By Charles Ryder
Stephen made me
very happy today. He explained how he was very impressed with my work under Mrs
Francis. She had apparently explained to him that I was now thoroughly
knowledgeable regarding all matters pertaining to the running of the house and
that consequently my services as a maid were no longer required. He also
explained that I should be schooled in the behaviour expected of the wife of a
senior army officer. He has discussed this with Mrs Francis and she is
apparently amenable to help ‘take me in hand’. He has also given Mrs Francis a
sum of money in order that I might be more appropriately dressed for my new
role.
“How long do I
have to wait before you tell the silly little bitch?”
Each word was punctuated
by a rhythmic thrust as I worked energetically on my Irish minx. I could feel
my manhood straining to bursting point. She was almost the exact opposite of my
juvenile wife, sexy, skilful and all the tricks of a whore, which she possibly
once was. At that precise moment I just didn’t care. I was right on the very
edge of a massive climax.
“Tell me again” I
whispered. “What are you going to do with Charlotte?”
She smiled at me
showing her beautiful, even teeth, stretching upwards she whispered the response
she knew I wanted. With a massive, euphoric rush I came enormously.
Charlotte
meanwhile was back in the City. She was trying on clothes again. This time
however they were not childlike. They were actually designed for children. More
precisely she was trying on for size a grey, box-pleated gymslip. She was
already wearing a starched white shirt, a tightly knotted red and white tie,
and a pair of tight blue knickers. She was trying desperately hard not to cry.
Mrs Francis had threatened to tan her backside if she as much as let one tear
escape. The true horror of her situation had slowly enveloped her. Mrs Francis
had carefully explained to her that in order to facilitate her re-education she
would be required to attend lessons dressed in a full school uniform. The fact
that she was nineteen was brushed to one side. In order to achieve maximum
efficiency a room in the house would be furnished as a schoolroom. She,
Charlotte would have to attend lessons given by Mrs Francis. Mrs Francis would
be given full authority over her as regards her subjects, discipline and
uniform. And Mrs Francis had decided that Charlotte should be attired in the
most humiliating uniform that she could find. Despite the warning her new
teacher had given her she could feel the tears welling once again. The
shopkeeper was bringing over a hideous red and white striped blazer and a straw
boater with a matching ribbon.
Two months had
passed. Charlotte was sat in the schoolroom trying to sit comfortably at the
hard, wooden desk. Her bottom stung abominably. Her skin-tight knickers only
exacerbated the situation. She had received a ‘sixer’ from Miss Francis for
inattention and now the stripes were throbbing. All she had done was to take
her eyes off the blackboard for a few seconds. Miss Francis, she preferred to
be addressed as ‘miss’ now that she was Charlotte’s schoolmistress, had called
her out and bent her over the desk. The scandalously short skirt of her gymslip
had been flipped up and then as directed she pulled her own knickers down to
her knees. The first stroke of the cane had taken her breath away.
“Aaagh, one, thank you Miss Francis.”
Whip.
“T...two, thank
you, Miss Francis.”
And so it had gone
on until Charlotte was a squirming, blubbering wreck. This was not an unusual occurrence.
It turned out that Miss Francis was a particularly accomplished disciplinarian.
The little shop in the City that Miss Francis had dragged her to had supplied
the woman with everything she needed. Whatever implement she selected was
guaranteed to reduce her charge to tears in double quick time. The cane however
was her favourite. So neat, so elegant, and yet so painful for the recipient.
Almost every day she applied some sort of punishment to her student. Not necessarily a severe punishment. Sometimes
she might apply a ruler to Charlotte’s outstretched palms, sometimes a couple
of open-handed slaps to the back of her thighs was deemed sufficient. Whatever
the choice the outcome would always leave the girl absolutely squirming with
embarrassment. Indeed, it seemed to Charlotte that humiliation was the woman’s
primary objective. Whenever she was taken out of the house be it with Miss
Francis or with Stephen she was instructed to wear her full uniform including
hat and blazer. They were both most particular regarding her appearance.
