by Jackie J
Chapter 1
“Well Miss
Winterbourne, how can I help? Where do I start?”
Miss Winterbourne
turned from the sink and laughed which muted to a wry smile.
“Mistress, what were you thinking? You can start by getting out of the beautiful dress, you will ruin
it!”
Lady Fitzgibbon
smoothed her hands down over her dress and looked at her housekeeper.
“What, what’s
wrong with this? Nonsense, it’s not that new!”
Miss Winterbourne
walked away from the large stone sink and the stack of pots and pans with her dish
cloth in hand.
“Mistress, not only
will you ruin that dress but it is totally impractical. Your offer to help,
whilst Janice is away, looking after her sick aunt is most welcome, but really,
you cannot be serious doing her duties dressed like that.”
Miss Winterbourne
pointed to a prim maid’s uniform hung at the far side of the kitchen.
“Look I altered
that for you when you offered to help, it will be a good fit and perfect for the
jobs in hand and I suggest you take up the offer of the cotton underwear, trust
me the silk will make you uncomfortable and there are a pair of boots with some
wool stockings in on the floor under your uniform.”
Lady Fitzgibbon
walked to the garments hung by the far wall.
“Really?”
Feeling at the
coarse fabric of the lace trimmed long woollen dress that her junior housemaid
wore Lady Fitzgibbon smiled at the bloomers and petticoats then picked the long
lace trimmed bibbed apron from the rail and wrapped it over her dress.
“No, I think not
Miss Winterbourne, this apron will do adequately I have agreed to help but
dressing in a housemaid’s uniform? Please, I am the Lady of the manor here at
Longways, I am afraid that would never do, it just would never do.”
Miss Winterbourne shrugged
her shoulders and sighed slinging the dish cloth over her broad shoulders.
“Well like you say
Mistress you are the Lady of the manor, I have prepared that for you but it’s
your choice, however I have warned you. I have worked her at Longways for
twenty years now, since I was fourteen and I know how dirty and tiring some of
the work is at the manor and I assure you the clothes for the job are hung on the
peg beside you.”
Lady Fitzgibbon
smiled and walked towards her housekeeper.
“Miss
Winterbourne, I know you have my best interests at heart, but I couldn’t be
seen wearing that I just couldn’t. Now what’s my first job, where shall I begin?”
Miss Winterbourne,
Annie, pulled the dishcloth from around her shoulders and handed it to her Mistress
pointing to the sink heaving with dirty crockery and cutlery pans stacked on
the draining board.
“If you can tend
to those whilst I go and change your bed linen and clean your bed chamber oh
and set the fire for the stove when you have finished the pots.”
Miss Winterbourne
huffed and marched from the kitchen, she had spent quite some time altering two
of Janice’s uniforms and spent extra money from the housekeeping on the
underwear when Lady Fitzgibbon offered to help whilst Janice was away. Annie already
had the feeling that Lady Fitzgibbon’s help would be no help at all. Annie
wanted to bring in a maid she knew from Upton Manor but her Mistress would have
none of it saying it was a waste of money even questioning why she retained
Janice at all, how hard could looking after the Manor be? That was when Lady
Fitzgibbon said that she would help out herself.
Over an hour had passed
and when Annie returned to the Kitchen and gasped in dismay. The fire for the
stove was not lit, the pile of dirty pans remained on the drainer and the sink
was obviously still filled with crockery. Lady Fitzgibbon was stood by the sink
her apron saturated staring out of the window in a daydream gently and slowly
running a cold dishcloth around a tea cup.
The arrival of Miss
Winterbourne startled Lady Fitzgibbon who dropped and smashed the tea cup she
had been nursing. Annie dipped her hand in the now cold water and tutted.
“Tut, tut, tut
Mistress, you have been doing this for over an hour it should be finished by
now and all this back in the cupboards and the pans on the rack. I asked you to
light the fire in the stove but you haven’t.”
“And look at you,
you are soaked and the soda from the water is leaching the colour from your
dress onto your apron. O dear, look get the brush and pan from the cupboard by
the door and sweep up that broken cup, then put the bits in the bin, over there
by the wall.”
Stepping away from
the sink Lady Fitzgibbon looked down at her feet her pretty pink satin shoes
were speckled in blue dots, dye for her dress! Like a naughty school girl, she
tried to hide her shoes under the hems of her dress but Miss Winterbourne had
seen them already and just tutted.
Annie stood back
with her hands on her hips and if Lady Fitzgibbon had behaved and in fact felt
like a naughty school girl, then Miss Winterbourne certainly had the demeanour
and expression of a strict school mistress with the tone and volume of her
voice to match.
“What did I tell
you? Those shoes are ruined and probably your dress as well now sweep up that
mess.”
Both women stared
at each other. The housekeeper had just berated her Mistress?
Annie stood erect hands on hips with an
expression of veiled anger; Lady Fitzgibbon skulked by the sink, awkward and
unsure. Only seconds but it seemed time stood still who would blink first?
Annie was vexed
and without thought of who was stood before her pointed to the cupboard where
the cleaning materials and the brush and pan were stored her voice a little
louder and commanding.
“Well are you
going to sweep that mess up or what?”
Lady Fitzgibbon
mumbled her response, she felt stupid, she had been made to feel stupid, she
had been stupid, she was stupid. Not for being idle with the washing of the
pot’s, or for not lighting the fire in the stove, not for ruining her dress and
staining her pretty shoes, not even for smashing the cup. No, she was stupid
for ever agreeing to help Miss Winterbourne in the first place!
“Erm, yes, yes, of
course, of course the brush and pan.”
Miss Winterbourne
smirked watching her Ladyship scurry up the kitchen towards the cupboard for
the brush and dustpan. She had just spoken to her Mistress no differently than
she would have to her junior housemaid Janice. What made her chuckle more was
how her Mistress had reacted, contrite, sheepish, submissive even, not a word
of protest she just did what her housekeeper had told her to do?
Watching her
Mistress sweeping up the broken cup from the stone floor of the kitchen Annie shook
her head and smiled at how hard she made that simple task look. This was not
going to work and resigned herself to contacting Upton manor to see if the
young maid Lucy could be spared for the time that Janice would be away. Lady
Fitzgibbon would just have to pay.
With her Mistress
away to change Annie finished the washing up sided everything away ignited the
fire in the stove and started to prepare dinner. Just Lady Fitzgibbon to be
served, Lord Jeffery was away in London and then would be travelling out to the
overseas farms for their annual reviews
Lady Fitzgibbon
dressed in her more regal attire sat alone at the large dining table and Annie
served her Ladyship her evening meal. Little, in fact nothing was said about
the earlier escapade in the kitchens.
