by Noƫlle Lague
(Freely based
on "Maid in China" by Barefoot Servant)
XI - A suitable haircut
Drowning in humiliation Maddie was dragged by Heather
toward the big entrance of the house. Jenny, Skye and Graham stood waiting,
waving with beaming smiles at the door. Maddie curtsied in front of them.
”Oh Pudgy, is that Chanel or Armani? Can´t wait to see
your new hairstyle,” Skye taunted.
A shamefaced Maddie followed Heather out the door, the
clacking of Heather´s heels accompanying the strong rustling noise produced by
Maddie´s rainwear.
Heather parked right outside the beauty parlor. Looking
at the sign she snickered: ”Beauty parlor”. Probably not an appropriate name in
relation to what was going to take place in there today, she thought, smiling
to herself.
Linda, the hairdresser, who had been prepared for
Maddie´s visit, greeted
Heather with a hug before turning towards Maddie.
”And what do we have here?….I didn´t know we had a
thunderstorm,” Linda teased with a feigned confused expression, adjusting the
shoulder straps.
”It´s not even raining, Heather.”
”It´s her, Linda, Maddie Akers, yes, you wouldn´t
think, but she´s actually one of my classmates,” Heather said caressing
Maddie on the cheek.
Linda, fidgeting on the sou´wester, intensively
studied her newfound inferior. Maddie, her mouth half open, tried to hold her
head in an upright position, as instructed by Heather, but avoiding eye contact
with Linda.
”And now she has signed up for a summer of service,
right?”
”That´s right, Linda. Maddie wanted so badly to come
with me to China. Huh, Maddie?”
”Yes, Miss Heather,” Maddie answered curtsying.
”But, after having asked her parents if they had the
money to pay for her trip, she realized they couldn´t afford it. Right, Maddie?”
”Yes, Miss Heather.”
”And then I came up with the idea of proposing Maddie to
work as a maid for my family in China for the whole summer. Maddie said
yes without hesitation, she wanted to be our maid. She shortly thereafter
signed a contract, and ever since my birthday party she has been working as our
family´s maid, and she will be for at least the whole summer. Isn´t that so
Maddie?”
”Yes, Miss Heather.”
”She has just started her adventure. As I said, Maddie
willingly accepted to become my family´s maid, but obviously didn´t understand
much of the significance of such a social station. Struck by the strictness of
the rules imposed on her, from dress code and manners to tasks, she immediately
started complaining and behaving badly. As Maddie´s having great difficulties
with the simplest tasks she´s being disciplined and held in tight reins by me
and Jenny, my mother and our maid Rosario, a woman of my mother´s age. Isn´t that so little one?”
”Yes, Miss Heather,” Maddie answered, still curtsying.
”That sounds good,” Linda said.
”Maddie, I want you to tell Linda why you´re wearing
such convenient rainwear.”
Maddie sighed, biting her lip and blushing.
”Yes, Maddie, that´s what you´re going to do,” Heather
continued with a motherly smile.
”I was talking back to Rosario…. and I shouldn´t ….and
because of that I´m being punished, Miss Linda,” Maddie said, curtsying again.
Linda stared at Maddie with a stern look.
”That´s right, Maddie. How do you feel in your
rainwear?” Heather continued.
”It´s uncomfortable, Miss Heather.”
”I understand that, Maddie. How do you think you look….
hot?”
”No, Miss Heather.”
”That´s right, Maddie. You look ridiculous, stupid.
But then, that´s what you are, not true?”
”Yes, Miss Heather.”
”What are you?”
”I´m stupid, Miss Heather.”
”Good, Maddie. Yes, you are a stupid girl. Well, Linda, I think you get the picture and that we can proceed to correct Maddie´s hairstyle into something in accordance with her station in my family´s household and in line with her personality.”
”Come with me, Maddie,” Linda ordered her.
Maddie was seated in a chair, she was evidently going
to get her haircut fully clad in her rainwear, except for the sou´wester that
Linda ceremonially took of and let hang, still held in place by the straps
under her chin, down on her back. Linda leaned forward a little to get Maddie
attention.
”Maddie, the haircut Heather wants you to get is called pudding basin haircut. Have you heard about it?” Linda teased.
”Yes, Miss Linda.”