Charlotte
particularly disliked being punished in front of the new maid. At first, she
was punished in the privacy of the schoolroom. Although the spankings or
canings she received usually caused her to cry and shriek at least it was only
her and Miss Francis. When Miss Francis warned her that her unladylike
‘caterwauling’ as she described it would bring the maid’s attention to her
humiliating correction she tried very hard to control her grief. Mary seemed
unaccountably interested in her punishments. Even when they were in the same
room or corridor the Irish maid would look at her in a knowing sort of way.
Even after straitening her clothes and splashing her flushed face with water
the woman still knew she’d been spanked. As time passed however she noticed
that the maid would hover around the classroom more and more frequently. Even
her attitude towards Charlotte had become increasingly less respectful. After
the confusion regarding her status in the house had been resolved Mary had been
at least respectful to her. She had begun referring to her as ma’am, at least
when Miss Francis or her husband were within earshot. But as time passed and
her true status had become clear, so Mary’s attitude had changed. Now she would
grin whenever she caught Charlotte sobbing or holding her caned backside. Once
when she came out of the schoolroom after a particularly vicious application of
the hairbrush to her pert backside Charlotte had run slap bang into the maid
causing her to stumble and drop her coal scuttle and disperse its contents all
over the carpet.
An hour later
Charlotte was stood, arms behind her back, in front of her husband’s desk. She
was sobbing and her eyes were red-rimmed with crying.
“Let’s try one
more time Charlotte. Mrs Francis has told me that she spanked you with the
hairbrush for inattention, is that correct?”
“Yes sir.” When
she was dressed in uniform, her husband had decreed it was more appropriate for
his young wife to refer to him as 'sir'.
“Mary tells me
that when you ran out of the schoolroom, she sympathised with you but in return
you lashed out at her causing her to spill coal on the carpet. Is that a
correct interpretation of events?”
“N...no sir, most
certainly not. I accidently bumped into Mary and she dropped the coal. It
wasn’t my fault sir.”
“Didn’t you see
the poor girl? She was after all merely carrying out her duties.”
“N...no sir. My
eyes were f...full of water sir. I was trying to clear my vision when we ran
into each other.”
“So, you admit it
was your inattention that was the cause of the collision?”
“Y...yes I suppose
so, but my bottom it stung so much that I didn’t really n...notice her
until...”
“Enough please
Charlotte, you sound like a whining child. Do you accept that you were
rightfully punished for inattention?”
“Yes sir.”
“So therefore you
can hardly blame Miss Francis, can you?”
“No sir.”
“It appears to me
that if you didn’t notice Mary carrying a coal scuttle that is also
inattention. “
“Yes sir.”
“Despite being correctly
punished for that very same offence mere seconds earlier?”
“Yes sir.” He
noticed with a certain pleasure that she was beginning to cry.
“It seems to me
that despite the best efforts of Miss Francis, the lesson hasn’t stuck. Perhaps
you need a firmer lesson young lady? Run along and find Miss Francis and ask
her to join us in my study please, oh and Charlotte ask her to bring her cane,
will you?”
Charlotte could
hardly believe her ears, but she certainly didn’t feel brave enough to argue
with her husband when he was in one of his moods. She turned from his office
and literally ran. When she returned with Miss Francis she found Mary already
talking to her husband.
“Bend over my desk
please Charlotte.”
She looked at him
aghast. “But darling, what about Mary?”
“What about her?”
“Surely you don’t
intend to punish me in front of her, darling?”
“I’m afraid that
is exactly what I intend to do. I am going to ask Miss Francis to give you six
strokes of the cane across your knickers and you will thank her for each one.
Mary will witness your punishment because you caused her to spill the coal over
the carpet. Once you have served a suitable amount of penance in the corner you
will go and clear up the mess you caused, Mary will oversee your work.”
Charlotte looked
at him dumbfounded. She was to be caned over her knickers while dressed as a
schoolgirl, by her former housekeeper! And if that wasn’t shameful enough the
whole think would be witnessed by her Irish maid. But in reality what other
option did she have? With a sob she pulled up her little skirt and leaned
across the wooden desk.
