Re-published with the author's kind permission. Please check out Tservo's wonderful Deviant Art page devoted to body- and age- swap stories. I am generally not into magic in L2M stories, but this one is so well done I couldn't resist sharing it with you.
By Tservo96
By Tservo96
Maria Rodriguez opened the door quietly in
the crisp and dark early morning. She disarmed the alarm and began turning on
lights in the kitchen. She took off her coat and hung it up in the closet next
to the pantry. She tied on her white apron over her plain light blue dress to
begin cooking breakfast. Her long black hair was pinned up as always and on her
feet were her ever present comfortable white sneakers.
Breakfast wasn’t hard to get ready but her
boss liked a warm breakfast casserole to start off her day.
So once it was in
to the oven, Maria headed upstairs to begin getting the bathroom ready.
She laid out fresh towels and a fluffy
bathmat while lining up soap and shampoos, conditioners and lotions.
At exactly 6, she opened the door “Ms.
Reeves; it’s time to get up” she said as she crossed the room.
Abigail Reeves stirred beneath her down
comforter, her eyes covered in a mask as a milky white foot popped out from the
side stretching out.
“Good Morning Maria” she said in a sleepy
voice as she stretched her arms out above her head.
“Good Morning Ms. Reeves” Maria replied
“You have a very busy day ahead of you”
“Oh, I know” Abigail replied scooting up
into a sitting position and removing her mask “Please don’t remind me”
Maria smiled “I thought you wanted me to
give you a daily rundown”
Abby sighed “I do, but somedays I want to
wake up before responsibilities catch up to me”
“I’m sorry Ms. Reeves” Maria apologized.
“No need for you to be sorry Maria; I’m
the one who has to go, go, go all day”
“But it’s worth it in the end isn’t it?”
Maria asked as she straightened up the room.
“Is it?” Abby thought to herself as she
swung her legs out and she put her feet on the carpet.
Abigail Reeves was 26 and was heir to an
empire of business. Always ambitious, she had graduated with an MBA by 20 and
had been at her Father’s side since she was 15. Graced with a gorgeous face and
a body to die for; she was the face of the business now.
“What’s this box?” Maria asked as she
replaced a book on the desk by the window.
“I have no idea; it looks like my idiot
brother sent it but I didn’t bother to open it; I’m sure it’s more useless crap
from the wannabe Indiana Jones” Abby said crossing the room and going into the
bathroom.
Maria looked at the box quizzically.
Abigail’s brother Robert had scorned the family business and gotten a degree in
archeology. He was using his part of the family’s money to travel the world in
search of myths, legends and adventure. After a two year search for Bigfoot,
they had last heard he was in Chile searching for Incan gold.
There was no love lost between the
siblings. Their father had always wanted Robert to join him but Robert had
wanted no part of it ever. He left at 18 and had never looked back when Abigail
was just 13 but in the few statements he gave whenever the press discovered who
he was always showed a darkness toward his family even though no one could ever
remember him being mistreated in any way.
“Robert is a jealous fool and a disgrace
to the family name” Abigail called out from the other room
“Always wanting to
stir up as much trouble as he could…I have no idea why he would send me
anything now”
Maria lifted the box; it was very heavy
and she was curious as to what was inside. She slit open the tape along the top
but set it aside when she heard Abigail returning.
“I want my knee length black skirt and a
white blouse; one of the silk ones” she said and Maria crossed the room to the
huge walk in closet.
“Which shoes do you want Miss?” Maria
asked.
“I don’t know yet” Abigail answered “I’ll
decide that later”
Maria returned and laid out the clothes
smiling, all the while thinking “She’s so skinny…it can’t be good to be that
size”
Maria had never been mistaken for skinny.
Now 41 years old, she hovered around 200 pounds at a height of 5’1”. Her cheeks
were big and round and when she smiled, her dark brown eyes almost disappeared
in them.
She turned and went back to the closet to
pick out undergarments now “Do you want stockings or hose today Miss?”