”I´ve never given anyone a pudding basin yet, it seems
to be quite unpopular, but I don´t think it´s going to be surprising to anyone
that you´re the one getting first dibs on it, it will suit you perfectly well
Maddie.”
Linda started energetically humidifying Maddie´s quite
long hair before combing it from a spot
on top of her head, downwards. A bowl-like subject was now placed on Maddie´s
head, barely covering the top of her forehead and clearly respecting a
considerable distance to the ears. What followed was a vigorous chopping along
the edges of it. Linda, however, was careful to do it right, she knew that the
most important aspect of the cut was its potential to make Maddie´s thick brown
hair look almost like a wig, deprived from the small irregularities that gives
life to it. Linda was a true virtuoso, the sharpness of the cutting was precise
and the first preview of the result as she removed the bowl, was stunning
already, it gave a promising hint of what would be the final effect.
Heather beamed a broad smile and met Maddie´s
eyes in the mirror. Maddie´s face screamed mortification. The maneuver had
taken only a couple of minutes but the transformation was already overwhelming.
Linda wasn´t at all finished though. The next step was to shave Maddie´s nape
all the way up to the chopped off limit, before proceeding to the final
time-consuming touch, her hair was to be dyed brown to blonde. Maddie had more
than an hour to contemplate her humiliating haircut, the degrading treatment
she was victim to at school and her new station at the Kim´s.
Looking at
herself now and then in the mirror sent her down to a self-esteem at rock
bottom, Maddie was beyond tears. As Linda finally uncovered her hair, Maddie
couldn´t resist studying her appearance. Instead of revolting, Maddie´s eyes
began to wet. She choke a scream and started helplessly crying, she knew she
was going to be the perfect laughing-stock, Linda had given her a hilarious
look.
”Stand up straight Maddie and thank Linda for your
haircut,” Heather ordered her.
”Thank you, Miss Linda for my haircut,” Maddie
obediently repeated, curtsying before Linda.
She did it with an expression of suppressed anger.
Heather noticed it and quickly approached her.
”I like it very much, Miss Linda,” Heather ordered her
to say, clearly aware of Maddie´s mixed feelings.
Maddie fumed from indignation, still close to letting
out an exploding revolt, but she repeated the humiliating phrase.
Linda, also noticing Maddie´s trouble accepting her
predicament, felt an urge to put poor Maddie in place.
”Oh, Maddie, you´re welcome. Now, I understand that
can´t be easy being treated like a little child when you think you´re a big
girl,” Linda said, caressing Maddie on the cheek.
”You want to be grown up, and you want to act like one
too, but no no no, you´re not, you fail to do so, don´t you little one? Well,
of course, in a strict physical meaning yes, you´re a biiig girl, Maddie.”
Linda gave her a swat on the butt.
”Yes, Maddie is definitely a big girl, but she needs to be treated like a
toddler, and now she finally looks like one.”
Maddie finally reached the state of mind where Heather
wanted her to be, reduced to tears.
”But now it´s bye-bye,” Linda said, waving to Maddie.
Heather dragged her out of the salon. A thoroughly
humiliated and teary-eyed Maddie was forced to smile and wave back at Linda.
”And please let me know if she´s not the obedient
pudding she needs to be, Heather,” Linda chuckled.
”Sure.”
***************
Maddie was met by Skye, Graham, Rosario and Jenny as
she entered the Kim´s house. A short and powerful laughter filled the entrance,
but Jenny interrupted it.
”God, Heather, are you sure you´re not …..to harsh on
her?”
”Of course not, Jenny, and she knows it.”
XII - In love
Dave took a step back.
”Is that ok with you, Frank?”
With a despondent expression Frank looked up at Dave.
”Listen, we just can´t make another take of it, at
least she spit out her line this time.”
”You´re right, it´s not going to be any better, we´ve
got some incredible shots though, she´s at her best when she simply acts
herself.”
Dave sighed and, trying to muster courage, turned to
the whole crew.
”Ok, everybody, thanks for now, that truly was a great
shot.”
Audrey, detecting without trouble the discrete irony
in his voice, shared an amused grin with Dave before glancing at her
co-star.
”See you all in a couple of hours, the dinner is as
usual at The Naughty Piglet and,” Dave lowered his voice to catch attention,” Amanda
promises the cocktail party will be something out of the ordinary, so please
stay for that. Oh, and don´t forget…….. come dressed up.”