The table cleared
and a small glass of port served Annie approached Lady Fitzgibbon.
“Mistress, about
cover for Janice, I really do think I should contact Upton Manor to see if the
young maid Lucy is available like I suggested before. I cannot manage the manor
on my own and well, after today, in the kitchens? I know you did your best
Mistress but maid’s work is perhaps not what you thought, it is not easy work
and to be honest, if I may, I don’t think you can cope.”
Lady Fitzgibbon
looked at Annie questionably whilst she continued.
“And I must
apologise for shouting at you like I did, I was just frustrated and forgot my
place Mistress, I spoke and treated you no differently than I would have with
Janice our junior housemaid, that was wrong Mistress and ruining your dress and
shoes I cannot help feeling responsible.”
Lady Fitzgibbon
raised her glass to her lips and took a sip of her port a smile growing on her
face recollecting her time earlier that day with Miss Winterbourne in the
kitchens. She had been hopeless and her chastisement by her housekeeper had
shocked her for sure but she deserved it didn’t she, being slow and clumsy. The
ruination of her dress and shoes were her own fault she had been offered
“clothing for the job” and refused to wear it. A slight shudder and nervous
tingle shimmered through Lady Fitzgibbon when she thought again of how Miss
Winterbourne had chastised her how it made her feel, how she had reacted?
Lady Fitzgibbon
had looked to make a saving whilst Janice was away there would be less work
around the manor with her husband Jeffrey out at the plantations for some time
as well and her two step daughters, who seemed to detest her, thankfully also
still away from the manor travelling in Europe, it seemed a small sacrifice to
help Miss Winterbourne herself. If she agreed now to hiring Lucy from Upton
manor she would be admitting she was wrong and Miss Winterbourne was right all
along. More than that she would be also admitting she was incapable of doing
simple maid’s work?
“Miss Winterbourne
please take a seat, here at the table beside me.”
Annie nervously
sat in one of the high-backed upholstered chairs that she had regularly
polished to their high sheen; always marvelling at the intricacy of the family
crest decoratively carved into each, but had never sat in one. Was her apology not enough?
“Yes, Mistress
what is it?”
“About today Miss
Winterbourne, I accept your apology however it was not necessary, the disaster
in the kitchens earlier was all of my making, and you reacted as you would to
any maid who was so slow and clumsy. Likewise, with my dress and shoes, you had
gone to the trouble of preparing suitable garments for me to wear and I
refused. No, an apology on your part was not called for. It should be me who is
apologizing to you for basically, though it pains me to admit it, being so
useless.“
“Now with regards
to hiring Lucy from Upton manor I did not want to do that before and I still
don’t, I have my reasons which you must respect. Today we got off on the wrong
foot, I am sure I can do better and if I don’t meet your standards then, well,
then you have every right to tell me so.”
Annie shuffled for
comfort in the unfamiliar chair a little confused, after her experience in the
kitchens why would her Mistress want to continue with her pretence to be a
maid?
“Mistress, are you
saying that you want to continue helping me, doing the work of the junior housemaid
around the manor?”
Lady Fitzgibbon
sat high in her chair a slight look of indignation on her face her housekeeper
questioning the validity of her desires.
“That is exactly
what I am saying Miss Winterbourne.”
Annie shook her
head in resignation she had to talk her Mistress out of this. Lucy was trained,
obedient and would be a genuine help for Annie, Lady Fitzgibbon on the other
hand, if today was anything to go by, would be a liability.
“Mistress I beg
you to reconsider, I am sorry to say this Mistress but please think again of
today, you refused to wear your maid’s uniform, you struggled with basic tasks,
you were clumsy which resulted in the raising of my voice to you? What will be
different tomorrow? When we originally agreed for you to be my help, whilst
Janice was away, we obviously did not think it through properly, it didn't work
and it cannot work. Please Mistress allow me to contact Upton Manor in the
morning.”
Lady Fitzgibbon
looked at her housekeeper who, after the earlier disaster in the kitchens, was
even more set against her helping around the manor and obviously keen to hire
the accomplished maid Lucy.
Lady Fitzgibbon
stood she did not want this discussion to become an argument or a test of
wills.
“Let us both sleep
on this and we will discuss matters again in the morning, hopefully we can
reach an accord. I genuinely wish to help you Miss Winterbourne and in equal
measure I do not wish to bring Lucy from Upton manor. You are the housekeeper
and hopefully in the morning you will have thought out how we can achieve
both?”
Chapter 2
Laid in her bed
before drifting off to sleep Lady Fitzgibbon giggled contemplating the events
in the kitchen and how serious her housekeeper Miss Winterbourne was. The look
on her face when she had dropped that cup and then chastised her, sending her
for the brush and dust pan, the tone in her voice, she thought of what poor
Janice must be put through. Miss Winterbourne had always been as sweet as honey
with her Mistress but Lady Fitzgibbon had seen another side to her housekeeper.
Annie for her part
tossed and turned in her bunk, it was ridiculous her Mistress helping her about
the manor. Annie should have been firmer at the outset and just said no when it
was first discussed, insisted that Lucy was hired, but she hadn’t. Even now her
Mistress still seemed set on the idea, even after her embarrassing performance
in the kitchens; Annie had to talk her out of it somehow, make her see sense
get her to agree to hire Lucy?
Annie’s Eureka
moment saw her sit bolt upright in her bed her eyes wide, that was it, no way
would her Mistress agree to that, she even baulked at wearing Janice’s uniform,
she would have to agree to bring in Lucy.
Annie smoothed herself down beneath her sheets a self-satisfied smile on
her face.
The following
morning breakfast was served, the table cleared and Lady Fitzgibbon, sat in her
delicate silk negligee and peignoir, summoned her housekeeper back to the
dining room.
“Well Miss
Winterbourne, have you considered our discussion from last evening?”
Annie took a breath
confident that the conditions she had formulated would be rejected out of hand
by her Mistress and she would soon be contacting Upton manor to organize the
services of young Lucy.
Lady Fitzgibbon
sat and listened to her housekeeper her mouth slowly dropping open listening to
Annie’s conditions for Lady Fitzgibbon’s, if she insisted on continuing to
pursue her wish to be Miss Winterbourne's helper in Janice’s absence.
Lady Fitzgibbon
was somewhat lost for words when her housekeeper finished implying that the
only alternative would be to hire a maid from Upton Manor.
Gathering herself,
pulling her silky peignoir around her Lady Fitzgibbon stood from the table a
look of disbelieve on her face to what she had heard.
“Well Miss
Winterbourne I must say I was not expecting that, the conditions you describe
seem a little extreme to say the least?
