling the entire
village what she had seen, telling Reginald, telling Silvia that she had not
only been wearing the maid’s dress she had prepared but her underwear as well?
Isabella stuttered, her palms clammy.
“But, but… But I am not a maid, Claudia.”
Claudia stood and walked close to Isabella,
her heady expensive perfume flooding Isabella’s senses. Isabella
meekly lowered her eyes whilst Claudia adjusted the lacy collar of Isabella’s
maid’s dress.
“Oh, yes you are, Isabella, and you are
going to be my maid. It’s what you want, isn’t it? I knew it as soon as I
mentioned it and so did you.”
Isabella started to quiver, feeling
Claudia’s soft fingers gently raising her chin and looked into Claudia’s
smiling eyes. It was true she did want it, now more than anything else. The
Rubicon had been crossed and they both knew it.
Claudia stood back and smiled breaking her
gaze.
“So,
I will return at eight for dinner. We will discuss your terms of service then.
Is that understood, GIRL?”
Isabella looked at Claudia, her knees weak.
She was hardly able to speak and whispered her response: “Yes.”
Claudia smirked and picked up her purse,
leaving Isabella panting as she leaned against the sink.
Hearing the door close behind Claudia, Isabella
wobbled to the kitchen table and sat to contemplate what she had done, what she
had agreed to!
When Claudia arrived back at her house in
the village she picked up the telephone.
“Hi, it’s Claudia, Reginald. Is Silvia
there with you? Good, put her on, will you?”
“Silvia, yes everything went well, yes,
she was even wearing your underwear, you were right about her, your notes must
have done the trick,’’ she declared excitedly. “No, I didn’t but give it time I
will have her in my bed, don’t worry. No, not yet, going back tonight, she is
making dinner I will sort everything then. Don’t worry, she is hooked; enjoy
the rest of your holiday with Reginald, she will be ready when you return. Bye.”
seems like a good story looking forward to the next part
ReplyDeleteA beautiful start. Awaiting the next installment , you have my interest.
ReplyDeleteThank you
Isabella
It is appropriate, nay unconscionable that one who fashions herself a lady be permitted to waltz about a vast estate at her leisure when there is a young debutante lying in wait. Common decency would suggest she have stepped down by now from her elevated position. Putting the old cow out to pasture at this juncture is sure to be a most tormentous affair. However, if she were to be led by the carrot of her own imagining, she may yet also begin chewing the sod of her own volition. This is a most devious scheme, Jackie J. and hopefully, perchance, the dalliance will commence forthwith.
ReplyDeleteMy best regards.
Once again Jackie J you lead us in nicely with another of your tales... :)
ReplyDelete'Great beginning, as usual, Jackie J!
ReplyDeleteIn her question to Isabella, "Is that understood, GIRL?", Claudia could have added with a smirk the following mistress-like instruction to assert the subjugation in process, by saying, "And furthermore when I return, maid, I shall expect from you a formal curtsy in acknowledging my presence, and you shall address me as 'Mistress'. Is that clear, Girl?" Of course, how could poor Isabella have answered otherwise, if not in the affirmative?
With the "good" Lord of the manor having an affair with the real maid Silvia, and supporting her pretense of concern for her supposedly ailing aunt, it would indeed be prescient for Isabella to have perceived the intended outcome, and to have prepared for her longer term job security, as mere maid and cuckold to her former husband in cahoots with 'Bella's' new mistress, Sylvia. ;) Best wishes.
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ReplyDeleteThank you all for your kind comments
I cannot wait myself to see how this story unfolds
Hugs and Kisses
Jackie J
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A wonderful start, can´t wait to see the continuation.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story can't wait till the next part
ReplyDeleteIf I may be so bold, I’d like to make a few comments on your story.
ReplyDeleteThere are aspects of the story I like, and aspects I don’t like. Let me first consider the specific aspect I don’t like.
It seems to me that in a traditional L2M story, there are two key turning points: When the lady agrees to be a maid, and when the lady realizes that she’s trapped in servitude. In your story, Lady Penrose essentially agrees to become a maid in the first chapter. This is way too soon in my opinion. This turning point should be later in the story.