Laughter accompanied the clapping of hands as the crew
began to slowly leave their positions, Frank approaching Dave.
”I heard that there will be no music in the film,
Dave, is that true?”
”That´s right, Frank, the sound track is loaded with
music in fact, voices, sounds of breathing, moaning, and so forth, why cover
it? People will be shocked anyway, way not emphasize it?”
”Hm, ok. But hey, how about a fragment of `La forza
del destino´?”
They both burst out in laughter.
”And what about China?” Frank continued, smiling
broadly.
”Mom says it´s too expensive,” Dave theatrically
answered, imitating `Maddie´ with accuracy.
Leah waddled over to Dave.
”Was I ok, Dave?”
”Oh sure, Leah, don´t worry, this will be a touching
movie.”
”Guess if I want to get out of this darn rubber
prison,” Leah muttered.
”Well, I´ve never been in there,” Dave answered
matter-of-factly, ”but that you can get rid of, your cute haircut is another
story,” he continued, snickering.
”Well….. Dave, I….” Leah stuttered, blushing.
Unable to find any accurate way to counter Dave´s
subtle teasing, Leah changed subject.
”Anyway, who is this crazy guy who wrote the script?
Have you met him?”
”To begin with, it´s a woman, Leah, but I´ve never met
her. Frank says she was very enthusiastic about your performance and she´s
apparently up to some new project. You can count on her wanting to see you in
one of the lead roles, er…as I understood it, not as a successful business
woman, more as some kind of a high school dropout.”
”I´m not at all interested, you should know that, I
regretted more than one time my participation in `Maddie´. If I hadn’t signed
that stupid contract, I would have quit ……months ago.”
”Well, it´s done now, Leah. Anyway, what are your
career opportunities for the moment? Dave asked, successfully hiding his
mockery.
”I ….I don´t know right now, but I will find
something, I have a friend who knows a guy who….. well, he works with
documentaries….er..ok it´s more like commercials maybe…..and …..ah…..it´s not like I fancy that, I´m an actress, Dave, I´ll act in real films.”
”I´m sure you will,” Dave replied with a discrete sigh,
whispering to Frank, ”Hollywood, right?”
Frank had to stand up and cough to hide his laughter
while, at the same time, Leah´s co-star approached them.
”Leah, please, could you come a moment?”
It was a cheerful Audrey taking Leah under the arm,
dragging her toward the dressing rooms.
”Listen, I thought we would get some champagne right
here, but no, apparently not. You know….I´m thinking that…… having been Heather
for such a long time, putting you through all these imaginable ordeals, I
really owe it to you to offer you a drink, please, Leah, give me the pleasure
to clink with you. Would you mind?”
”No, of course…..”
”Great! Let´s just do it right now, we can change
later, huh?”
”Ok, Hea…..Audrey”.
They both laughed, their respective roles had, to a
certain extent and for quite some time, slowly engrained their attitudes. Once
in Audrey´s room Leah motioned to take off her mitts but was interrupted by a
smiling Audrey who put a glass in her hand. Leah took it and gave Audrey a
stiff smile.
”What is it?”
”It´s whisky, Leah. Cheers, and thank you for your
performance.”
”Oh, thanks to you too, cheers.”
Leah didn´t even notice, but Audrey savored the small
but distinct curtsy Leah had produced as she thanked her. Holding the glass
awkwardly with her mitt-covered hand, she took a small sip. A short silence
followed. Audrey knew it was the right moment and slowly motioned to stand
behind Leah.
”You know…….Leah…..you´re not fooling me.”
Leah jerked her head, looking over her shoulder,
agape.
”No, you´re not, and not the spectators either. Yes. I
know it all. I´ve seen it, in every scene we´ve done together.”
Leah squirmed, panting.
”Yes, Leah….. the arousal.
Leah began to writhe.
”Your arousal.”
Audrey slowly motioned to yet again stand in front of
her. Leah was petrified, unable to speak.
”I´ll take that glass,” Audrey calmly said, placing
both glasses on the table.