Annie pushed a
piece of piece of paper onto the table a slight smirk on her face, she was
right no way could her Mistress agree to this, everything was going to plan.
“Mistress I have
written the main points down here for you to look through I will be in the
kitchens making a start on the week’s laundry. Just let me know, the uniform
you refused to wear yesterday is hung in Janice’s room you can write your
letter of agreement covering the points I have raised there if that is what you
want to do, or I can have Lucy here first thing tomorrow morning.”
Miss Winterbourne left the dining room and
Lady Fitzgibbon retook her seat and pulled the document towards her and started
to go through the conditions written by her housekeeper.
She chuckled she
knew her housekeeper wanted the young maid from Upton manor to help her and
suspected she had put in these conditions to frighten her off. The listing
contained words such as obey, unconditional, respect. It was no different than
what would be required when hiring a proper maid into service. In fact, it was!
Miss Winterbourne had taken the details from Janice’s conditions of service.
Lady Fitzgibbon
raised her fine china cup to her lips, took a sip and smiled contemplating the
proposition.
Miss Winterbourne
in some respects, if not in all respects was right, if she was going to help
she would have to do the job properly and agreeing to stick with it, come what
may until Janice returned, was only fair. Her husband was away, there were no
visitors coming and she knew of no plans for the twins to return for some time.
But three weeks being a maid under the supervision of her housekeeper and
complying, without complaint or recourse, with these somewhat draconian
conditions?
If she wrote and signed
a letter agreeing to these terms, that her housekeeper had demanded, there
could be no back tracking, no going back on her word, her honour would be at
stake. It was all so preposterous she would have to treat her housekeeper as if
her better for the duration? She couldn’t do that, could she?
Down in the kitchens
in the back scullery Miss Winterbourne was busy sorting the laundry, not
something she would normally do. That, along with all the other mundane jobs
around the manor, was work for Janice her junior housemaid not the
housekeeper. Annie smiled to herself
soon she would have Lucy to help her, she was sure of it; no way would her
Mistress agree to what she had demanded of her.
Collecting the
soda from the cupboard in the kitchen Annie heard the rustle of skirts on the
stone steps leading down from the main manor? She had to lean against the
worktop for support when the figure emerged from the bottom of the stairway?
Her Mistress, Lady Fitzgibbon dressed in Janice’s maid’s uniform, the same uniform that she had refused to
wear the day earlier? Miss Winterbourne just stared in disbelief, if she was
wearing the uniform she had agreed to her terms, agreed in totality? Her
Mistress was holding a letter, her letter of agreement?
Miss Winterbourne
took a deep breath when Lady Fitzgibbon approached her and took the letter from
her hand without a word and started to read.
It could not be
clearer her Mistress had agreed to enter service under the supervision of Miss
Winterbourne accepting the role and conditions of a junior housemaid until the
return of Janice, her flowing signature bold at the foot of the neatly written
text.
Miss Winterbourne
folded the letter and the attached conditions of service and pushed them deep
into her apron pocket.
“Mmmm, well I was certainly
not expecting this Mistress but if this is your choice, you know what I expect
from you now, you knew what you were to become when you dressed in that
uniform, tied on that apron and signed the letter of agreement I requested?”
Lady Fitzgibbon
was nervous and unsure in her unfamiliar garb, the maid’s uniform previously
worn by Miss Winterbourne's junior housemaid Janice, her name still emblazoned
on the dress and apron and forced a smile.
“Yes, until Janice
returns I am to be your housemaid and comply with the conditions stipulated in
the agreement I have signed.”
Miss Winterbourne
smirked; still only half believing her Mistress was doing this, but if she was
Mrs. Winterbourne intended to see how good the Mistress of Longways was at
taking orders instead of giving them.
“Well then, let us
begin then shall we; we won’t be using the term Mistress for some time, will
we? You have agreed to that. OUR Mistress Lady Fitzgibbon is considered to be
away from Longways until Janice returns. But what to call you?”
Annie smiled at
Janice’s name, which was embroidered on all of her uniforms and aprons both of
which Lady Fitzgibbon now wore.
“We don’t need to
confuse matters do we, you will be doing her work, her name is on your uniforms
so you can carry her name, it will also help you remember that you are no
longer the mistress here at Longways, just MY junior housemaid.”
Lady Fitzgibbon’s
fingers toyed nervously in her skirts and apron, she had not considered a
change of name, thinking that her own first name of Clementine would be used
but Miss Winterbourne had a point, Janice’s name was on the uniform and she was
right it would help her to forget she was the Mistress of Longways.
“So, JANICE, you
have agreed to the conditions of your service and as agreed you will receive no
preferential treatment for who you were before you put on that uniform and
became my junior housemaid is that understood?”
Janice nodded and
mumbled
“Yes.”
Miss Winterbourne
stood back a pace the look on her face no different than the expression Lady
Fitzgibbon had seen the previous day when she had smashed the cup whilst she
still held rank and privilege in her own Manor.
“What? Yes, what
JANICE?”
Had she forgotten
already? She would not forget again, it would become second nature, a bobbed
curtsy and address the housekeeper by her full name or Miss when addressing or
replying to her, it was one of the conditions.
A shuffled curtsy
followed by what would soon be a natural mantra.
“Sorry Miss, Miss
Winterbourne. Yes, Miss, understood.”
Miss Winterbourne
saw the same submissive demeanour and compliance she had witnessed the previous
day with the smashed cup. Perhaps having her Mistress for her maid could turn
out to be better than she had thought.
“That’s better
JANICE, discipline is essential to running a household such as this beautiful
manor. Our job is to maintain the manor in pristine condition and service our
Mistresses wishes.”
Annie took the
opportunity to distance her maid’s current persona from that which she had
previously enjoyed and would relentlessly continue to do so. If lady Fitzgibbon
was to embrace her role of Janice and comply unconditionally with the wishes of
her housekeeper it would be necessary.
“Of course, we
know that our Mistress, Lady Fitzgibbon is away and will be for some time but
our standards here will not slip I will make sure of that.”
The two women had
conflicting thoughts to a common end.
Lady Fitzgibbon
had given her word and had already been made starkly aware of what she had
signed up to. She was Janice now, junior housemaid to Miss Winterbourne and
would have to forget her life above stairs until Janice returned, she would
need to embrace her new position in the manor and resolved herself to do just
that.
Miss Winterbourne
could not believe that her Mistress had agreed to the outrageous conditions she
had demanded of her but she had, Lady Fitzgibbon had placed herself under the
unconditional control of her housekeeper to become her junior maid. It was
going to be difficult for Miss Winterbourne but she was resolved to see this
through, forget that she was, up until that very morning, her Mistress and
treat her like the junior housemaid she had chosen to be.