“No” Abigail answered.
When Maria returned she saw Abigail
standing at the desk staring down at the box “Did you open this?”
“Yes I was going to; we should see what’s
inside in case it is something that might be dangerous or might start to smell”
Maria replied.
“Well just be careful and wash your hands
afterwards” Abigail replied turning her back to it.
Maria now opened the flap and let out a
simple “Oh”
Abigail sighed “What? What is it?” she
snapped not turning around.
Maria reached in the box and pulled out a
very heavy and elaborately carved statue made of pure Jade. “Look at this Miss
Reeves” she said putting it down on the desk.
Abigail turned “Oh” she said curtly. “What
is it?” she repeated with a curl of her lip and a slight look of disgust on her
face.
The statue stood about 8 inches tall and
had two distinct bodies carved back to back. Both women leaned in, examining it
to get a closer look at the amazing details. Both figures were female by their
looks and their hair but one side appeared older and heavier and being dressed
plainly in peasant cloth while the opposite side looked thinner and younger
with the extra size being made up of elaborate robes to make the size match.
“Young and rich on one side and old and
poor on the other” Maria thought “Just like us” she touched the younger figure,
gently running her index finger over it.
Abigail took a deep breath, her brow
furrowed as she looked at the statue. She saw where Maria’s finger rested and
not thinking this to be anything but a nice looking piece of artwork; she
reached out and touched the opposite side; the face of the older peasant woman.
Green light erupted from the statue
bathing the entire room in an emerald glow. Maria cowered down and put her
hands up over her head while Abigail staggered backwards, her eyes wide but her
mouth held tightly shut.
A high pitched squeal emanated from the
statue which sounded like a tea kettle about to explode. Then, the noise and
the light stopped.
Both women were holding their breath and
both blinked a few times realizing that the light and sound were gone and the
room was back to normal.
Maria straightened up and Abigail loosened
up, she relaxed her shoulders and exhaled before letting out a nervous laugh.
“Dios Mio” Abigail said.
Maria’s head spun and she shot Abigail a
strange look. What she saw was a look of shock on Abigail’s face “Why did I say
that?” she barely managed to get out in a very shaky voice.
Maria shook her head.
“What’s going on? I don’t feel right”
Abigail said. She grimaced and pressed down against her flat bare stomach “I
don’t feel good…” she shook her head making her long blonde hair whip back and
forth.
Maria stood motionless a few feet away.
She felt like she might throw up; she could feel her throat tightening and a
sour taste flooded her mouth “I don’t either” she said quietly as her stomach
flipped.
The statue began to glow; a low green
light built up from deep inside of it, starting at the base but rising up until
the whole thing brightened.
Abigail slowly turned her head toward its
unearthly radiance: She couldn’t look away and she realized her attention was
drawn more to the side she had touched when a bright flash of light passed over
her.
Maria had already been looking at the
statue from where she stood; directly in front of the side she had touched. As the
glow built up in intensity, she felt a deep instinctual feeling that something
was about to happen “Oh My God” she said as a bright flash of light passed over
her.
“Miss Reeves?!” she yelled out afraid.
“Maria?!” Abigail responded in an equally
fearful voice.
They stood across from each other with the
desk separating them, the statue on top in the middle still glowing a low lit
and sickly green color.
“Whoa!” Abigail yelled out suddenly as she
began to shrink.
“Miss Reeves?!” Maria repeated more
urgently as she began to rise up, lifting up and growing taller.
“AH!” She
screamed out and began to squirm and dance around in small steps.
“Maria! What’s happening to me!?” Abigail
shoved her hands to her head and pulled at her hair as she felt her body begin
to shift and move around on its own “This feels so strange! This doesn’t feel
right at all!”
“I know…I feel it too!” Maria said. She held
her breath suddenly as she felt her chest lift and straighten up. Her legs were
growing longer and taking her height up and she looked across the way at her
boss. “You look like you’re shrinking” she told her.
