by Jackie J
The diaries of Annabella had been most
revealing to Emily, she had studied them in detail and had become familiar with
all aspects of Annabella’s life and motivation’s over the recent past and going
back many years. The entries leading up to Annabella taking the reckless plunge,
and giving herself into the clutches of Buckshire manors housekeeper, exposing
her troubled mind. The beautiful self-
assured socialite, that Emily had so much admired, was in stark contrast to the
truth of her writings.
Emily had spent hours and hours over many years with
Annabella but never had the truth, that had been revealed by her readings, ever
been exposed. Annabella’s deep- rooted wish and need for her self -flagellation
and denigration a continuing theme for many years. Desires and needs now being
fully exploited by her mother with maid Annie. The more that Emily read the
more understanding of Annabella’s apparent misery she became. Whilst Emily had
heard rumours, she was surprised that to compound Annabella’s self- loathing, Annabella
knew, in detail, all about the Countesses affair with Lord Edmond, that made
salacious reading.
Every hour of every day Emily was all that
Annabella displayed, now adept at portraying all the traits Emily had known,
not what Emily now knew to be truth of her character. Emily had found the Earl,
her father now, both fragile and charming but understood the roots of
Annabella’s loathing and that continued relationship between them had to be
maintained, as difficult as that was. Emily had no problem in enjoying the
lavish lifestyle that Annabella had lived. Spending time at her apartments in
London, no less frequently than Annabella had before her. Emily’s mother, Lady
Hogarth had visited Buckshire manor on numerous occasions since the return of her
brother and had amused Emily with an update on maid Annie’s progress at
Sandowns. Annie, Annabella, still
unaware that her father and Constance had returned from Switzerland over two
months ago. All was proceeding well at Buckshire manor and Sandowns and the
recent seizures, the Earl had suffered, provided all the encouragement needed
for the continued subterfuge.
Constance, watching her husband’s health
deteriorate by the day was beside herself. The surrogate Annabella, ever more
confident in her guise had intimated her intentions with her inheritance and
Constance was becoming ever more aware of the consequences for herself should
Annabella take control of Buckshire manor and all its wealth. Annabella had
been away from Buckshire manor more than she had been in residence and
Constance had been given little opportunity to reignite the dark desires that
had seen Annabella willingly don the apron for her housekeeper. Forewarned by
her mother, Emily kept well away from Constance, nothing unusual about that,
the diaries had revealed that Annabella and Constance had been daggers drawn
for years. No matter how hard Constance had tried, no matter how many subtle
and not so subtle hints she dropped, Constance could not get Annabella to bite,
to reveal her weakness, it was as if Annabella had never been a maid for the
housekeeper and of course, the Annabella now at Buckshire manor never had.
Constance’s patience eventually ran out,
she was going to confront Annabella and by hook or by crook, with Jarvis’s
help, get that spoiled prissy princess out of silk and lace and back into
uniform.
Martha listened nervously to her
Mistresses plans, she would have to go along with them or the scheming and
plotting, of which she was complicit, would unravel. Despite Maratha repeatedly
telling her Mistress that Annabella was in total denial of ever being a maid
Constance was adamant.
“I don’t care if Annabella denies
everything, she was a maid for you and she will be a maid again, now get a
uniform ready for her.”
A curtsy, and Martha was gone, she had to
find Annabella and warn her.
Emily chuckled when Jarvis, in quite a
state, told her of what the Countess, her Mistress, had planned. Emily did not
panic, she was Annabella the heiress to Buckshire manor and it would seem, with
the Earls worsening condition, she would be inheriting sooner rather than
later. With instructions given to Jarvis Annabella made plans of her own and waited
for Constance to spring her surprise. Annabella did not have to wait long. The following week. Thursday afternoon, under
some fictitious pretext, Constance asked Annabella to meet with her in the east
wing annex, a seldom used area of Buckshire manor.