And so, it was
that this accepted new reality for the pair began.
Lady Fitzgibbon,
Janice, was ushered into the back scullery to be confronted by the piles of
laundry the washboard and tub all prepared.
Miss Winterbourne
smiled at Janice’s expression of dread.
“Watch what I do carefully
I shall only show you once JANICE.”
Taking a sheet,
she dropped it into the tub than scrubbed it against the washboard her words
again seeking to distance the Mistress she was from the maid she now was.
“These are the
sheets from her Ladyships chambers and must be washed thoroughly, all the
laundry in those two baskets by the wall are Lady Fitzgibbon's and she will not
be happy should a stain remain on any of the garments when she returns, so you
will do a good job or else, do you understand?”
Janice stumbled
into an awkward curtsy.
“Yes Miss
Winterbourne.”
Janice’s arms and
back soon started to ache but she soldiered on and the irony of Miss Winterbourne’s
words was not lost on her new maid. “Her Ladyship will not be happy if a stain
remains.” She was her Ladyship; well she was up until this morning? Scrubbing
away Janice thought of the times she had complained about the laundry never
realizing just what an arduous task it was. Bedding and clothing scrubbed clean
mangled and folded into baskets for drying Janice looked at her wrinkled hands
from the water and soda and sighed.
Miss Winterbourne
appeared, smiled and with Janice struggling with one of the baskets marched her
new maid out into the yard at the rear of the manor to hang out the washing on
the lines. Four baskets of laundry pegged out, in an order dictated by Miss
Winterbourne, Janice sighed with relief watching the washing fluttering in the
breeze. Strange but she felt a sense of achievement when Miss Winterbourne
praised her work, but at what cost, her back still ached and her delicate hands
had been ravaged by the soda.
No time to rest,
Janice was shown how to set the fire in the stove then taken up into the main
manor to clean the fire grates in the rooms, all the rooms. Another realization
for Janice was just how many fire grates there were in the manor, all of which had
to be cleaned, blackened and polished to a glistening sheen.
Janice was filthy
her hands and face mottled with smeared soot, as was her apron, she would soon
realize that with more care she could avoid being covered in so much grime
whilst she went about her duties.
Miss Winterbourne
looked at her ragged looking maid, there was a hint of sympathy, but Lady
Fitzgibbon had agreed to everything and the work needed to be done, the
alternative was for Annie to do the work herself but why should she, she had a
junior housemaid to do all the dirty and mundane jobs didn’t she.
Janice was sent to
her room to wash and change her apron, not the splendid bed chamber above stairs
Lady Fitzgibbon had enjoyed, she would be using Janice’s room for the duration
of being junior housemaid, another of the conditions she had agreed to.
The room was
cramped with basic furniture a bunk, closet and drawers a small table with a
wash bowl, a lump of carbolic soap and wash rag by its side, a small mirror on
the wall above the restrictive facilities. On inspection the closet and drawers
contained uniforms, hosiery and underwear. Janice washed in the basic
facilities of her room the odour of the carbolic soap strong and masking the
remaining fragrance of her cosseted femininity from her time above stairs.
A clean apron tied
and ready to return to what duties would come next Miss Winterbourne was at the
threshold of Janice’s room.
A hairbrush and
clips in hand she ushered Janice back to sit on her bunk.
“I took the
liberty of bringing these from Lady Fitzgibbon's chambers, I noticed today that
your long hair, being worn down and around your shoulders, is a distraction
that a junior housemaid does not need. You will brush out your hair and clip it
up under your cap. When you are ready return to the kitchens for lunch we have
a busy afternoon ahead of us.”
Miss Winterbourne
was right her dangling hair had been a problem whilst she worked, not a problem
for Lady Fitzgibbon lounging in the manor but for Longways junior housemaid?
Lunch had been
prepared by Miss Winterbourne, two thick slices of rough cut ham a dollop of
pickle and a crust of bread spread out on a wooden board, a mug of tea steaming
by its side on the large table in the kitchens. No fine china, that was
reserved for above stairs not the staff and the cuisine basic at best.
Janice was hungry
from her labours and enthusiastically tucked in to her lunch.
Chapter 3
The first week of Lady
Fitzgibbon's “service” was arduous if not downright painful and of course highly
humiliating for the lady of the manor taking orders, orders given with
increasing confidence, by her housekeeper Miss Winterbourne. If Miss
Winterbourne was growing in confidence of how she treated her junior housemaid
it was in no small part encouraged by lady Fitzgibbon’s attentive
submissiveness to her.
The combination of
being dressed in a maid’s uniform, having only the basic facilities of the
maid’s quarters, constantly swathed in the scent of service from the carbolic
soap she washed in, the confusion and unfamiliarity of the many tasks she was
being shown and the demeaning ritual of curtsying to her housekeeper all
serving to reinforce her chosen role.
By the end of that
week she had tidied, swept, scrubbed, mopped, cleaned and polished throughout
the manor. Any petulance or complaining had been rebuked with increasing
sternness and reminded of her agreement with the housekeeper of Longways manor.
Miss Winterbourne took particular pleasure when having her junior housemaid
clean lady Fitzgibbon's personal chambers and chuckled having Janice refer
constantly to lady Fitzgibbon in the third person.
Given Miss
Winterbourne had not suspected this charade would continue as it had or even if
at all, she had only altered two of the absent Janice’s uniforms and obtained
limited underwear. Given lady Fitzgibbon had agreed to be held for an extended
period of service this oversight needed to be rectified. During the evenings
Janice was found unpicking seams and sewing to size additional maid’s dresses
under the supervision of Miss Winterbourne. The additional underwear, that of
the absent Janice, whilst baggy and loose would have to suffice, Miss Winterbourne
not wishing to spend any more money from her household budget.
The second week
was no less tiring for the junior housemaid of Longways manor now familiar with
the routines and the expectations and standards demanded by Miss Winterbourne. Janice
ate in the kitchens with Miss Winterbourne and by the end of the week she was
preparing and serving the meals. Conversation was strained during the first
week between housekeeper and maid but with the increasing acceptance by Janice,
of her role and subservient position to her housekeeper, in the times shared
together, they discussed matters relating to the upkeep and cleanliness of the
manor.
During one such conversation, with Janice having displayed some
petulance, complaining and shoddy work Janice was reminded that Lady Fitzgibbon
had sanctioned the spanking of Miss Winterbourne’s junior housemaid for
repeated indiscretions, insolence or lack of respect on numerous occasions. The
threat of such punishment to be delivered to her own tender behind, whilst made
was not really considered a possibility. Her housekeeper would not spank the
bare buttocks of her mistress, which of course was true but the floppy cheeks
of her junior housemaid?
