by Melissa
Part 11.
Discovering Elmwood Academy as a privileged student.
The morning sun
peeked through the luxurious drapes, casting warm light across my room. I
stirred, the weight of the previous night's realization still heavy on my
chest. Was it all a dream? Would the other Melissa Jones - the redhead - arrive
and shatter the illusion? But then, a knock on the door jolted me back to
reality.
Opening the door,
I was greeted by three girls, their faces alight with friendly smiles. Their
polished uniforms and confident demeanours screamed "Elmwood Academy
royalty." Yet, their voices held a warmth that surprised me. They
introduced themselves as my next-door neighbours, privileged Elmwood students
named Jessica, Emma and Olivia. Their voices held a warmth that surprised me.
Used as I was to averted gazes and hushed whispers, this open friendliness felt
surreal.
"Good morning, Melissa!" Jessica's voice rang out, bubbly and enthusiastic. "We saw you weren't out and about yet, so we thought we'd invite you to join us for breakfast in the lounge."
Emma, the quiet
observer of the group, chimed in, "It's the most incredible spread, with
everything you could imagine. And the company's pretty good too," she
added with a wink.
Olivia, the
fashionista of the trio, flashed a dazzling smile. "Come on, we wouldn't
want you to miss out! Put on your uniform, and we'll show you the way."
The invitation
hung in the air, laced with genuine kindness. I hesitated, the weight of my
secret pressing down on me. Normally, the very idea of rich entitled girls
would have made me bristle. But something about their genuine smiles and the
warmth in their eyes disarmed me, and the thought of sharing a meal with these
seemingly friendly girls, of experiencing another slice of this privileged
world, was too tempting to resist. Taking a deep breath, I agreed, my voice
barely above a whisper. "Sure, thank you."
Hesitantly, I donned the unfamiliar schoolgirl uniform again, the soft fabric still unfamiliar against my skin but whispering promises of a different life. Joining my new neighbours, I followed them through the corridors, their laughter echoing in the grand halls. As I walked alongside them, their chatter filled the hallway, a symphony of excitement and plans for the day. I listened, absorbing their world, their language, feeling like an outsider peering into a secret club. But their casual acceptance, their lack of judgment, offered a sliver of comfort.
Following their
lead, I entered the lounge, a haven of gleaming marble and crystal chandeliers.
The air buzzed with lively chatter and the aroma of freshly baked pastries. As
I approached the entrance scanner, a wave of nervousness washed over me. But with
a practised ease, my companions placed their fingers on the pad, the green
light flashing in recognition. I followed suit, my heart pounding in my chest.
To my relief, the scanner accepted my fingerprint, granting me access. Relief
mingled with a strange sense of elation as I stepped inside, joining the throng
of students enjoying a decadent breakfast spread.
The breakfast
lounge was a vision of opulence. Crystal chandeliers cast a soft glow over
plush velvet booths and polished mahogany tables. The aroma of freshly baked
pastries and brewed coffee filled the air, promising a culinary feast. As I sat
down, a maid immediately appeared and dropped a curtsy, her smile as polished
as the silver cutlery. The three girls, oblivious to my internal turmoil,
happily ordered an array of exotic dishes. I followed suit, my mouth watering
at the unfamiliar names and descriptions. The food, when it arrived, was a
revelation. Each bite was a burst of flavour, a testament to the culinary
mastery at play.
Over steaming mugs
and plates piled high with gourmet delights, I engaged in conversation with my
companions, carefully weaving my invented persona into the tapestry of their
lives. I learned about their classes, their extracurricular activities, their dreams
for the future. They, in turn, shared stories of their families, their weekends
spent horseback riding or attending exclusive events. The more I listened, the
more I realized that beneath the polished exteriors, these girls were just that
- girls. They had insecurities, anxieties, and dreams just like me. In the
background, the maids were toiling in silence to make our experience more
pleasant, but nobody was paying any attention to them. I couldn't help admiring
their graceful gestures, but, for all students, it was as if they were
invisible.
As I sat amongst
my newfound companions, sharing stories and savouring the delicate pastries, I
couldn't help but be drawn to their genuine warmth. They were, indeed,
privileged, but their kindness and lack of pretence disarmed my initial
apprehension. Perhaps, I thought, wealth and privilege wasn't always synonymous
with arrogance and entitlement. The lines between reality and my borrowed
identity blurred, creating a strange sense of belonging I hadn't expected. But
the truth remained a ticking time bomb. How long could I maintain this charade?
And what would happen when the other Melissa Jones arrived, exposing my
deception?
As we finished our breakfast, the girls suggested exploring the school grounds together after our lessons. "This place is incredible, right?" Jessica exclaimed, gesturing to the opulent surroundings. "But honestly, the best part is exploring the grounds. There's a hidden garden rumoured to have the most beautiful rose bushes, a secret spot by the lake with the most breathtaking view, and a well-equipped rooftop observatory."