When Annabella arrived to meet with
Constance, she feigned surprise at seeing the housekeeper stood by the wall
behind the Countess.
Constance did not mince her words.
“So young lady or should I call you Annie?
Yes, I know what you did whilst your father and I were away from the manor. A
maid, my goodness, Miss Annabella Montgomery, daddy’s little princess, wants to
be a housemaid, was indeed a housemaid whilst I was away. Well Annie, being
Mistress of this manor, I see no reason that we cannot get you back into your
uniform and into service as a housemaid. We both know that deep down that is
want you desire, to be a common maid, and do not worry, Jarvis will ensure you
will soon be back exactly where you want to be.
The Countess turned to her housekeeper.
The uniform Jarvis, give it to Annie.”
Annabella frowned at Jarvis for effect.
“Really Constance, Mistress of Buckshire
manor, but not for long. A maid me? So that is why you have been making those
ridiculous comments when we have been together. Would you serve tea like that
Annabella, is that how you would bow your apron tapes Annabella, would you
curtsy in that way Annabella, would you have your hair short like the other
maids Annabella? Need I go on? Now, it all makes sense. Well I hate to
disappoint you Constance but I have no intention of being your maid or entering
the service of the Mistress of Buckshire manor and I must remind you, with my
father’s passing, it will be I who will be Mistress here not you.”
Annabella laughed as if it was a spare of
the moment idea.
“You seem anxious to see someone wearing
the maids uniform Jarvis is holding, I think you should try it on, in fact I
don’t think it, I demand it.”
Constance was taken aback having totally
underestimated the completeness of Annabella’s rehabilitation. Of course, if
the confident young madame in front of her was indeed Annabella, her plan may well
have succeeded, to tempt and regress poor Annabella back into a life of
servitude, but it was not. It was Emily the daughter of Lady Hogarth and the
predator was about to become the prey.
Attack was always Constance’s first line of
defence and she laughed out loud.
“You can deny yourself all you want, I
know, I know you have been a maid in this very Manor, you have given in to your
desires for servitude once and you will again, surely it is best that you let
me help you fulfil those desires, the uniform is yours girl, now put it on and
drench yourself in the servility of your dreams.”
Annabella smirked and mocked applause.
“Oh, how very tempting but I think not.”
“I am leaving this room, which no doubt
you chose because of its discrete nature, being in an unused part of the manor,
and I will return in an hour. The future Mistress of Buckshire manor expects to
find you dressed in that uniform, underwear, boots, everything for the future
Mistress of Buckshire manor’s inspection. Should the future Mistress of
Buckshire manor find that is not the case, well, when the time comes, the
future Mistress of Buckshire manor will not look on the Countesses continued
residence at the manor favourably, or her allowance.”
Annabella smiled at Constance’s expression
of incredulity.
“Your choice Connie.”
Annabella turned at the door.
“Jarvis out, come with me.”
Constance appealed to Annabella.
“Please Annabella don’t make me do this,
and the uniform, it won’t fit me.”
Annabella smirked.
“I think you will find it does, trust me,
it will fit perfectly.”
Annabella and the housekeeper left, and
Martha could not resist a suppressed giggle.
“Do you think she will wear it Miss, the
maid’s uniform, all of it?”
Annabella smiled.
“We will see, won’t we?”
Martha headed to the kitchens to bring the
tray that had been made ready and Annabella went into the adjoining room, which
had been prepared, and took a seat.
Constance cursed under her breath watching
the conceited trollop leave the room.
“Bloody arrogant little bitch, how dare
she, how dare she, Connie? I am the Mistress of Buckshire manor, me!”
Constance ripped the dust sheet off a
chaise lounge, stared at the maid’s uniform hung by the window then sat with
her head in her hands, what was she to do?
That clever little madame had turned the
tables on her and Constance never saw it coming. Her mind churned, Jarvis, she
must have something to do with this, feathering her own nest, she must know
Annabella is set to inherit the manor. I should have known, all those hints, they
went right over Annabella’s head, what a mess, what a bloody mess. Now the
cheeky madame wants me in the maid’s regalia.
