by Andy Engines
The water was freezing as we plunged the sheets into
the stream and then out to scrub on the old flat rock at our side. I had learnt
to work hard and fast to get blood flow into my fingers and yet every time we
did this the old woman would look and laugh.
“Cold yes?” her eyes shined in amusement as we
scrubbed and she talked on, some words coming clear but the rest a blur. I was
getting proud that I could just about follow her monologue if she kept to
simple words and didn’t change the subject once I had grasped what she was
talking about.
“Yes… Cold… fingers… cold.”
Her eyes crinkled up and she guffawed loudly in
pleasure at my words. It was a beautiful day and the sun was still low in the
sky as we scrubbed and washed.
Summer had turned to fall and with it a new beauty
descended on our little world. The days became shorter and as night followed
day then so did our routine, we slept earlier and yet rose at the same time
each morning. Dawn would bring a chill that I was not used to and the morning coffee
became all the more seductive. Dawn also brought a slowly changing world full
of beauty as the leaves around turned to golds and reds. Richness displaced the
vibrancy of summer. I remembered a poem I had read and realised that summers
lease did hath all too short a date. I smiled thinking of winter and the spring
to follow with the darling buds of May.
I shuddered again and my daydream broke as I plunged
my hands once more into the freezing water of the stream. Soap scurried out of
the white sheet as we twisted it harder and harder and then released. I
couldn’t feel my fingers but then as we twisted once more I felt pain with the
effort. It was a good pain, I felt alive.
So much had happened and I still felt as if I was in
free fall but the cottage and the old woman had become my parachute, my safety
net. I felt secure and if I could have nothing else then secure was enough.
There were worse things that could happen.
Sitting in the little room feeling the warmth of the
fire and I felt into my pocket and touched the letter that I had read over and
over until I could recall every word. It had arrived by hand and the old woman
had just presented it to me with the words ‘It’s for you.’
It was from Marije. Addressed to Marije. To me. With
rest and warmth my mind wandered.
“Mark, its Val. Something horrible has happened. There
was an accident and….” Words poured from my mouth like bullets from a machine
gun and it took long seconds before I registered words.
“Val, slow down, I don’t understand. What’s happening.
Deep breaths calm down and start again.”
Step by step I recounted everything and even though
the idea of missing parts or twisting it a little so as to appear less foolish
were more than tempting I soldiered on. It amazed me as the words flowed from
my mouth just how stupid it actually sounded and just how stupid I had been.
The full impact of my situation started to really hit home as I transferred
memories and thoughts into spoken words. It was as if someone was writing in
the dark and then all of a sudden a light was turned on. My actions became
excruciatingly clear to me. When I finished there was a long pause on the other
end and I thought the connection had been lost.
“Mark are you there?” I could hear panic in my own
voice again.
“Yes, Val I am here. Let me digest this a little. Stay
on the line.”
There was the longest wait and I thought I could hear
a pen scratching away in the distance and then the questions started. Each one
probing and questioning for more detail.
Mark was the man who made everything happen. Silently
he headed a team of accountants and lawyers who had handled first my father’s
affairs and then my own. It was Mark who had headed the team that sold the
company, sold shares and then quietly moved money from currency to currency. It
was Mark who captained the ship of our fortune and it was Mark who had quietly
stood by in my times of depression. He had never forced any ideas or thoughts
on me, but always stood on the side watching like a big dog ready to protect. I
had never acknowledged to myself how much he did for me but now I was starting
to learn. He was the one man I knew could sort this problem and if he couldn’t
he would soon find someone who could.
“Ok, I think I have this down. Valentina listen to me.
Do not go anywhere and do not speak to anyone. I will reach out and find a
Croatian lawyer who can help you. I will send out Jimmy, he is good but cannot practice
in Croatia. Jimmy will set up a team with the Croatian lawyer. I promise we
will get you out of this. As soon as we have a name I will let you know but for
now sit tight. It will be ok. Understood?”
“I understand.” Relief flooded over me at Marks words,
one phrase kept bouncing back and forth in my mind. ‘It will be ok.”
Just under two hours later the phone rang.
“Val. Its Mark. Ok listen and write this down. A
lawyer is driving to you as we speak. His name is…” I could hear rustling of
paper as he paused, “Branco Gaspar. He should be there soon. He said he would
try to call you on this number but cell coverage is limited between towns and
cities. Jimmy is en route to the airport and should be with you in 14 hours but
for now follow Branco’s lead. He will take care of you. Understood.”