“If you could do
the honours Miss Francis?”
Miss Francis
certainly could do the honours. The first stroke of the thin cane bit into my
wife’s delightful little bottom. She shrieked in pain, Miss Francis tapped her
again with the stick,
“O...one, thank
you Miss Francis.”
The second stroke
was, if anything, firmer still and had a similar effect. As I stood and watched
the weal’s raised on her already inflamed buttocks I was suddenly aware of
Mary’s slim hand stroking the front of my trousers. I was immediately hard, my
wife was facing away from me and was unaware of the attention I was receiving.
If Mrs Francis was aware, I neither knew nor cared.
“Aaagg...Th...three,
thank you Miss F...Francis.”
Mary had taken a
firmer hold on my engorged manhood, and I thrust my hips forward in
anticipation. Unusually for me I could hardly wait until the thrashing was
over. Normally I took pleasure in listening to me little wife squealing and
begging as she was punished. But this time I bundled Mary out of my office with
almost indecent haste and up to my bedroom. Both of struggled out of our
clothes and fell onto my marital bed together. I came in an embarrassingly
short time, but she was polite enough to ignore my shortcomings.
“Do you want me to
clean you Stephen?” whispered the little minx.
She slid down the
bed and started to take me in her mouth. She licked me down the full length of
my shaft. She suddenly appeared by my side again.
“Before I give you
a special clean Stephen, there is one thing.”
“What the hell do
you mean? Can’t you just get back to work?” I was almost begging.
She ran a
fingernail from the base of my balls to the length of my quivering tip.
“In return for an
extra special clean, I want to be the one who spanks her next. Do we have a
deal?”
From downstairs I
could hear my dear wife squealing as Miss Francis unhurriedly caned her pretty
little backside. I believe I would have promised my mistress absolutely
anything right at that moment, without giving any thought to my reply I
acquiesced. With a delighted squeal she kissed me and then resumed her position
between my thighs.
I returned to my
office thirty minutes later and was pleased to see my chastened wife still with
her nose pressed against the wall. Her skirt had been tucked into the belt of
her shamefully short gymslip and her delightful navy blue knickers had been
pulled inside out and down to her knees. She has six quite discernible stripes
decorating her backside. I sat at my desk and watched her for a little while
before I called her over.
"I must
apologise. my dear. My unfortunate duty should have been to stay and witness
your chastisement. The truth of the matter is that I couldn't bear to see you
suffer so. I sent Mary packing and then I retired to my study."
She sniffed a
little and tried to smile,
"Thank you
darling, that was very considerate of you. I... I’m sorry I wasn't paying
attention and I do hope Mary will forgive me."
"That's very
gracious my dear. I know she's only a servant, and an Irish woman but she is a
sensitive soul and is surely deserving of a little respect? After all, good
servants are so hard to find."
"I know, dear
and I will apologise."
"It may be a
good idea for you to do that now, Charlotte. Perhaps go down to the kitchen,
apologise to Mary and request an apron to wear while you clean up the mess in
the hall?"
She bit her lip
anxiously and looked at him as if he might be having a little fun at her
expense. She soon realised he wasn't though, and untucked her skirt and set off
reluctantly for the kitchen. She found her maid and her housekeeper sat
together at the well-scrubbed wooden table, eating cake and drinking tea
together like the best of friends. Both looked up as she entered but neither
made a move to stand,
"Yes, young missy?
Was there something you wanted, a little cold-cream for your burning backside
was it?" asked Miss Francis in a mocking sort of tone.
The dark, Irish
girl laughed in appreciation of the witticism.
"N...no, Miss
F...Francis."
"Then why are
you down here you fool, stuttering like an imbecile?"
"S...Step.
Sorry, Captain Darnley sent me to apologise to M...Mary, and to beg her
forgiveness."
The maid smiled
again and gave a high-pitched giggle,
"Apologise to
me, Miss Charlotte, whatever for?