When directed to a
particular task, a curtsy and a polite, “Yes Miss” still brought a veiled smirk
from Miss Winterbourne. At times she had to pinch herself to remind her who her
submissive maid really was. It was becoming more difficult to see her busy and
willing maid as anything other than the maid she had chosen to be? During the
week, without prompting, Janice herself, on numerous occasions, referred to
lady Fitzgibbon in the third person much to the amusement of Miss Winterbourne.
The veiled threat
of a spanking kept Longways junior maid on her toes, whilst Janice didn’t
believe Miss Winterbourne would actually carry out her threat she was now on
her third and last warning following the of excessive use of polish on the
dining room furniture, furniture she you used to sit upon which now she cleaned
and polished.
Tuesday of the
third week Miss Winterbourne received word from the absent Janice that her stay
with her aunt was to be extended from the original three weeks to six. Miss
Winterbourne was angry at the first reading of the letter. She would be left to
do all the work if Janice did not return, but then smiled referring back to the
letter of agreement lady Fitzgibbon had written and signed. It was unambiguous
and clear she would remain a maid under the supervision of Miss Winterbourne at
Longways until the return of the junior housemaid Janice, there was no mention
of three weeks.
With Janice hard
at work in the manor scrubbing and polishing floors Miss Winterbourne smiled to
herself. Three weeks, six weeks what does it matter Lady Fitzgibbon remains my
junior maid until Janice returns.
The day’s work
done and having finished her supper in the kitchens, a weary junior housemaid
curtsied to the housekeeper of Longways manor and asked permission to go to her
room. A formality which Janice was reluctant to comply with at first but like
all the other demands made by her housekeeper she now dutifully complied each
evening before being excused.
Janice now no less
familiar with that name than her own slowly made her way back to her room.
Constantly weary from her work she stripped from her uniform, a wash from the
bowl and into her plain cotton nightdress Janice sighed, slipped beneath the
thin sheets of her hard bunk and was soon into a dreamless sleep.
It was Thursday of
the third week of her agreed service, her body ached and she had never felt so
tired but Janice would be returning and her self-imposed ordeal would soon be
over, wouldn’t it?
Friday, Saturday
then Sunday came and went without a word of Longways junior housemaid returning
from her aunts. It was Monday and having prepared breakfast for Miss
Winterbourne Janice just had to ask.
Janice now without thought or hesitation, such
had been her accepted conditioning, curtsied to her housekeeper.
“Miss.”
Miss Winterbourne
had deliberately not shared the information about Janice’s delayed return to
Longways with her junior housemaid, why would she.
Miss Winterbourne
put down her cup and smiled.
“Yes, Janice what
is it?”
“Miss, I thought that your junior housemaid
was to return this week I have been in your service for three weeks now?”
Miss Winterbourne
spoke without emotion.
“That is correct Janice my housemaid was to
return in three weeks but it seems she will not be returning just yet.”
Miss Winterbourne
watched the expression change on Janice’s face from one of expectation of
impending release from her servitude to one of quizzical concern and continued.
“But that is not a
problem Janice you will remember our Mistress, Lady Fitzgibbon, instructed you
to be the junior housemaid at Longways manor, under my supervision, until the
previous junior housemaid returned. Given she is not returned you will remain
in service at Longways until she does.”
Janice just stared
at Miss Winterbourne hardly believing what she had just been told. She was to continue
under the supervision of Miss Winterbourne, to remain the junior housemaid at Longways.
She couldn’t, she
was so weary, constantly tired, the work was hard and physical, taking its toll both physically and mentally. She genuinely feared for her sanity if she
did the agreement. That was only for three weeks, wasn’t it?
Janice’s voice
raised an octave but quivering with nervous trepidation lacked both confidence
and conviction such had been Miss Winterbourne's subjugation of her.
“No, no I can’t. I
won’t, I was, I am Mistress here at Longways, this has got to end, it must, it
was only for three weeks. We will hire that girl from Upton manor, Lucy, yes
Lucy you must hire Lucy, I must and go to my rooms. To bathe.”
Miss Winterbourne
stood back with the stern expression of one who would be obeyed a look that
Janice had come to know.
“No, no, who do
you think you are talking to GIRL?”
Miss Winterbourne
held up the agreement Lady Fitzgibbon had foolishly signed pointing to the
specific paragraph citing “Until the return of the junior housemaid” with no
mention of three weeks and ensured she kept Lady Fitzgibbon very much in the
third person.
“If Lady
Fitzgibbon had wanted to hire Lucy from Upton Manor she would have done so at
the time but she didn’t. I recall Lady Fitzgibbon was so set against taking a
maid from Upton manor, by her own hand, she gave me you JANICE and as the
agreement between Lady Fitzgibbon and me states you are to remain under my
supervision until my junior housemaid returns. It is my duty to Lady Fitzgibbon
to ensure this agreement is honoured, if she was here now she would say the
same.”
Janice’s shoulders
slumped, from an expectation that her time of giving herself into the control
of her housekeeper was at an end feeling of hopelessness and an acceptance to
her continued subjugation embraced her like an invisible self-spun web of her
own entrapment. She had agreed to this, insisted on this, surrendered all
governance to her housekeeper, she had no say in the matter or indeed anything
else in the manor she was the junior housemaid of Miss Winterbourne and so she
would remain until the absent housemaid Janice retuned.
Another week passed
and Janice continued to fall deeper under her own self-inflicted spell. Her
hands well roughened, her nails short and more often than not lined with
ingrained grime, her complexion without its glow, her hair looking unkempt
wrapped tight under her maids cap. If one had to describe a working junior
housemaid Lady Fitzgibbon, Janice, was becoming just that.
Miss Winterbourne
was spending less time with household duties why should she? Miss Winterbourne
was the housekeeper at Longways manor she had a well-trained junior housemaid
to do those tasks and a very competent and compliant housemaid Janice was becoming.
Janice was rising early and her increased work load kept her busy from dawn to
dusk with little time to contemplate anything other than her duties and
pleasing the demanding housekeeper of Longways, Miss Winterbourne.
Five weeks had
passed and Miss Winterbourne smiled at the transformation she had brought about
in her Mistress.
The shock of her
drastic change in circumstances accepted, the constant wearing of a maid’s
uniform, her willing compliance to Miss Winterbourne’s draconian regime, the tiring
workload, the confusion of persona, with the constant referral of her former
self in the third person, her fight to see herself as anything other than
Janice the junior housemaid at Longways was being lost, a process not
discouraged in fact actively encouraged by Miss Winterbourne.