The room froze as Audrey approached Leah, with her
fingers carefully bringing her face slightly upwards, slowly and tenderly imposing her lips on hers, forcing Leah to
let Audrey invade her mouth with her tongue. A shocked Leah tried to move her
head aside.
”Audrey….what….please….”
With her fingers under Leah´s chin, firmly bringing
Leah´s mouth back to hers, Audrey again assailed her with kisses. Leah, about
to lose control of the situation, drowning in the eyes of her beautiful
colleague and tormentor, helplessly submitted to her. Audrey kept on until she
had Leah shivering of pleasure.
”Good Leah. You know, it´s funny, in the movie, Maddie´s
made to sign a contract which turns out to be extremely disadvantageous for
her, remember?”
”Yes, Audrey.”
”Yes, Mrs Raven.”
”Yes…Mrs Raven.”
”Good.”
Audrey stroke her blushing admirer on the cheek.
”The funny thing is that you signed a likewise
miserable contract in real life, with the production company. Not only you´re
not paid at all, you also agreed to also play the, well yes, it´s called lead
role, but you know what I mean…… the poor target, the suffering, stupid girl,
in the coming movie. No pay there either,” Audrey announced.
Audrey motioned toward an easy chair. Making herself
comfortable she started to take off her panties. Spreading her legs she made a
sign to Leah to approach her.
”No, on your knees Leah, hands on your back.”
With tears in her eyes, Leah complied. Soon her face
was buried between Audrey´s legs, her
mouth on duty, obediently licking and kissing Audrey`s intimate parts. Leah was
drowning in humiliation, but she also felt, more than anytime during the film
shots, owned and curiously comfortable. Audrey´s pleasure went little by little
all the way, and once over the edge, she smiled happily as she let Leah stay
with her mouth open, pressed against her belly.
The aftermath was long, Audrey
let out some small moans of delight before suddenly pushing a ballgag into Leah´s
mouth, securing it behind her neck. Leah was invited to sit on a small wooden
chair. A wide-eyed Leah stared at Audrey as she pulled her arms behind her
back, binding them together. Soon her
ankles and knees were strapped together and secured to the chair, and finally a
strap linking the ballgag to her arms, forcing her head in an upright position.
Leah squirmed and wanted to scream, but she was thoroughly silenced and held in
place.
”There you go sweetie. I´m thinking of what excuse we should
come up with…hm…I mean, obviously
you´re not going anywhere right now. You´re not …….going to the party. You had
a terrible headache, that´s probably the best, you just had to go home, sending
your regards to everyone. And I´ll announce that you loved the script for the
next film, and that you´ve signed up for one of the lead roles, everyone will
know which one.”
Leah moaned and looked pleadingly at Audrey.
”Oh, is little Leah not content? Wait, honey, I got an
idea.”
Audrey left her bound victim. She was back in a
second.
”This was what you were missing, right darling?” Audrey
teased, holding her dreaded dunce cap in front of her.
”I know, your haircut is cute, …..you´re such a
show-off, Leah, I still think your dunce cap will give you a more natural
party-look,” Audrey continued, putting it neatly in place on her head.
Audrey went to move the full-length mirror and placed
it right in front of Leah.
”There, now I want you to look at yourself when you´re
not looking at the monitor where the party is displayed. Yes, there it is on
the wall. I don´t want you to miss out the festivities, you will participate in
your way, in a way you deserve. Oh… and, Leah, you´ll be filmed all night dear,
so, no, don´t make me disappointed, huh? It´s simple, when you feel bored by
your reflection, then look at your friends enjoying themselves at the party.”
Leah obediently stared at her reflection, her
humiliation sending waves of convulsions in her crotch.
”I know you´re now facing bankruptcy and, yes, I
understand just how difficult and painful that must be for you. And, oh, from
what I´m told, you´re career as a movie star is endangered, no big roles there
for you, huh? Only small commercials are waiting for you, and that´s definitely
not a par with neither your talent nor your pretensions, right? It all boils
down to little Leah being very close, in real life, to the character she was
acting like, don´t you think? Honestly, I feel a strong urge to be mild with
you, to help you. You will therefore become my little Maddie and work for me
full time as my live-in maid.”
Audrey adjusted the dunce cap once more.
”Now, you have a nice evening, Leah, I´ll be back
after the party, don´t worry, you will be taken home to me. By the way, the
script for the sequel is right here,” Audrey declared, putting the title page
of the work on the table next to the mirror.