It felt so good having someone making proactive
decisions for once and I found myself relaxing a little for the first time in
days. “I understand. And Mark what about Marije? She is with the police now.”
There was a long silence that seemed to last an
eternity. “Val… My main concern is you, to get you out of this mess and safe.
Marije will get our full support and attention if anything comes to pass. At
present it looks like a shakedown because they know they can extort money from
you… The lawyer and myself think this will come to nothing. We believe it is
exactly what the police are stating but they are using it to line their own
pockets at the same time. Remember this is a poor country Val… and Val remember
that nothing has happened so far, sabre rattling for sure but we are sure that
is all it is. I am sure Marije will be back in the morning so for now we
shouldn’t do anything. Branco will appraise you.”
“Mark, do we know him? Can we trust him?”
“Yes, we can Val, the company have used him once
before and he is good. He is one of the good guys Val, he is on the team.”
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“Miss Van Den Berg, I am Branco Gaspar.”
The man in front of me could have been my grandfather,
he could have been anyone’s grandfather. He even had a tweed jacket.
“Please come in Mr. Gaspar, it is good to see you.”
I was struggling to maintain composure and for a
second I wanted to hug him, it felt like the cavalry had just arrived to my
rescue.
Well written story. I can almost feel the cold. Poor Val. beiing bullied & conditioned by awoman wh is also teaching the local lanuage too.
ReplyDeleteIts an intertesting approach is to have things that happened much earlier placed at tge end of the narrative, contrasting with what is happeneing now. My best guess is that her trusted money man Mark is working with Marija to steal her money with the help of the local authorities & also it is not unlikely that Marija talked Val into visiting her homeland. Val is not well know in many circles so Marija may take her place as the rich hieress Val & the real Val is being brain washed into becoming Marija. I wonder how far will it go? Will eventually Val will accept her new place, new life & identity & work for 'Val' as her maid? Looking forward to more.
It is a bit suspicious how Marije just appeared on her doorstep looking for work. However, Marije is described as an old woman, so if the scheme were that elaborate, wouldn't it have been better to find someone who can reasonably pass herself off as Miss Van Den Berg? This was mentioned in passing in a previous chapter and I would hope to find some resolution to that.
DeleteIf Mark wanted her money, I would think that he could've just as easily embezzled it. She's depressed and not all that concerned with what her parents left behind besides selling everything. I doubt she would notice if he was skimming some cash off the top. I don't think it would even raise much interest, what with her fortune reportedly increasing with each sale. It’s possible that Valentina only thinks she’s rich, as we often hear about celebrities suing their financial advisors or business managers when their money unexpectedly runs out.
Conspiring to keep her in Croatia would prevent her from making a fuss while he "managed" her money with investments into his own ventures or whathaveyou. Using Marije as a motherly figure might help in that, but I don't really see the need for her to pose as Valentina in front of the locals. Anyway, it's good to see Andy "Two-stroke" Engines getting revved up after a cooling off period.
DeleteInteresting to talk about. The first meeting between Val & Marije, Marija is discribed as a girl & after dying their haor can get by using each other's passports. The old woman you're thinking of is Val captor now.
ReplyDeleteWait, the "old woman" mentioned in chapter 2 isn't Marije? All this time I thought that she was.
DeleteI caught that she was said to be a “girl” in chapter 1, but sometimes woman and girl are used interchangeably, even if girl carries the connotations of youth. It was said that Marije left for America at 26, but I presumed a lot of time had passed since then, given that she was suddenly described as an “old woman” in the following chapters.
That's a big part of why their swap threw me for a loop, I thought Valetina is maybe in her 20s and Marije is pushing 60. A little hair coloring isn't going to do much of anything to close the gap.
DeleteLike, your date of birth is listed on your passport, so it would be doubly absurd for Marije to pass herself as 20-something when she's a senior citizen.
DeleteThis is the problem with chapter by chapter installments. As I read your comments fresh ideas flow and the plot twists again in my mind. I do have a plot but as before your points are excellent food for thought. I am quite humbled that you are all digging into the plot. Apologies for the break. I have had an absolutely horrible month but my mind is back in the game now.
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