A look of shock was on Abigail’s face “You
look like you’re growing!” she replied.
Abigail was tall; 5’11” which meant she
had 10 inches on Maria but now “There’s not that much” she muttered out loud.
“What?” Maria replied.
“There should be like 10 inches between
our heights but there’s no way there’s that much right now”
“What do you mean?” Maria asked.
“Look at us!” Abby screamed.
Maria flinched at the sudden yell but
realized the point. She was used to looking way up at her boss but now only a
few inches separated the tops of their heads; and they were getting closer to
the same size.
Their jaws dropped as their heights evened
up. Maria looked her boss up and down quickly as their changes seemed to pause
for a moment while Abigail just stared straight ahead.
Then, Abigail shrunk down shorter than Maria.
She whimpered and a tear came to her eye “Oh God” she moaned “Oh God make it
stop” she pleaded as Maria continued to grow and she continued to shrink.
Maria was now at least two inches taller
and still growing but Abigail also realized that she was also still shrinking.
Two inches became four and then six inches
5’9 to 5’3”. “Are we done?” Maria asked before feeling yet another lift.
Abigail shook her head as she lost two more inches. The pit of her stomach
burned as a thought popped into her head “There’s your 10 inches”
“Oh Shit” Abigail said covering her mouth
in horror.
“What?!” Maria said scared of her new
height and not sure what to do.
“Oh Shit!” Abigail repeated louder “Don’t
you get it?!”
“What?” Maria repeated.
“We just switched heights” Abby explained.
“We swapped; we, um…I’m your height now and you’re mine…which means…”
Maria’s small dark eyes widened as Abigail
talked “Oh” she said.
“I think we’re switching bodies” Abigail
said.
“And lives?” Maria added.
Abigail went paler than usual.
Abby swallowed hard, she still felt the
unpleasant feeling all over her shrunken body. She looked down amazed at how
close the floor looked to her eyes “This can’t be happening” she muttered “I
can’t switch places with my maid”
Maria heard the words spoken, the final
one dripping with such disdain and contempt that it caught her off-guard. She
was speechless as she saw Abigail’s skin begin to darken and soften up as
weight now began to transfer between the two of them.
For every pound Abigail gained, Maria lost.
Abigail’s eyes went wild as she felt her
short legs begin to thicken. She looked down and saw them growing rounder and
larger. Her stomach began to puff out and her hips and ass began to spread
“It’s that fucking statue!” she said. She lunged for it but as her hands neared
it; the green light intensified and she found herself being shoved back.
“Ah!” she exclaimed regaining her footing
but realizing she couldn’t touch it. It pulsated, mocking her from its perch as
her body changed beneath her. “I’ll fucking kill you Robert!” she seethed.
Abigail’s feet puffed up on top and her
heels roughened up with white cracks coming out on her previously porcelain
skin. Her long and elegant toes shrank back and her pedicure vanished leaving
behind short stubby toes topped off by plain, roughed up nails with uneven
edges.
“Ah!” Abigail screamed out tapping her
feet up and down “Those aren’t my feet!” She looked over at the much taller and
now thinning maid “Take off your shoes!” she ordered.
Maria swallowed; her feet felt tight in
her sneakers and were getting tighter. She kicked her shoes off but bent down
to take her socks off. As the plain white cotton socks slid back, they revealed
long milky white feet with super soft skin. Her toes were long and elegant,
topped off by an expensive pedicure with light pink nail polish and perfectly
symmetrical edges and not a blemish in sight.
Maria gasped at seeing her feet and what
they now looked like. She posed them; it came naturally to her to gently lift
her heel and put her toes at an angle to get a good view of them at the end of
her suddenly long legs.
The paler color began to creep up her legs
changing her skin color there to begin with but quickly spreading out over her
entire body. She was pale and Abigail was dark.
The shape of her long legs now started to
change. Muscles tightened and toned up as cellulite and marks vanished away to
soft, smooth and trim legs. Her short and chubby thighs were unrecognizable to
her now as they turned long and firm.
