by Jackie J
Clean panties;
make up applied, and a liberal application of perfume Madeline made her way to
the dining room. The Countess smiled when Madeline entered and took her seat at
the table.
“Madeline my dear
how pretty you look, that dress fits you perfectly.”
A shake of the
Countesses bell and Annie appeared and curtsied.
“Mistress.”
“Annie you may
serve breakfast.”
“Madeline will kippers be alright for you?”
“Madeline will kippers be alright for you?”
Annie raised her
gaze and looked directly across the table at her friend Madeline sat in one of
her own dresses and Madeline offered an unreturned smile.
“Yes, Countess. Kippers will be fine. Thank you.”
Annie curtsied and
left and the Countess smiled seeing a somewhat awkward expression on Madeline’s
face.
“Strange for you I
know Madeline seeing your once good friend now my housemaid humbly serving you
at table. Tell me, how does it make you feel seeing her like this aproned,
curtsying to her betters?”
The previous
evening with Annette’s and her own parents with her it was different it was an
occasion of sorts this was more mundane, an everyday situation, the stark
differentiation between servant and master obvious and clear. It had been the
same earlier when Annie served morning tea in her room.
“Well Countess I
must say it is a little awkward Annette was always one step ahead of me in most
things, not that she rubbed it in or anything like that but I always felt, you
know a little below her, status wise, Annette having more money to buy better
things.”
Madeline giggled.
“Like this
beautiful dress and the jewellery for example.”
The Countess
poured tea and moved a cup and saucer towards Madeline her eyes tightening into
a smile her tone soft and seductive.
“Indeed, well we
can’t say that about Annie now can we Madeline? I suggest you forget Annette
and accept Annie for what she now is having a status much below yours. That is
unless you have thought on the two options I gave you last night to be served
or serve with her, would like to trade that lovely dress for one of my pretty
uniforms tie on an apron and join your old friend to become my maid?
Annette’s parents will be leaving for France soon and are quite happy for Annie to remain a maid in my service, what would your parents say when maid Maddie was presented to them?
Annette’s parents will be leaving for France soon and are quite happy for Annie to remain a maid in my service, what would your parents say when maid Maddie was presented to them?
Madeline felt a
chill run through her unable to break her gaze from the enigmatic Countess and
gulped at the prospect of becoming like Annie the thoughts of her intense
masturbation following the Countesses gentle caress of her flooding into her
mind a dampness returning. She had to denounce such a prospect she must, but
remained silent.
The Countess
watched Madeline’s expression and her eye’s flutter and chuckled.
“Don’t worry
Madeline, just teasing you I have enough with two maid’s Lizzie and Annie are
adequate for Miss Jennings needs to run the manor.”
Annie entered
carrying her tray, curtsied and served her Mistress and guest with their
breakfast. Madeline had to force herself not to stare at the Countess what was
happening to her, why was she feeling like this, why was she, why was she OMG
attracted to her?
Following
breakfast Countess Polanski took Madeline on a tour of the manor house and
grounds, the pool, the gym, the tennis court suggesting that Madeline could
stay for a few days if she wished. Being invited to play some sets of tennis
with the Countess sealed the deal and with her mobile being unreliable, with
the poor signal, the Countess offered the use of her landline to inform her
parents.
Mummy, it’s
Madeline.
Yes, yes, I have. She
brought me tea in bed this morning and served breakfast.
No, I haven’t
spoken to her. The Countess told me I had to follow protocols and that you had
said I was not to be familiar with Annie being just a maid now.
No not today, the
Countess has invited me to stay for a few days I will let you know when I need
picking up. What, why, when you didn’t mention this before? Oh, I see hospital,
poor grandma, give her my best won’t you. No, I understand you go I will be
fine and I will see you when you get back.
No that’s fine
Annette’s clothes are here that I sent for her, we are the same size, well we
were Annie looks to have put on a few pounds.
No, I won’t get
involved with her the Countess told me how I must treat Annie whilst I am her
guest, don’t worry. NO, NO I won’t but what if I did would you look down your
nose at me like with Annie? O’ Mummy you are such a snob you really are I might
do it now just to see your face when I curtsy to you and Daddy.
Yes, I will take
care I am playing Tennis with the Countess later there is a court here in the
grounds.
Madeline blushed
even though she was on the phone with her mother’s next comment.