Now, let me turn to the aspect of your story that I really like—I mean REALLY like. You have made an simple observation that I never noticed before. In particular, a maid, among other things, is someone is is under the supervision of a mistress, or a master, or a housekeeper, or the such.
In your story, Isabella is acting as an unsupervised maid. This of course will never do in an L2M story. You resolve this issue in chapter 1. However, I think this could be stretched out for at least another chapter or more and would make for a much more interesting story.
Let me give some examples of how this aspect of the story could be stretched out. When Claudia shows up, she tells Isabella that she is unsupervised and needs a mistress. Isabella demurs, claiming that she sees no need for supervision. Claudia then suggests that they do a walk thru of Isabella’s efforts at cleaning. As they walk along, Claudia casually produces a white glove and runs it over various surfaces such as a mantelpiece and shows the soiled glove to Isabella. Claudia comments that she would never tolerate sloppiness like this from her maid. Defensively, Isabella finally agrees that she might benefit from periodic inspections by Claudia of her efforts but still sees no need for supervision. At this point, Claudia leaves for home, but first removes the white glove, hands it to Isabella, tells Isabella that it soiled because of Isabella’s sloppy housekeeping and that she expects Isabella to have it cleaned and pristine by the time Claudia arrives the next day for an inspection.
Another example. When Claudia arrives the next morning, she comments that the staircase leading to the from door is looking a little filthy and that it would benefit from the application of a donkey stone [see the Wikipedia for a discussion of donkey stones]. Thus, Claudia is subtly beginning to add chores to Silvia’s list.
Still another example. When Isabella inspects Silvia’s room and finds the uniforms, they don’t have Isabella’s name embroidered on them, rather Isabella’s name is on small pieces of paper pinned to the uniforms.
when Isabella casually mentions this to Claudia, the latter assigns Isabella the task of embroidering her name to the uniforms. This strikes me as deliciously ironic.
Claudia never seems altogether happy with Isabella’s efforts, much to Isabella’s dismay. Claudia finally declares that Isabella’s efforts at self-supervision are not working and that Isabella should either abandon her attempts at being a maid or should accept supervision. Presumably, Isabella is sufficiently browbeat by this time to accept supervision.
I’m sure you can think of other examples.
Do what you will with these suggestions. I will not be offended if you totally ignore them.
T. H. Enerdly
Hi Th.
ReplyDeleteI have much respect for you and your writing and your comments above are welcomed and appreciated thank you.
One of the aspects of releasing a story in single chapter form is that whilst the first chapter introduces the main characters, but often not all, it is difficult to any other than the author to see what lies beyond. This often already written or in the mind and imaginings of the author.
This is good in many ways in that it offers the reader to place their own scenario’s going forward that will either be confirmed or not when subsequent chapters are published and the story is brought to a conclusion.
With Lady Penrose not all the ingredients to this story are yet in the mixing bowl let alone taken to the oven to cook. I ask with good grace that you let the story unfold and hopefully your reservations will be answered.
I agree that it is that tantalizing tipping point, when the waters close above the Lady’s head and she his lost in her sea of subjugation that is the cornerstone of L2M stories. But getting to this point, the manipulation, the cunning, the naivety these are the aspects that I like to read and explore.
Thank you again for your comments and suggestions.
I have read again through chapters 2 and 3, written some time ago and already with Camille. Chapter four and beyond is being written. I do hope when the story is finished it reads well.
On one specific point Silvia did embroider “Isabella” on the maid’s dresses left for Lady Penrose and I know that Claudia will have Lady Penrose unpick the first three letters quite soon.
Hugs and Kisses
Jackie J
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Jackie J i have to say your ability to paint a picture for the readers minds eye is exquisite.
ReplyDeleteYour presenting of the foundations of the scenario for the next part of the story, just created in me a feeling of being drawn further and further into it, and a nice feeling it was too i might add.
The simple yet very potent phrase of "Is that understood, GIRL?” just sets the power exchange dynamic beautifully.