The six-week
anniversary of lady Fitzgibbon’s entry into service came and went unheralded
and unnoticed by the busy junior housemaid of Longways manor, the drudgery of
her daily routines merging days and weeks into one endless continuum of her established
servitude. There would be no imminent return of the absent housemaid Janice, Miss
Winterbourne having written to Janice extending her absence indefinitely, she
had no need to return until she felt her Aunt was well enough to be left, which
would be some time yet. Even suggesting she seek alternative employment in the
area where her aunt lived.
Eight weeks of her
turmoil and subjugation had left Lady Fitzgibbon; the lady Miss Winterbourne
had served these last four years since her marriage to the widower Lord Jeffrey
Fitzgibbon, a broken woman, subservient in all things to her housekeeper,
bereft of hope and accepting of her role to be nothing other than the junior
housemaid in her own manor house.
During the tenth
week Miss Winterbourne, seeing stains remaining on some garments and Janice’s
rant, that if she did not like it she could wash them herself, was fuming. Miss
Winterbourne sensed a rebellion in her housemaid which after all this time she
was not going to tolerate. Returning from the study, with Janice, already
regretting her words, she was shown the written permission given to Miss
Winterbourne to spank her junior housemaid signed by Lady Fitzgibbon herself.
Janice stared at the document and cowered back
pleading with Miss Winterbourne but it was to no avail the stronger Miss
Winterbourne tired of her maid’s petulance and lack of industry held Janice
over her knee, lowered her cotton bloomers and whacked her ass red. A weeping,
contrite Janice utterly humiliated by her spanking raised her underwear and
stared at a stern-faced Miss Winterbourne. It was the first spanking but not
the last, an emboldened Miss Winterbourne had relished the power of having her
whimpering mistress over her knee.
This first
spanking was a watershed moment, Janice already compliant to the wishes of Miss
Winterbourne her debasement was now complete. Her befuddled mind reconciling
that she deserved to be punished in this way, lady Fitzgibbon had authorized
the housekeeper of Longways to discipline her junior maid in this manner. The
threat of and acceptance of further spankings at the hands of Miss Winterbourne
ensured there were no more outbursts of dissent.
Having Janice serving
her dinner in the dining room of the manor had become a nightly routine for
Annie Janice regularly complementing Annie on the beautiful dresses and gowns
she was now wearing, all from Lady Fitzgibbon's own closets and willingly
altered to fit by Longways junior housemaid. Each outfit accessorized with
expensive jewellery.
Twelve weeks had
now passed and the once vivacious confident Lady Fitzgibbon looking well beyond
her young years swathed in her uniform of established and accepted rank
shuffled around the manor about her duties. Berated, humiliated, ridiculed,
spanked and stripped of her dignity now humbly serving the needs of her
housekeeper more like that of a mistress of the manor.
Lord Jeffrey would
not be back until the end of the year and Annie was enjoying having her former
mistress at her beck and call but she would have to plan for his return. She
had the signed letter from Lady Fitzgibbon demanding to be put into service in
her own home which she was seeing more and more has her insurance should her
actions be questioned.
Sipping on a glass
of sherry gazing down the driveway through the large French windows Annie almost
fainted when she saw an unannounced carriage entering the gates of Longways
manor, panic was not the word? What should she do, lock Janice away in her
room? Put Janice in Lady Fitzgibbon's bed chambers, bed chambers that Miss
Winterbourne was now using? Thoughts and actions were not quick enough and she
watched the two glamorous twin daughters of Lord Fitzgibbon dismount the
carriage and watching the coachman unloading numerous trunks they were
obviously not here on a flying visit?
The twins, born of
Lord Fitzgibbon’s first wife, who died in childbirth, had nothing but contempt
and loathing for the current Lady Fitzgibbon. They had seen their father taken
from them by the wiles of the vivacious Miss Clementine Roxford. They now spent
as little time as they could at Longways manor although before the arrival of
the new Lady Fitzgibbon it had been their home.
Chapter 4
Having hastily travelled
back from the continent, having had word of their father’s illness, news which
had not yet reached Longways manor, they had yet to arrange new lodgings in
London and as such as a last resort, they would have to spend time at Longways
and force themselves to be civil to their stepmother.
The girls did not
knock they barged into the hallway and shouted for Miss Winterbourne.
“Annie, Annie
where are you, your girls are back.”
The twins at twenty-two
had blossomed into fine young ladies supported by the wealth of their father.
Neither planned to marry or had any inclination whatsoever towards men their
needs in that regard were served elsewhere.
Not having stepped
foot in Longways for some time, they left some twelve months after the current
lady Fitzgibbon arrived on the arm of their father who they doted on visited
and stayed rarely. Annie had been like a
big sister to the twins when she came to Longways to be a maid before becoming
housekeeper and was sorry to see them leave when they did under such
circumstances.
Miss Winterbourne
gathered herself strode into the hallway and, in a rustle of silk and lace embraced
them both then ushered them quickly into the front parlour hoping Janice had
not heard the commotion of the twin’s arrival.
Taken through into
the front parlour by Miss Winterbourne the girls sat on the sofa and explained
why they had returned unannounced to Longways. Annie was not aware of what had
happened to Lord Jeffrey and conflicting thoughts filled her mind when she was
told Lord Jeffrey had been severely affected by a serious stroke and was being
brought back to England from the Americas. The twins also confirming that they
had little intention of staying at Longways a minute longer than they had to.
Annie could forget about any problems with Lord Fitzgibbon, concerning what she
had done with his wife, but the twins?
Tabatha looked at
Miss Winterbourne and smiled.
“I must say you
are looking very well, rather splendid, that’s a lovely dress you are wearing
Annie anyone would think that you were Lady of the manor. Speaking of which
where is the witch? Is she away From Longways, spending my father’s money no
doubt?”
Greta joined in
denouncing their stepmother.
“You know how we
feel about her Annie she was far too young for father he should never have
married her. How old is she, twenty eight, younger than you Annie, young enough
to be his daughter for goodness sake, scandalous. Now he is taken ill?”
“So where is she
Annie, our stepmother and Janice the young maid, your junior housemaid where is
she I thought that she would be up here serving tea by now, don’t tell me your
standards are slipping Annie?”
Annie gulped and
looked nervously towards the door being reminded that within the more recent
training of her junior housemaid she had told Janice that if she heard visitors
arriving she should not await instruction, she was to prepare tea and bring it
to the front parlour to serve.