It read; ”Leah” by Audrey Raven.
Leah glanced wide-eyed, blushing furiously at her now
real-life mistress. Audrey, in her elegant dress and her perfectly applied
make-up, gave the defeated Leah a beaming smile and a wave before locking the
door behind her. Leah tried to scream but stopped as she noticed it made her
drool even more. She was angry, confused and ashamed but also unbearably
aroused. How could she have signed that contract? Staring at her ridiculous
figure in the mirror she tried to squeeze her thighs against each other, she
was getting frantic.
Her legs being tightly bound together, Leah could only
intensify her arousal without being able to climax. Tears running down her
cheeks, still looking at her reflection, Leah realized she was not only facing
a life of servitude, disciplined to total obedience at the hands of Audrey, she
was also helplessly falling in love with her. Leah was suddenly interrupted in
her thoughts, as the monitor on the wall was lit. Some of her colleagues were
already at the bar next to the restaurant, all dressed up in fashionable
outfits, smoking, chit-chatting and sipping on drinks. A desperate Leah
reflexively and violently pulled at her straps, to no avail. She eventually
spotted Audrey, sharing a laughter with Dave.
Glancing at her grotesque appearance in the mirror,
drooling in her hideous outfit, before again studying the party aperitif, now
discovering Audrey, who was, almost as if she was staring into the camera,
affectionately kissing Dave, Leah, overpowered by jealousy, was ultimately
thrown down to the depths of degradation, where she knew she belonged. Casting
another glimpse at her own reflection, then again at Audrey, she felt, in her
heart, that her love for Audrey had to be of another kind. It was going to come
from the bottom, up to Her.
Twice a day, I come to see for the next episod. I love this story. Many thanks to the author and to Camille. Kisses, mia
ReplyDeleteThanks mia.
ReplyDeleteI check twice a day for the next episode also !!! Sooo great!
ReplyDeleteThat final scene...Leah being forced to alternate between looking at her laughable reflection (the garishly colored rain wear, the ridiculous haircut, the dunce cap) and video of everyone else at the party...absolutely brilliant! You have a real knack for devising humiliating scenarios.
ReplyDeleteIt was a nice twist at the end to learn that all the events leading up to the last chapter were
actually scenes being shot for a movie - but now Leah will have to really lead the life of the character she was portraying.
My only regret is that the story is now complete...we won't read of Mrs. Kim generously helping Madeline to atone for her sins!
Great job. Keep writing!
~joea1000
wow,what a twist for the end, i loved it! thank you!
ReplyDeleteThank you Maria and others for your encouragement.
ReplyDeleteCamille Mam is there any chance of Molly saga returns ??
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DeleteYes, definetely on my agenda. It won't be very fast, but I'll definetely get there, do not worry. If you have any ideas or preferences please do not hesitate to write to me directly, there are many ways the story can develop.
Delete"Japan princess to wed commoner, forcing her to quit royal family" is a headline that came out today.
ReplyDeleteI think marrying a commoner would be plausible reason for how an actual lady could end up in maid's uniform. Love makes people stupid. Maybe the sheltered girl will think it'll be "fun" to live like a peasant outside of the royal palace where she isn't pampered at all hours of the day, where her every whim isn't catered to or indulged in. Maybe when the magic of her matrimony wears off, her prince won't seem as charming. She really was foolish for going against every one of her advisors, wasn't she? Can she find a way to have the marriage annulled before her younger sister takes the throne in her place, or is it already too late? Perhaps this entire misguided adventure was her scheming sister's doing. She always was too clever by half. How else could one explain why a former princess would elect to become a scrub girl who has to meticulously clean the floors on which she used to walk?
I love it!
DeleteI would make it so that maybe the princess was a bit plain or naive, and her husband is a fit charmer. One they're married, he reverts to philandering and paying her no mind as she is forced to work as a maid to make ends meet.
Her sister will not permit her to work outside the palace because it would embarrass the family. So she is left kneeling at her wicked sister's side, fetching her coffee, and polishing her stilettos to keep her sharp for all her royal duties. From a princess to a royal house pet who cleans and massages as needed.
Maddie made maid is one of the best stroy I've ever read... Please write other stories...
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