“No! This is not happening!” Abigail said
as she watched Maria acquire her legs and feet “I am not some 40 year old
Mexican woman…I am not…I won’t look like you, I won’t!” she shook her head like
a child not accepting their bedtime “As soon as this finishes, we’re going to
touch that statue again and switch back. I am not leaving this room until I
look like me again! Is that understood? You’re not Abigail and you never will
be despite what’s happening to us”
Maria nodded and said “Of course” but a
thought came to her “What if it doesn’t work in reverse? What if this is one
way?” She looked over and saw how thick Ms. Reeves’ calves had become and just
how rough her skin was.
Abigail rubbed her hands over her lower
legs hard, really pressing down, gritting her teeth and looking very distressed
“This isn’t physically possible” she stated “My body just can’t change into
someone else’s. No stupid statue has that kind of power to manipulate flesh and
bone and muscle…this is just impossible”
But as she said those words, her perfect
thighs rolled out. Flab took over her inner thighs as they came together. Her
muscles loosened and her hips shifted further outward pulling her entire body
with them.
She grabbed at the softer flesh, now able
to grab and handful and pinch down.
She was just wearing a simple pair of
panties and a plain white tank top and now, those panties began to stretch out.
The seams bulged across her expanding hips and flesh escaped out of the back
and bottom as her ass grew.
Abigail’s eyes were as wide as saucers as
her backside became dumpy and shapeless; just a lot of jiggly and loose flesh
behind her.
Under Maria’s plain, pale blue dress, her
changes continued as well. The utilitarian garment was designed to show off
nothing but now, Maria hiked it up trying to get a view. She pulled it up to
her hips and stuck her right hip out. Her toes pointed and a straight line ran
all the way up her flawless leg. Her tight thighs shimmered as her hips sucked
in and rose up. She looked over her shoulder as her ass tightened and lifted,
rounding into the most perfect ass she had ever seen. It quivered in its
tightness and even the large panties she had on couldn't hide how desirable a
shape she now possessed.
Maria felt a tingle run from deep inside
her up her spine. The thick coarse black hairs in her pubic area pulled in one
by one until nothing remained but smooth and supple pale skin. Her lips turned
a light pink and moistened, glistening as they shifted and changed shape,
taking on Abigail’s.
The skin refolded and her clitoris lifted
and slid, throbbing in its readiness “Oh My God” she couldn’t help from saying
it, it simply slipped out as her hand flashed forward and pressed down.
Anger and disappointment and confusion and
red hot hatred all mixed together in Abigail “What’s happening to my body” she
mumbled as her hands bounced from her thighs to her ass and back again. She
squeezed and rubbed feeling the alien and unfamiliar textures under her fingers
“This won’t ever be my body; I am Abigail Reeves and I do not look like this”
Abigail shivered from head to toe. A deep
seated burning sensation rocketed through her body. Thick coarse black hairs
now poked out of her skin and curled up and became visible from the top of her
panties, which had ridden down hastily as her ass had dragged them down. Now
pubic hairs came out poking into the strained fabric. She stood up as straight
as she could and one of the seams popped along her right side. Flesh rushed
forward tearing it further as he lips darkened in color as they refolded as
reshaped into Maria’s shape. Her clitoris repositioned itself lower as her skin
molded itself around it.
Abigail’s manicured fingers spread out,
locked apart as they shot down to cover herself and press down. “Oh my God” she
echoed Maria.
Their changes had already taken care of
their waistlines but now their stomachs and chests began to swap.
Maria’s back trimmed and firmed up. The
excess fat along her sides sucked in, tightening up her skin as her stomach
pulled back, flattening out as it went. Her belly fat left her only to appear
across the desk on Abigail.
Abigail’s hands now went and grabbed ahold
of her excess belly fat even as it increased between her fingers. Her sides
developed rolls as her skin loosened under the pull of extra pounds.