Charlotte managed
to blush a deeper shade of red than at any previous time in her nineteen years.
"I...I beg
your pardon, Mary. For knocking you over in the hall, a...and spilling your
coal on the floor."
"That's so
lovely, Charlotte. But shouldn't an apology be accompanied with a little
curtsey? That's assuming your apology is heartfelt?"
"Oh, it is
Miss Francis. I am truly sorry."
"in that
case, let's hear it again but this time with a pretty little curtsey. And do
try not to stutter, you sound like a child rather than the mistress of the
house."
Both her
housekeeper and her maid looked at each other and giggled.
"I beg your
pardon, Mary. For knocking you over in the hall, and for spilling your coal on
the floor." She repeated the humiliating phrase and then curtseyed properly
s she had been taught.
"Apology
accepted, Miss Charlotte. I do hope we can still be friends?"
Only Charlotte's
good breeding prevented her from simply staring at the girl. Friends? Was the
woman quite mad? She was an heiress, the only daughter of one of Salisbury's
most important families. Mary was a maid who's family probably lived in a bog
in the middle of Ireland for all she knew or cared. She realised that both
women were looking at her expectantly and waiting for an answer.
"Um...er, yes
of course, Mary. We are still friends."
The Irish woman
smiled again but said nothing.
"If that's
everything, child, it's high time you got back to your lessons. There are still
plenty of areas where you're still behind, as well you know.
Charlotte flushed
again,
"Erm,
c...could I have an apron please, if you have one spare that is?"
"Whatever
for, child?"
"Captain
Darnley has requested that I...that I clean up the mess I caused earlier."
She looked at her shiny shoes and fidgeted with the hem of her pleated gymslip.
"Of course,
dear, no sense in getting your school uniform dirty is there? I still have your old aprons ironed and
stored away. I'll get one for you now.
Miss Francis went
out to the storeroom leaving Charlotte and her maid alone together.
"So, I heard
you get your caning Charlotte? You kicked up an awful fuss, did it hurt?"
Once again
charlotte was dumfounded. She tried to remember an occasion when any of their
African staff had been so rude. Her daddy would have simply thrashed a maid and
dismissed her for that sort of shameful familiarity.
"I..I...don't..."
They could both
hear Miss Francis returning.
"Maybe you
can show me your backside later on Miss Charlotte, when we're alone again
perhaps?"
This time
Charlotte couldn't stop her jaw from dropping open. What on earth did the
heartless vixen mean by that?
Somehow this story just keeps getting better and better!
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice thing to say, Keleigh. Thank you very much.
ReplyDeleteJust brilliant x
ReplyDeleteThanks MM, you're very kind
DeleteHi Charles,
ReplyDeleteJust Great.
I think Charlotte will spend a lot of time with her new friend and she'il be a good help in housework.
Thanks!
ML
Thanks ML, I think I love you just slightly more after that comment,
ReplyDeleteAnd I think you might be correct
Wonderful, thanks for the 4th part, I enjoyed it a lot!
ReplyDeleteCannot wait for Mary to spank Charlotte, and whatelse will happen...?
I'm hoping for a lot more chapters to follow.
Hi reader0815
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment
Mary will very probably spank her young mistress
And other things will definitely happen
Thank you for this beautiful story. The arrival of Mary is really a good idea ... I hope that we will be entitled to many episodes ...
ReplyDeleteThanks Mis, appreciate your comment
ReplyDeleteMy only hope is that Mary doesn't turn to be a cruel, manipulative bitch
I think that the beautiful Mary, very soon, will be occupied with much more important thoughts than having to clean and wash. Stephen and the house need a Lady. Mrs. Francis will necessarily have to find a young, humble and well-trained girl for the most tiring chores of every day.....who can be the new maid of all works?
ReplyDeleteOh, Anonymous! Now everyone knows!
ReplyDeleteBut thanks for your comment anyway :)
It's true, I wrote a silly and obvious post..... But the reason is that I want to see soon published the next chapter!
DeleteLol,I don't think it's silly or obvious.