Constance, only too well aware of the
veiled threat of Annabella, to have her thrown out of the manor without a penny
when she inherits Buckshire manor, considered her options. If Annabella,
despite her denials, had been crazy enough to become a maid, and no doubt she
had. Jarvis first and then Maud having confirmed it to be so, then tossing her
out on her ear was more than just a possibility if Constance cannot find a way
to disinherit the Earls daughter.
So, Annabella wants to see me wearing a
maid’s uniform, no doubt for her perverse amusement, well that is no big deal,
let her have her fun, who is going to see me in this part of the manor. Perhaps
seeing me wearing the maid’s uniform will actually trigger the relapse I am
after?
Constance laughed and resigned herself to
conceding to Annabella’s demands approaching the uniform wanting to get this
over with.
Self -consciously Constance started to
strip believing the maids dress would never fit, whilst she hated to admit it,
Annabella’s figure was much more slender than her own, which strangely appeared
even more of a contrast since Constance had returned to the manor. Having
carefully folded her clothes on the chaise lounge Constance shuddered trading
her silk underwear for the baggy course calico, the shame of it. Into her
petticoat Constance thought the lace trim a contradiction to the utilitarian
nature of the garment. It was the second time her ostentatious jewellery had
snagged and thought it best to remove it and leave it with her clothing.
Lifting the black wool dress, its heaviness surprised her but not as much as
how well the dress fitted fastening the many buttons from her waist over the
bodice to the high collar. Constance stared at the apron and mop cap for some
time before accepting that she would have to wear them. Similar with the heavy
boots she laced up and like the dress, oddly, they were a perfect fit.
There was no mirror in the room and
Constance was pleased that she could not see how she looked guessing that she
would be horrified if she could. The windows however, although dirty, offered a
blurry reflected image and Constance sighed. Sat by her pile of clothes she
brooded and waited for what seemed an eternity feeling more uncomfortable by
the minute.
Tense and bored Constance could not resist
and standing by the window, having tucked the remaining strands of her pinned
up hair under the trim of her cap, lowered a curtsy and mouthed breathlessly
through gritted teeth.
“Yes, Mistress Annabella, whatever you
wish Miss Annabella.”
The door to the room opening Constance
turned sharply from the window blushing and not knowing what to do with her
hands.
Annabella smiled at Constance’s
embarrassment, just like she knew, the uniform was a perfect fit.
“A Countess in a maid’s uniform? No, it
will have to be Connie whilst you are dressed like that won’t it?”
Constance was seething Annabella was
obviously going to have her fun with her and sarcastically replied.
“Yes Miss, Connie Miss.”
Annabella pushed further.
“And a curtsy Connie, a curtsy.”
If Constance could, she would have gladly
grabbed Annabella by the neck and throttled her, but she resolved to let
Annabella have a moment of glory, she would have her revenge when Annabella
eventually succumbed to her desires, which Constance was still convinced she
would, and lowered a curtsy.
Annabella approached the Countess and
fussed with the collar of her dress and straightened the yoke of her bibbed
apron.
“And you said it wouldn’t fit, a perfect
fit I would say.”
“Now come with me.”
Constance hesitated she could not be seen
like this.
“Annabella, no I am not leaving this room,
I won’t, bad enough you have me dressed like this.”
Annabella turned towards the door and
opened it.
“Don’t worry we are only going into the
next room.”
Annabella strode out into the hallway and
a sheepish Countess crept behind her. Entering the next room Constance stood
back. The adjacent room she had just left was semi derelict, dusty, its
furniture covered, this room in total contrast looked lived in, used, clean,
tidy?
Annabella was already seated, and Constance
motioned herself towards a second chair only for Annabella to stop her short.
“No, no, a maid sitting come, come,
Connie. You just stand here in front of me, let me admire your new look.”