Abigail’s jaw locked and she shook with
anger. She fixed her eyes on Maria across from her; Maria’s body continued to
trim and change into hers “She has my height, my weight, my legs…and soon
she’ll have my face” she thought. “I can’t let this happen to me. I can’t just
let her take my body while I get hers in return…nobody will believe who I
really am if she looks like me…how can I stop this? I have to stop this!”
Maria’s stomach was now flat and toned and
now underneath her plain dress, her plain white bra began to strain.
Maria’s breasts inflated; rising up and
growing large and into perfectly round globes. The flimsy hooks holding her bra
clasped behind her back began to pull back, popping one by one “Ooo” she said
as her nipples grew more sensitive even as they shrank down in size. Her
areolas turned pinker than their usual brown shade as her breasts firmed up and
perked up on their own, no longer needing the bra for support.
Maria’s dress jutted forward; the size of
her breasts seemed magnified by her contrasting flat stomach. She badly wanted
out of the extremely ill-fitting garment now. It had ridden up her longer legs
and the sleeves were up above her wrists. It had now become very tight across
her chest and if she were being perfectly honest with herself; she really
wanted to see what her body had become.
She reached up and unzipped the back
enjoying the cool breeze from the air conditioning across her bare back.
She pulled off the dress and gasped upon
seeing her body. A quick shimmy of her shoulders took her bra down and off her
arms leaving her in just the baggy panties. Her hands went to her new, large
breasts and she gave them a squeeze that took her entire hands to even try and
cover.
“Don’t you dare touch those like they’re
yours!” Abigail screeched, her hands balled up into fists by her sides “And
wipe that shitty smile off your face while you’re at it!”
“Sorry” Maria muttered with a shrug.
“No you’re not!” Abigail countered “You’re
not sorry about this at all!” she stomped her foot “You’re enjoying this!”
Abigail’s breasts seemed to deflate on her
chest, drooping and sagging and going flat against her chest almost blending in
with her larger stomach to just create a single front. She tried lifting them
up but her ill-fitting tank top was useless. Her stomach hung out from the
bottom and her pancaked breasts could be seen easily by both of them.
Abigail looked down as she felt her
breasts sag, a look of disgusted shock on her face when it came back up and met
Maria’s “I’m disgusting and ugly!” she cried out.
Maria pursed her lips tightly not wanting
to scream in Abigail’s disrespectful and cruel face. Granted this was obviously
a dramatic experience and change for both of them but Abigail’s insults about
what had been her body and life were not making her feel any sympathy for her.
Maria had worked for the Reeves family for
20 years; had known Abigail through all those years and had watched her become
more and more spoiled over the years. Her cruelty and condescension didn’t stop
with the servants, it extended to everyone she deemed lower than her. She had
been a spoiled brat as a child and had grown into an arrogant and aloof adult
but now confronted with the improbable loss of her looks and identity, she was
growing increasingly desperate “Serves you right” she thought.
“See how you
like being treated and looked at the way you did to me and to everyone. Maybe
this is happening as some kind of divine justice. I’ll make a better Abigail
than you ever were and spending some time as me will do you some good…teach you
some humility”
The changes now reached their shoulders
and arms. Maria’s lifted and rounded off while Abigail’s broadened. Abigail’s
upper arms puffed out full and soft while Maria’s muscles toned and her arms
trimmed down in girth.
With their forearms shifted, the changes
moved down into their hands. Abigail’s jaw dropped anew as her hands puffed up
and a dull ache settled into them. Her fingers shortened and her skin toughened
up; callouses built up and her manicure vanished leaving behind pale and banged
up fingernails. She had the hands of a working woman now.
Abigail passed her foreign looking hands
back and forth before her eyes. Maria was blurry behind them as she was focused
on her hands but she could see her staring at hands of her own.