Yes she is, Mummy,
very pretty.
The call ended
following a few good-byes. Madeline’s mother and father were going to visit
Christine’s mother who was in hospital following a fall and would have to look
after Christine’s father who was wheelchair bound. It could be a week, two or
longer depending on how soon her grandma recovered from her fall.
When the call
ended two receivers were placed back on their cradles Madeline’s in the main
hallway and the Countesses who had listened to the conversation in the
conservatory.
The Countess
walked back towards the hallway.
“Is everything
alright for you to stay a few days at Sharston, Madeline?”
Madeline smiled.
“Yes, no problem
in fact. My Mummy and Daddy are going to see my Grandma, she has had a fall and
is in hospital.”
The Countess
approached Madeline and embraced her.
“Oh, you poor
thing, well you are welcome to stay as long as you need, it will be good
company for me.”
Still in the
Countesses loose embrace, Madeline looked up into her eyes and felt herself
melting in her gaze.
The Countess stood
back taking hold of Madeline’s arms and smiled sensing the unawakened wanting and weakness within her.
“Right tennis is
it young lady, let’s find you a nice tennis dress to wear, shall we?”
Taking the
Countesses hand Madeline was led up the stairs, passing Annie knelt polishing
the banister, to the Countesses rooms suitably prepared for her conquest.
When they entered
the Countesses chambers Madeline could not help but breathe in the heavily
perfumed aroma that filled her senses watching the countess draw down the
zipper of her dress whilst she strode forward towards an open door. In one
perfect movement the dress slithered from her shoulders gathered below her
knees and her shapely legs stepped from it. The Countess framed in the doorway
turned and smiled holding her disrobed dress in her hand.
“Come Madeline,
come.”
Madeline slowly
walked toward then through the opened door which the Countess gently closed
behind her.
Countess Polanski
surveyed her prey her tongue sliding across her glossed lips.
“Don’t be nervous,
just relax.”
Madeline unsure
wobbled on her heels and stuttered.
“But Countess,
Countess I, I, I, have never..."
Countess Polanski
lips pressed to Madeline’s and has her eyes rolled and closed Madeline felt
gentle hands on her bottom easing her forward to press her gait against a firm
thigh.
“Oh, no, please,
nooo, ohh.”
Madeline lips once
again engulfed, the feel of the Countesses tongue sliding like a serpent into
her mouth made her grab and cling to the soft bare flesh of the Countesses
shoulders. The Countesses stocking clad thigh working against her mound
Madeline’s weak leg’s parted and then gripped at the strong thigh between them.
Madeline was
worked back towards then laid onto the awaiting bed to be sensuously stripped,
her nakedness smothered in soft seductive kisses. Madeline squirmed and
squealed, writhed and bucked, moaned and groaned in unknown pleasures to the
Countesses expert touch.
Her head pressed
back on the soft scented pillows, fingers playing in her wetness, a busy thumb
toying at her engorged clitoris, a tongue licking long and languid along the
length of her neck to her chin Madeline’s back arched, numbness filled her
shaking body and she screamed out her release and submission to her lust like a
banshee.
Her pussy still gushing its appreciation
Madeline’s face was soon pressed between the thighs of the Countess and she
feasted in the flowing scents of her seductress. Her naive tongue thrashed at
the wet pink streaming folds tipping at the glistening pleasure bud in her oral
worship of the Countesses honey pot.
Left panting for
breath sprawled face down over the soiled sheets Madeline squealed when arms
wrapped tight around her waist and the wide girthed ridged, long dong of the
Countesses strap on drove deep into her. Skewered and bounced on the bed bent
double, her face into the pillow, her tits swung free whilst she was fucked
from behind until she hung limp in the Countesses possessive embrace. The dildo
slurped from her Madeline’s sweat slick body flopped down at a smiling Countess
Polanski’s knees. The tip of the strapon dangled to the quivering lips of
Madeline her eyes and mouth opened together and, without encouragement and
wanton expression, her lips wrapped around the hot sticky dong.
The dildo sucked
and licked clean Countess Polanski unbuckled the strapping and tossed the
device to the floor and smiled down at Madeline gently stroking the matted hair
from her face and giggled.
“We must play
tennis again, Madeline. You are very good.”