Constance stood all awkward again unsure
about her hands. Annabella noticed her dilemma.
“Fold them across your apron Connie, your
hands, that’s where they go.”
Constance was feeling strange and
uncomfortable by Annabella’s manipulation and instruction but with her hands
folded across her apron a level of comfort was obtained.
Annabella smirked.
“So, if you are standing comfortably, I
shall begin.”
“Yes, as you obviously know, I was a maid
whilst you were away from Buckshire, I signed an agreement with your
housekeeper to have me for her maid. Unfortunately, Jarvis took my desires
further than I could have imagined, my fault entirely but the consequences were
grave. I lost my mind, even accepted one of your service bands, how Jarvis
acquired that I do not know, and that is how Auntie Maud found me. Nothing but
a common housemaid, a willing housemaid accepting of the name Annie. If you had
returned when you had planned that is how you would have found me.
Aunt Maud
managed to break the spell I had cast over myself and nursed me back to a full
recovery as you can see. Now I find you, my Stepmother, obviously having been
made aware of my plight, trying to drag me back into that dark place and put me
to work, a maid, to be one of your maids, here at the manor. No doubt to keep
me a maid, hide me away in your service and live off my father’s wealth.
It was like her whole plot was being
unravelled before her, Constance had to refute Annabella’s claims. She had had
time to think whilst sat brooding wearing her own household’s maids livery and
interrupted Annabella.
“No, No Annabella I just wanted to see if
it was true what had happened to you I would never…”
Annabella glared at Constance stamping her
foot silencing Constance’s utterances.
“Shut up! I have not finished; you are
dressed as a maid and you will act as a maid, you will speak when spoken to.”
Constance was surprised at herself she
felt awkward even meek and capitulated, was it the uniform she was wearing?
Feeling her head lowering she swiftly raised it. She had never been spoken to
like that especially not by Annabella.
“That’s better, I would like to believe
your denial but I can only conclude that was your plan and had it been you who
had found me in my state that is most probably where I would be now. Wearing
the uniform, that you now wear, still a maid, left in the clutches of your
housekeeper Jarvis to be one of your housemaids.”
Constance again tried to interrupt.
“Please Annabella, believe me I... ”
Annabella was unsure, but quick to her
feet slapped Constance across her face into silence and was quickly seated
watching the look of shock build on Constance’s face.
Before Constance could regain her
composure, Annabella continued.
“I told you to shut up I have not
finished.”
“So, what else could my wicked stepmother
have done besides trying to exploit her daughter’s mental frailty to keep her
for one of her maids? Adultery with Lord Edmund, yes, I know all about Lord
Edmund.”
Rubbing her cheek in disbelieve at want
Annabella had just done to her, Constance was feeling more vulnerable with
every word Annabella spoke, how did Annabella know about Lord Edmund?
The door opened and Miss Jarvis entered
and hid her pleasure at seeing the Countess dressed as she was stood meekly in
front of the seated Annabella and followed the instructions Annabella had given
her.
“The tray you requested is here in the
hallway Miss Annabella, will your maid be serving you?”
The ferociousness of the Countesses glare
at her Housekeeper could have stripped the varnish from the door through which
she had just entered.
Annabella hid her enjoyment of the
situation and spoke in an authoritative tone.
“Yes, she will.”
“Connie bring in the tray and serve.”
Constance was inwardly screaming but as
well as Annabella was hiding her emotions so did she, and mockingly lowered a
curtsy speaking sarcastically.
“Yes Miss Annabella.”
The tray retrieved and placed on a low
table Constance proceeded to do her best serving tea to whom she believed to be
her stepdaughter.
With Jarvis having left, Constance watched
Annabella delicately sip on her cup unsure where this was all leading, was
Annabella going to tell her father about Lord Edmund? she was soon to find out.
Annabella was in no rush to proceed with
her plan enjoying the obvious discomfort of the Countess but having finished
her tea she stared at Constance retrieving a prepared document which drew
Constance’s eyes to it.