Maria had brought her own hands up as a
tingling sensation settled into them making them feel like they had fallen
asleep. She flexed out her fingers just as they began to grow long and thin and
elegant much like her toes had. A matching pink polish appeared as her
manicured nails took shape atop her soft and slim hands “This is incredible”
she mumbled to herself waving her digits back and forth in a slow arc showing
off how little manual labor these hands had actually seen.
Maria’s neck lengthened as Abigail’s
shortened and thickened with lines etching in “Nooooooooo” she whined as the
changes reached higher and higher almost completely changing them into the
other.
Abigail stomped her foot in frustration as
she watched Maria’s chin jut forward and round off pulling her jaw line up and
back as it went. It cleared out the excess skin below eliminating Maria’s
double chin in the process.
Maria’s cheeks lifted and took on a high
boned chiseled look as her lips plumped and her skin cleared. Her teeth
straightened and turned bright white as her eyes widened and brightened to sky
blue. Her nose, which had been flat and broad at the base with a bump on the
bridge now streamlined into a perfectly aligned and placed nose. Her brow
softened and her eyebrows thinned and lightened dramatically. Even her ears
shrank down as her face changed shape and appearance.
Maria was aware of changes occurring to
her face but she watched Abigail’s changes with fascination; seeing the face
she knew from her reflection now appearing on another woman.
Abigail’s chin came in and down. Excess
skin and flesh appeared, giving her a second chin and a lower jawline. Her lips
thinned and her teeth shifted crooked in her mouth losing their applied sheen.
Her cheeks puffed up chubby and round, almost swallowing her narrowing brown
eyes. Her nose flattened out and broadened and a bump appeared on her bridge as
her eyebrows thickened and darkened, elongating and turning bushy atop a lower
brow and forehead. Her ears enlarged just as her blonde hair began to darken.
It started at her roots; the blonde
changed to black and grew out thicker coming up in length at the ends to make
it more manageable for work and Abigail now looked exactly like Maria.
Maria’s hair lightened to bright blonde
locks which grew down longer, tapering off in a professional style which was
touched up weekly and Maria was now, for all intents and purposes, Abigail.
The light intensified in the statue before
disappearing and turning back to its dull lightless appearance.
Both woman were in absolute shock at their
reversal of looks. Where once a tall blonde had stood, now a short and stocky
Latina was in her place and vice versa.
Abigail took stock of herself and Maria in
front of her one more time now that it appeared to be complete. Maria looked
like her from head to toe.
Abigail stalked around the desk, her short
legs pumping to take her right up to her maid. She touched her arm, poking at
it “You feel like me too” she sniffed the air “You even smell like me”
She stepped back though hearing her voice,
now tinged with an accent “And I sound like you” she said with contempt in her
voice. “I sound like my Mexican maid!”
Maria reeled back, her increased height
was causing her additional issues in sizing up her former body now so close and
so small in front of her. “And I’m Puerto Rican for your knowledge” Maria said
in her clear accent free voice.
Abigail grabbed Maria’s soft hands in hers
and clamped down. She dragged her forward, stopping at the desk “Touch it!” she
said forcing Maria’s hand forward.
Maria jerked her hand free from Abigail’s
grasp “I will” She stood up straight, throwing back her shoulders and sticking
out her chin “You don’t have to tear my arm off!”
“No…the less time I spend out of my body
and in yours; the better. You touch and then I touch it and we’ll change back
and then I’ll smash that damn thing into a million pieces and go find my
brother and kick his ass!” Abigail spit out.
“Does it matter where I touch it?” Maria
asked.
“Yes! Touch the side with the old woman on
it” Abigail demanded.
“I’m also only 41…I’m not old” Maria said
easing her hand forward.
“Well you’re old to me” Abigail replied.
Maria let out a sigh through her perfectly
sculpted nose “Fine” she said putting her index finger against the cold stone.
Abigail shook her shoulders and let out a
sigh herself “I can’t wait to get things to the way they’re supposed to be” She
shook her head, her eyes showing nothing but disgust “Make things right around
here” she put out her finger and touched the side of the statue with the
younger and thinner figure in the flowing ornate robes.