That last vestige
of Lady Fitzgibbon's dignity was ridden roughshod over when she despaired at
meeting guests in her new role, that of junior housemaid totally subservient to
her own housekeeper in her own home, she had no choice she was just a maid she
would do as she was told and of course she meekly did.
Thankfully Janice
was in the back scullery attending to the weeks Laundry so she was unaware of
the twin’s arrival at Longways.
Tabatha giggled
seeing Annie look to the door the way she had.
“What is it Annie
you look a bag of nerves dear who are you expecting to come through that door
you don’t have a man hidden away do you?”
Annie giggled
nervously.
“A man, no of
course not it’s just erm.”
Annie had to tell
them they were going to find out anyway.
“Wait here I need
to get something to show you.”
Returning with the
agreement signed by Lady Fitzgibbon Annie offered it to the girls and sat back
on a chair whilst they read the letter?
Both looked up in
dismay then looked again at the text before the letter was placed on the low
table in front of them.
With a puzzled
expression Tabatha was the first to speak.
“I don’t
understand Annie, Clementine agreed, well reading this wanted to be your junior
housemaid? Why for goodness sake? Whatever possessed her to even think of such
a thing? This is a joke, right?
Annie looked
across at the two girls both eager to know more.
“No Tabatha not a
joke at all you will see from her words she was quite insistent on doing it.”
Annie then told
them how it all came about how with Janice being away she had wanted to hire in
a maid from Upton manor, how she had come up with conditions no different to
those of a junior housemaid, trying to dissuade Lady Fitzgibbon from doing such
a thing.
The girls already
reading the list of conditions attached to the letter of the agreement signed
by their stepmother.
Greta laughed.
“She agreed to
these, all these conditions, was she mad?”
Annie spoke in an
apologetic voice.
“I didn’t think
she would but she did, she put on one of Janice’s uniforms tied on her apron and
gave me that letter, what was I to do? The manor needed a junior housemaid, I
could not hire Lucy from Upton manor and well, she forced me into the agreement.
Given she was to be my maid I couldn’t call her mistress any longer, she wore
Janice’s uniforms, so I gave her the name of Janice.”
Tabatha smiled
putting down the conditions of service on top of the letter.
“So, this letter
is dated three months ago, I presume the real Janice is back at Longways now, no
doubt you had some fun and I do hope you teased our stepmother mercilessly, how
long did our stepmother manage to last being maid Janice under these conditions
before you had to send for that girl from Upton manor? Not long I wager?”
Annie just sat
unsure how to explain how things had progressed looking down at her shoes.
Tabatha looked
questioningly at Annie.
“Annie look at me,
Annie Janice is back at Longways, isn’t she?”
Annie did not look
up and just shook her head, “No, she is still
with her aunt.”
Greta reached
forward grabbed the agreement and smirked.
“But it states
here, agreed and signed in her own hand that our stepmother, lady Fitzgibbon
would remain in your service, being your junior housemaid, until Janice
returned to Longways?”
Tabatha
interrupted her sister a knowing look of what she suspected.
“Annie if Janice
is still with her aunt, then, no, you can’t have done, surely not, not for all
this time?”
Annie looked up
and nodded.
“So, let me get
this straight Annie, you have our stepmother for you housemaid here in her own
home, that’s why you are dressed like you are, that dress it’s one of hers, isn’t it? It bloody well is and those earrings and the broach, your shoes?
Annie nodded
contritely.
“Yes.”
Greta and Tabatha
looked at each other, then at Annie, both despised Clementine, their stepmother
and both had thought and discussed together what they would like to do with the
uppity girl who had stolen their father’s affections. If what Annie had told them was true, and
they had no reason to doubt her, this could be such an opportunity. With their
father seriously ill he couldn’t protect her, now could he?
“I am sorry girls
I couldn’t help myself she was so arrogant about the whole thing, I thought I
would teach her a lesson, treated her just like I would a new junior housemaid,
I had her doing everything. She complied, the harsher I was the more submissive
she became. The intended three weeks became six then then and well she doesn’t
even mention returning to being the Mistress at Longways anymore.”
Annie neglecting
to mention she had spanked Janice into screaming out her denouncement of her entitlement
the last time the subject was raised never to be mentioned again.
Annie looked at
the twins and Tabatha stood.
“Well Annie what you have done is deplorable
and despicable, although in your defence it was all of her own making. Leave us
whilst we decide what to do about this.
Greta giggled.
“Have your maid
serve us tea.”
Annie stood and
reached for the agreement but Greta snatched it from the table and smirked.
“I don’t think so
Annie we will look after this, send up your housemaid and wait for the maid’s
bell to call you back.”
Annie turned by
the door unsure of her fate her “Insurance” now in the possession of the twins.
Finding Janice
busy with the laundry Annie told her to change into a clean apron and go to the
front parlour and take tea for two guests.
Janice curtsied.
“Yes Miss, tea for
two in the front parlour.”
A knock on the
door, told to enter and with tray in hand, Janice entered the parlour and instinctively
curtsied to the two elegant young women sat on the sofa. The twins looked in
astonishment at what stood before them. It was Clementine, lady Fitzgibbon,
their stepmother alright but wearing the uniform of a Longways maid she looked
so different, the plain baggy black dress and full bibbed apron her heavy
boots, unkempt hair scrunched under her cap, her bland complexion and weary eyes,
with a much fully figure than they recalled.
Janice approached
to serve looking again at the “guests” her eyes went wide recognizing who the
two elegant women were, could it really be them, could it really, was she saved
from her ordeal; yes, it was it was the twins, she recognized them, Miss
Winterbourne couldn’t keep her for her maid now. Janice looked questioningly
again was she imagining it, no it really was the twins!
Tabatha and Greta
said nothing just stared in veiled amusement.
Janice pulled off
her cap and shook out her greasy unkempt hair.
“Girls, it’s me
Clementine, Praises be that you are here, Miss Winterbourne, Annie, my
housekeeper has done this to me, I am close to losing my mind, you have to help
me please, she is using me for her housemaid I made a silly agreement but Miss Winterbourne
won’t release me from it, please you have to help me. Tabatha, Greta, please
say something. You are the first people I have seen in Months, I have been kept
a virtual prisoner in my own home, being used as the junior maid. I live in the
maid’s quarters wear only maid’s uniforms do all the work about the manor, Miss,
chastises me for the slightest mistake she even spanks me.”
Greta turned to
Tabatha then back to Janice and smirked.
“Yes, we know all
that JANICE, now please serve the tea.”
Janice looked at the
twins their faces blank of expression her voice raising in frustration
“Janice, Janice,
Janice I am not Janice I am your mother, your stepmother Lady Fitzgibbon, your
father’s wife you must help me you must.”