Annabella smiled.
“Take a seat and read this.”
It was a confession for wanting to take
Annabella to be her maid and her adultery with Lord Edmund. In closing it
guaranteed that the Countess would be allowed to stay at Buckshire manor and
receive an allowance in keeping with her station when Annabella inherited
Buckshire manor and its associated wealth, when the Earl died.
Annabella let Constance read through the
document for a second time.
“I am aware of your scheming Constance,
what you have just tried to do with me proved that, and I am also aware of my
vulnerability. But for the treatment that Auntie Maud organised I have little
doubt it would be I dressed as you are and who sits were you do now. The
document gives us both what we want. You can remain at the manor with your
allowance and I am protected from your further attempts to regress me into my
darkness and have me for your maid. We both know my father has little time
left. When he does die, for what you have done, I could quite rightly ask you
to leave Buckshire manor and there would be no allowance. Lord Edmund relies
heavily on the patronage of Buckshire manor and, without the revenues my father
so generously allows Lord Edmund to keep, being the son, he never had, well you
would both be in the poor house.”
Annabella stood from her chair looking
down on a bewildered Constance.
“I leave for London in the morning and I
will return on Wednesday. When I do return, I will find you here, in this room,
dressed as you are now, with the document signed. If not? Well neither of us
want that do we?
Chapter 12? And no ending in sight? Ech! "What, will the line stretch out to the crack of doom?"
ReplyDeleteWonderful Jackie ! With the real Annabella safely shackled at Sandowns, the former rich girl is now no more than a slave scrubbing the floors of Lady Hogarth's mansion and serving her Mistress's most intimate needs. And Emily, now the ONLY Annabella will have HER feet kissed by "Lady" Constance who will soon discover just how truly cruel a slave's life is, the cold hard reality of slavery specially under another woman's whip. Lady Hogarth's triumph is total. Well done Jackie!
ReplyDelete“Good girl, Lady Hogarth has plans for you Annie, now you will go back to your duties and not a word of what you have told me to anyone, understand girl?”
ReplyDelete"Whilst in the service at Sandowns you are mine to do with has I wish, my only connection to you is that you are my maid and nothing more, you understand that don’t you Annie?"
It seems that the only plans for maid Annie are to be completely forgotten about as yet another Jackie story abandons it's titular character and twists off in another direction.
Shame as this one actually showed promise.
Perhaps Ms J could start appending flow charts, to help readers keep track of who is serving whom at a given point in the plot.
ReplyDeleteDoes anyone have any idea what's happening in this story?
ReplyDeleteI'm completely baffled
Hi Elise, this is a wonderful story by Ms. Jackie. Enjoy the story and follow the plot of greed, lies, and lack of character on the part of all the major characters. Greed, lies, and deception are the central points with the main objective of seizing control of the Earl's fortune and Buckshire Manor. At this point, nothing is set in stone with Constance momentarily under the thumb of Annabella (Emily). Lady Hogarth's "House of Cards" is still in danger of being torn down along with her designs to grab control of the Earl's fortune. Annie may be hidden away at Sandowns, but she may yet be a force to be reckoned with. Don't write the Countess off yet either. Annabella's (Emily) may yet be exposed to face dire consequences. None of the villains in the store are are free and clear to include the Earl or Jarvis. Jackie, well done. Ronnie.
DeleteI love this story! It's well written.
ReplyDeleteMe too
DeleteI love this story. And the plot is as wicked as real life can be.
ReplyDeleteThe execution of that plot has been top notch. I couldn't agree more.
DeleteDear Ms Jackie. Another well-written chapter with plenty of drama and suspense. Emily has seized the upper hand, but she is still in danger of being exposed with consequences. Likewise, Lady Hogarth may also be exposed. It was fun to see the Countess being subjugated to the role of a common maid. Will she be forced to wear her own neck band denoting her position as maid and what of her relationship with the other maids at Buckshire Manor? How will visitors to the Manor react to her new position? What would happen if Emily was forced to don the apron and join the Countess in the ranks of servants? Can Annie make a recovery and regain her position, if only to spoil Lady Hogarth's Plans?