The statue turned black.
Both women’s eyes widened at the sight,
sucking in air of shock “I can’t move my finger!” Abigail announced. She tried
to pull her hand away but it was stuck and held fast to the statue.
Maria tried to pull her finger back but
found she was also unable “Neither can I” she said.
“What’s going on…this is even scarier than
before?!” Abigail cried out.
The high pitched whistling noise returned
with a vengeance. Both women shut their eyes against the painful noise; their
hands began to shake, vibrated by the statue.
The vibrations ran up their arms and into
their whole bodies and then, it all stopped.
The room got deathly quiet. Both women
wore a blank expression as their hands slipped off and they stood across from
each other once more.
Several seconds passed with no movement
until Abigail blinked and her neck twitched.
Maria licked her lips and swallowed as she
blinked and looked around, breathing again. Slowly she opened her mouth “Maria”
she called out.
Abigail looked up “Yes Ms. Reeves” she
replied horrified at her response but unable to stop herself from saying it.
Maria’s mind took off at a million miles a
second “Why did I call her Maria?! I’m Maria!”
Their jaws hung open as their eyes met.
Abigail’s chin dipped down to her chest as Maria’s chin went up and out. They
both knew things had indeed changed.
Abigail’s eyes burned as she stared at the
floor “We’ve wasted enough time this morning on this silliness” she heard her
own voice scolding her.
“You need to get dressed for your job. I
need to get ready for mine” Maria found herself saying even as her own mind
tried to catch up to the words coming out. “I’m going to go shower and…” she
stopped when she heard Abigail gasp. “What is it?”
“The statue!” she was pointing to the
desktop “It’s gone!”
“Where did it go?” Maria asked, her eyes
darting around.
“It just vanished Ms. Reeves” Abigail said
“I was looking at it and then, it vanished!”
Their jaws hung open yet again until Maria
simply walked to the bathroom and started the shower. She heard her maid
scurrying about getting her things ready.
Over the course of the next hour, Maria
found herself dressed in a pencil length black skirt, white silk blouse and
black leather heels from Italy. Her blonde tresses and make-up were impeccably
done as she marched out to her Porsche to drive to work. All the while her mind
reeled at what had happened.
Abigail went about her household duties,
acting out and working hard despite her mind screaming for her to stop but she
couldn’t.
Maria arrived at her office on the 45th floor
of the Skyscraper that carried her last name. She strode past her father’s
office never noticing the plain brown box sitting on his secretary’s desk.
Eve Lansing, long suffering secretary to
Franklin Reeves came to her desk and saw the box with Robert Reeves return
address in the corner. “What would Robert be sending here?” she thought as she
picked it up “It’s really heavy” she added as she split it open seeing the jade
statue inside…
Interesting story. A little clunky, but in a way that gives it a certain retro charm, reminiscent of WEIRD TALES-era pulp fantasy. It was disappointing that it focused so much on the mechanics of the physical transformation and didn't really deal with the aftermath. At any rate, it was a welcome break from the run of seemingly never-ending serials.
ReplyDeleteWell, 99 percent of stories here deal with the aftermath so I think it's good to have something focusing almost exclusively on the transformation. Interesting you'd mention Weird Tales, didn't think of that. For some reason this one reminded me of Robo's A Model Maid.
DeleteIn original story, it was a petite Chinese maid. As for thet weight gain, they are never erotic. Especially when they women become very fat
ReplyDeleteDepends on who you talk you! There is a huge weight gain community and its members would probably disagree that it isn't erotic.
DeleteI would have preferred it better if it hadn't been a complete change. As it is the writer might as well have said they switched bodies and been done with it.
ReplyDeleteI agree, a mind swap is generally a story-killer for me, but not always.
DeleteNo more ladies to maids bodyswap stories??
ReplyDeleteNot a lot of those out there. I can think of Borrowed Gown and A Model Maid from the top of my head.
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