Madeline had never
been with another woman, had never felt like she did, had never been treated
like she had, been used like she had, her whole body was tingling and her mind
in a whirl of confusion. She had been with fumbling boys but this was so, so
different bordering on ethereal, magical even. There was no guilt or shame she
just wanted to be held and when the Countess nestled down beside her and held
her close she sighed and pressed her head into the Countesses firm breasts.
They lay together until the fluttering of Madeline’s heart and her breathing
settled. Madeline could not have known that this awakening, euphoric though it
was, would leave her a prisoner to her Sapphic desires.
Madeline and the
Countess showered together Madeline unable to stop smiling and staring at the
lithe toned body of the Countess.
Dried and dressed
the Countess did find Madeline a pretty tennis dress and told Madeline she
looked forward to seeing her wearing it on court later.
Madeline made her
way back to her guest suite in a trance like state and smiled seeing Annie
still busy at work with her polishing. Madeline was bursting to tell what had
happened but how could she possibly confide inner most feelings in just a maid?
Yay. Now dress up Maddie so you can confide with Annie about it
ReplyDeleteThe language describing the end of the last scene clashes very jarringly with the rest of this story’s prose so far.
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Renegade Spirit
Hmmmmm. I am wondering how Madeline can tell her old and dearest friend Annie about here adventure with the Countess, especially now that Madeline is way above the simple maid Annie? Well. Thank you again Miss Jackie. Cannot wait till the next chapter. =)
ReplyDeleteWell Jackie that got very Sapphic and graphic in equal parts, i think one could say it awakens the reader in double quick time.
ReplyDeleteMy interpretation of 'events' in the bedchamber are yet more power games by the Countess, showing her ability to switch from nobility to 'ravisher of fair maidens' and then return to ladylike genteel pastimes like tennis in a instant.
Regarding the way the Countess views the young ladies under her roof, i cannot help but think of the quote from Heather McVeas book - Becoming Forever
“You’re candy to her. Something sweet, but nonessential.”
The face to 'down cast eyes' meet between Madeline and Annie will be a special interaction and i for one am looking forward to it immensely.
Thank you Jackie for taking us on this wonderful journey.
Madeline will be the new young mistress
ReplyDeleteI hope that Lizzie takes the place and the role of housekeeper and Annie becomes the a lowly maid of all works at Sharston Very nice Thanks ML
I love it!
ReplyDeleteI quite liked this chapter. I suspect Grandma is fine :)
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I'm afraid my reaction was: who cares about Grandma!
DeleteIf Grandma isn't really hurt then her parents are leaving her to be the Countess' plaything.
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Camille and Jackie J : Was wondering why most if not all of your stories have an English flair? It's not necessarily a bad thing, but unless people are specifically interested in Victorian times or a British setting, it might be a little tiresome over time for some readers. Do you both live in the U.K. or are you from there? Please forgive me if I'm treading into privacy issues.
ReplyDeleteDo you think a British setting can be a put off for some? Never thought of it this way. I can't speak for Jackie J, but for me there is a strong association between Great Britain and class society with everything that it entails (including servants). Even if that society is gone to a significant degree and its largely a stereotype now (if anything, there are probably more per capita maids in the U.S. not to mention East Asia these days), I am still emotionally attached to the good ol' days. Ditto for my love of all things Victorian.
DeleteThis is only my personal take on this is, why would a author step outside of the area of their expertise be that in time, place or person, not suggesting the authors could not or should not, but i am strong believer 'if it is not broken, don't try to mend it.
DeleteI concur with Camille i am strongly attached to the era of servitude at 'The big House' that often were owned by titled folk, and Victorian times were oh so synomynous of this.
The class system is so British, it had a in built hereditary hierachy, which is perfect L2M material.
I would think, the reason for the English flair. Is because nowhere else is there a society with Maids and Butlers and such. At least in the normal way of life. I know here in America, we have maids in Hotels and such. But there might be few, if any real maids in service to the rich and powerful.
ReplyDeleteYou think so? You'd be surprised how widespread maids (admittedly rarely called "maids") are in the U.S. Who do you think is cleaning all the Beverly Hills or Greenwich mansions? Clearly not their residents!
DeleteNo. When is the next chapter I am having a not finishing crisis lol
ReplyDeleteGive it a couple of days please, on its way!
DeleteThanks so much for the great story. Love the story line and characters. I'm sooooo looking forward to the next chapters!
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