ReplyDeleteBuckshire Manor is in a quiet turmoil with everyone jockeying for positions of power. Jarvis's position is not safe. Lady Hogarth's actions will have a strong bearing as to what happens to Jarvis as the housekeeper is now at odds with the Countess. Jarvis is also a witness to the Countess's humiliation at the hands of Annabella which will raise the question of revenge.
"Revenge is a dish best served cold" (source is unclear). The Countess will surely seek retribution on Annabella. Wouldn't it be a dream to have the Countess sign the confession, don her maid's uniform, wear her own necklace of servitude, sign an indenture contract, work under Jarvis, and take up residence in the maid's quarters?
This story keeps getting better and better with more dark avenues to explore and more consequences for the characters to experience. I hope that you have plans for maid Annie to gain a resurgence with a return to Buckshire Manor. I can't wait for the next installment. Ronnie.
Ronnie, your comments are as nonsensical and confusing as this ridiculous plotline.
DeleteAnother story spiralling out of control, perhaps Jackie should figure out what she wants to happen before she starts writing.
Idiot.
@Charles
ReplyDeleteJackie J's stories are not my cup of tea, even when they manage a minimal level of coherence. A while back, someone referred to her style as "kinky Downton Abbey fanfic", which I thought a very apt description. She is obviously a Marmite writer. A lot of readers of this blog hate her stories, while a lot of others love them. The ones who love them love them because of the heavy stereotypes and blatant fan service, not in spite of them. "What Annabella Wants Annabella Gets" is a dog's breakfast of a story, but even it has its fans. I think that in itself illustrates the futily of trying to convince people they should raise their literary standards. If you are going to try to convince them, it would go over a lot better without any resort to personal attacks. "Play the ball and not the man."
Jackie since the awful destiny of Countess Polanski I'm fascinated by the sufferings of self imposed humiliation and slavery so vividly depicted in your wonderful stories. Please carry on your exceptional work and don't let some critics disturb you. You are a very talented author Jackie and I admire you very much !
ReplyDeleteThank you for all your comments.
ReplyDeleteNot your cup of tea thats fine.
For those enjoying the twists and turns, there are more to come, with many chapters written yet to be published here on Camille's site.
"Jackie should figure out what she wants to happen before she starts writing."
Made me smile,
Jackie J
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I'm not sure I'd be smiling if someone basically said my writing style resembles a bowl of noodles with a chastity belt thrown in but hey ho.
DeleteHi Charles. I read your comments and critique with interest. It is obvious that this story is not your cup of tea which is understandable and fine. You can always end your torment by turning the page and reading something else. Jackie, I am still going to enjoy Annabella's plight as the plot enters its twists and turns. Ronnie.
ReplyDeleteAm I the only one wondering if "Ronnie" is another Jackie J pseudonym?
DeleteProbably has a short black bob for a haircut and suddenly turned lesbian without any previous indication.
DeleteAlso, makes as much sense as a Jackie plot.
"Ronnie" is a gender-ambivalent name ending in -ie. Ronnie writes in a similarly gushy way, and sounds rather proprietary in her (?) defence of Jackie J's stories.
DeleteTo All you interested critics:
DeleteBe reassured that I am not Jackie J. I certainly lack her talent for story telling and I cannot write as well as she does. It is a compliment to be compared to her, but I am just not in her league. I still enjoy the stories though. Ronnie.
I can't wait to see former Lady Constance treated like property by cruel and triumphant Lady Hogarth. For life swallowed up by Lady Hogarth's ownership.
ReplyDeleteYep.... Those are all definitely words.
DeleteFormer Lady Constance will learn how intoxicating ownership can be, specially when one is shackled for life.
ReplyDelete