Tabatha smiled
turning a cup and placing it onto a saucer.
“Janice enough, we
know who you were of course we do, but more importantly we respect not who but
what you are now, Miss Winterbourne told us everything. That Lady Fitzgibbon
wished for you to be Miss Winterbourne’s housemaid and from what we have been
told a very good maid you are.”
Greta held up the
signed letter of agreement.
“Yes, we have read
your “silly agreement” it does not look silly to us at all. Lady Fitzgibbon
clearly states in this agreement that you are to remain the housemaid at
Longways under the supervision of its housekeeper, replacing the absent junior
housemaid until she returns. The junior maid is yet to return and so maid
Janice you remain. We would never interfere and go against the wishes of our
stepmother.”
“Now, put that
raggy mess of hair back under your cap and serve the tea girl you will have it
cold.”
Janice looked in
disbelief listening to the twins sat smugly on the sofa disowning her they were
going to allow Miss Winterbourne, her housekeeper to remain in control of her,
to keep her for the maid at Longways.
“Greta, Tabatha,
please don’t do this to me I will surely lose my mind if I remain like this
much longer. I am not sure who I am anymore, Jeffery will be home at the end of
the year he can’t find me like this he can’t.”
Seeing the twins
unmoved Janice almost screaming in despair pleaded with Tabatha.
“STOP, STOP surely
I have a say in this, you cannot do this to me.”
Greta laughed
standing from the sofa.
“I feel you are
forgetting your place Janice you have no say in anything here at Longways. I
have read the agreement. When Lady Fitzgibbon committed you to be a maid under
the supervision of the Longways housekeeper all rights and privileges that you
previously held were sacrificed for the duration of the agreement. If you have
a problem honouring Lady Fitzgibbon’s word I suggest you take it up with Lady
Fitzgibbon, she is the one who placed you here to be a maid.”
Janice just stared
in confusion at the contradiction of her personas and Greta continued.
“Well am I wrong
Janice, Lady Fitzgibbon committed you to be a maid at Longways under the supervision
of its housekeeper within the terms of the agreement she signed did she not?”
Janice looked
blankly hesitating and Greta stepped closer.
“Well Janice answer
me.”
Janice mumbled her
answer lowering her head.
“Yes, she did.”
Greta smirked at
Janice.
“And did Lady
Fitzgibbon accept the removal of all your rights and privileges when you became
the housemaid here at Longways as stated in the agreement.
Janice without
raising her head answered.
“Yes, she did.”
Greta hid her
amusement at how the once vivacious confident Clementine was submissively
wilting before her.
“And would Lady
Fitzgibbon and her housekeeper allow their junior housemaid to question the
terms of her service at Longways?”
Janice stuttering
back into her shell of subjugation spoke almost in a whisper, “No, no they
wouldn’t.”
Greta smirked and
pulled the call cord for Annie to return to the parlour which she did having dressed
back into her housekeepers’ uniform unsure of what the twins would do but hid
her smile seeing her maid still stood in front of them her head lowered pushing
up her greasy hair and replacing her cap.
Tabatha stood from
the sofa and joined Annie by the door looking directly at Janice a smirk on her
face.
“Well Miss Winterbourne
we have spoken with your maid Janice who confirms what you told us earlier, which
of course is confirmed by the letter written and signed by Lady Fitzgibbon
herself, that Janice is the maid here at Longways and will remain under your
supervision until the terms of the agreement are met, that being the return of
the absent junior maid. My sister and I have no intention of interfering with Lady
Fitzgibbon’s agreement with you and given this replacement maid, that Lady
Fitzgibbon gave you, is giving good service I see no reason to hurry the return
of your absentee,”
Tabatha chuckled
and continued her taunting.
“And given Lady
Fitzgibbon will not be returning for some time Miss Winterbourne I see no
reason why you shouldn’t continue to have full use of her wardrobe.”
Annie smiled
realizing the twins were not only condoning what she had done to her mistress,
their stepmother, but actually promoting its continuance.
Janice stood with
her head lowered and with shoulders slumped, what was being said was right.
Lady Fitzgibbon had agreed for her to be the housemaid under the supervision of
Longways housekeeper until the absent housemaid Janice returned.
Annie stepped
forward and placing her hand under Janice’s chin smiled and lifted her head.
“Well Janice it
seems you are to remain in service here at Longways for some time yet and of
course I will ensure your service is satisfactory. Now go and prepare the rooms
for Lady Fitzgibbon’s stepdaughters.”
Janice left without
hope meekly curtsied.
“Yes, Miss.”
To be continued....
I can't wait for the next episode! I wish for (Janice) Clementine a peaceful future. Her husband must leave her. He will therefore marry a true lady or maybe the mysterious Lucy. For Clementine a simple and modest life dedicated only to housework. Mary will obediently serve the new mistress as a dumb skivvy. Her hands calloused and ruined will have to speak for her.
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Clementine will obediently serve the new mistress as a dumb skivvy...... Sorry. ML
DeleteMmmmmmm, lets see?
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Jackie, as always your stories are absolutely amazing. So believable and the characters are so well constructed.
ReplyDeleteI love them and you never fail. Is there anywhere where I could read your complete works ? Shaun
Hi Lisa,Shaun
DeleteMost are here on Camille's fantastic site. I did write some on the locked in lace site but I think that site is closed now?
Thank you for your kind comments and of course I have more stories in the pipe line LOL
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This is very good. You're an excellent writer, I particularly like your dialogue
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I like this a lot! You pay a lot of attention to her mental status as she becomes more and more submissive. Really like how she is brought so low, and Miss Winterbourne's natural authoritarianism. Name changes are a nice touch too. Great work!
ReplyDeleteThank you so glad this story pressed the right buttons for you.
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Very much love all your stories Jackie please continue writing
ReplyDeleteWill there be more parts to this story or is this a complete story?
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I have read your story with a lot of interest and I especially like the way you developed the characters. I hope that you will continue with the story and I can't wait to see what is in store for Janice (Clementine).
ReplyDeleteOne avenue to explore would be to have Janice (Clementine) escape Miss Winterbourne's clutches, return as the Lady of the Manor only to fall back into Miss Winterbourne's control with the help of the two step-daughters. It would make for some high drama as Janice has to struggle to regain her status while Miss Winterborne assumes a superior position in the household. Imagine the situation of an additional maidservant in the household and Janice still cannot escape her position. Please, please continue with the story.
Wondering if this story will continue?
ReplyDeleteWonderful storytelling Jackie would like to see where this goes. What happens if Lord Fitz dies because of his stroke.
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