DeleteWho knows what the next chapter may bring?
Charles an excellent continuation.
ReplyDeleteThat poor woman's bottom is evolving nicely into the bottom of nothing more than a Miscreant child. A child increasingly accepting of her deserved punishments and control.
Looking forward to the next episode.
Well written Charles
Thanks
Hugs
Jackie J
XX
Thanks Jackie
ReplyDeleteIt's always nice to hear from you. I appreciate your comments x
used to be some really good stories here. 2017 was great. some amazing stories were started. then they were never finished. the last few months here have been a trickle, and mostly disappointing. just 2 in March. i hope some of those amazing authors come back and finish stories like New Employee, Daphne and the White Apron and Maid in China...
ReplyDeleteDaphne was completed back in September. New Employee will eventually be completed hopefully, it's very close. No word on Maid in China. I am sure there'd be more stories in coming months.
Delete'the last few months here have been a trickle, and mostly disappointing.'
DeleteHi there, thanks for your support! That's the way to encourage new authors!
Charles, You should be spending your time working on Chapter 5 of your "sure to be a classic" story, rather than reading others' complaints! :) I am checking every day to find out what happens to sweet Charlotte...….
DeleteThe blog format of this site does not lend itself well to comments apart from those of the subject at hand. Visitors will often conscript the most recent entry to leave their unrelated comments, as that is where they are most likely to be seen. With that in mind, the offending message may not have been directed at the author of this particular story, nor was it necessarily criticism of any others. The disappointment this person experienced these last few months can be read as commentary on the frequency of updates, or lack thereof.
DeleteEven if one were to interpret it as rude, it is best to let it pass without responding in kind. Content creators who are antagonistic toward their audience almost always come off in a bad light. It’s hard to call someone an asshole without looking like one yourself. I would think less of Camille if she went off on someone.
See, I read it as a comment on the quality of the writing. And what his comment has to do with you I really don't know, are you his keeper?
ReplyDeleteWhere did i call him an asshole? I was merely remarking on the fact that calling mine and Jackie's work 'disappointing' is hardly likely to encourage us or any other prospective writers to contribute our work, don't you see that?
I totally get that not everyone likes my work or Jackie's or Camille's in fact I'm sure the vast majority don't. That's the the reality of writing porn. I don't like 95% of the stories I read, but I don't take the time out of my schedule to tell other writers that. What would be the point? I welcome creative criticism but what does Mr Anonymous (of course) hope to achieve by telling me or any other writer for that matter that our writing is 'disappointing'? What doesn't he like about it? If he doesn't tell us what the problem is, we're probably going to repeat those mistakes going forward and disappoint him even more.
That was constructive criticism on why it is ill-advised to respond to any slights, perceived or otherwise, with hostility.
DeleteI would ask you, what did you hope to achieve with your sarcastic jab? Imagine if Stephen King had tweeted a comment like that in response to some rando saying his recent work was disappointing. Would your perception of Stephen King increase or decrease? You might think he was being a bit of a twat himself.
Try not to let any unkind words bother you. Failing that, absolutely do not engage with these types of comments in a similar fashion. As I said, there is no good way to do that without looking like a jerk.
What on earth are you talking about?
Delete1. What business is it of yours if I respond to criticism? And why do you think I would listen to your unsolicited advice?
2. In what way was I hostile?
3. Your Stephrn King analogy makes absolutely no sense. He's a professional author and makes so much money he doesn't give a toss what you think.
4. You haven't answered any of my previous questions?
5. Why are you so abusive?
A story is there for you to take from it what you want there is no such thing as the perfect story only a story that you can enjoy in parts
ReplyDeleteIf the stories here are
not your thing
Then maybe you should be looking somewhere else
An excellent story. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. When can we expect it?
ReplyDeleteCharles, I've been reading this genre for many years and this story has become one of my favorites. I'm so looking forward to finding out about Charlotte's fate!
ReplyDeleteCould you let me know about the similar stories which are not posted on this website.
DeleteWhen is the next part coming???
ReplyDelete