The thought of
exploring the hidden corners of Elmwood Academy, a world I never dreamed I'd
have access to, sent a thrill through me. The desire to experience it all, even
if for a stolen moment, warred with the nagging guilt of my masquerade. I
hesitated. The thought of being further entangled in this charade filled me
with unease. Yet, the prospect of adventure, of experiencing Elmwood Academy
beyond the confines of my room, was undeniably tempting. I weren't sure how
long this charade could last, but for now, I was determined to experience this
new world to the fullest. Finally, I took a deep breath. "I...I wouldn't
mind exploring with you," I admitted, my voice barely a whisper.
Their faces lit up
with genuine delight. "That's amazing!" Olivia squealed, clapping her
hands. "We'll do that after our lessons! We know all the best shortcuts.
But now let's head to our first class."
"Mrs.
Williams will love you in class," Emma chimed in, her voice reassuring.
"She's the headmistress, but also, and more importantly, our Leadership
Development teacher. Her course is focusing on communication, public speaking,
negotiation, conflict resolution, delegation, critical thinking, and strategic
decision-making. She's one of the best teachers at Elmwood!"
The mention of my
first lesson with Mrs. Williams grounded me. I thought I couldn't afford to
lose myself in this borrowed identity, not with my community service
obligations looming. Yet, the girls' invitation held a promise of connection, a
chance to glimpse a world beyond my own. "Sounds interesting," I
said, a smile tugging at my lips.
With a mix of
trepidation and excitement, I headed towards my first class, my head held a
little higher than usual. As I walked with my new companions under the watchful
gaze of Elmwood Academy, the weight of my secret still hung heavy, but so did a
flicker of hope. Each step felt like a tightrope walk, the thrill of the
unknown balanced precariously against the fear of being caught. Yet, a strange
sense of determination bloomed within me. This unexpected opportunity, this
stolen glimpse into a different world, was changing me. I was learning,
observing, adapting. Perhaps, in this borrowed identity, I was discovering a
strength, a confidence I never knew I possessed. I knew the truth would come
out eventually, but for now, I was Melissa Jones, the girl who was treated with
respect, the girl who belonged, even if it was just an illusion.
Mrs. Williams, the Leadership Development teacher, greeted me with a warm smile, presenting herself as my main teacher, her eyes crinkling at the corners. As I settled into my seat, the classroom buzzing with the energy of new beginnings, I took a deep breath. This was my first step into the unknown, my first lesson not just in academics, but in the art of navigating a world that wasn't my own. The morning unfolded in a whirlwind of activity. Mrs. Williams' class was captivating, her passionate style bringing even abstract topics to life. I found myself engaged, my mind absorbing new information with surprising ease. This was totally unlike any course I had followed during my past public school experience.
But, at the same
time, what started as a surprisingly interesting discussion about the pros and
cons of different political systems soon delved into the ruthless underbelly of
asserting upper-class dominance within seemingly democratic societies. I shifted
uncomfortably in my seat as Mrs. Williams droned on about the importance of
maintaining the power of the ruling class in our society. The other students,
all of whom came from wealthy and influential backgrounds, nodded in agreement,
their faces carefully composed to convey a mixture of boredom and indifference.
It was as if they had heard this speech a hundred times before, and each time
it grew more tedious. But for me, this was all new. My family was not part of
the upper echelon, and it was only by mistake that I was able to attend as a
student in this exclusive school. As I listened to the teacher speak about how
the ruling class had a divine right to rule over the lower classes, I couldn't
help but feel a growing sense of unease. It wasn't that I disagreed with
everything Mrs. Williams was saying, but rather the way in which it was being
presented. There was something fundamentally wrong with the idea that some
people were born to lead and others to be led, I thought.
The more Mrs.
Williams talked, the more I found myself thinking about my own family and
friends and the struggles they faced every day. I couldn't help but wonder how
different things might be if they had been born into a wealthy and influential
family like the ones in the room. At the same time, I knew I could not simply
accept what the teacher was saying as gospel truth. There had to be another way
for society to function, a way that was fairer and more equitable for everyone.
As the class progressed, Mrs. Williams began to discuss specific case studies
of historical families and dynasties who had managed to maintain control over
generations. She spoke of the ruthlessness with which they had manipulated
economics, politics, and social structures to ensure their continued dominance.
While the other students seemed fascinated by these accounts, I found myself
growing increasingly uncomfortable. I couldn't help but feel that there was
something fundamentally wrong with the world the teacher was describing.
Mrs. Williams then
shifted her focus to the delicate art of deception, i.e. of maintaining a
public image of benevolence while wielding power behind the scenes. She
discussed techniques for crafting persuasive narratives and using media to
control public perception. As she explained the importance of creating a façade
of democracy and equality while secretly maintaining control, I couldn't help
but feel a chill run down my spine. It was as if I were being given a glimpse
into the inner workings of a twisted and manipulative machine. The other girls
in the class nodded along, seemingly unperturbed by the teacher's lessons. They
were already well-versed in these tactics, having been raised in families who
had perfected the art of maintaining power at any cost. I, on the other hand,
found myself growing increasingly uncomfortable with the direction of the
conversation. I didn't want to live in a world where people were treated as
pawns in some grand chess game, where their lives were nothing more than tools to
be used by the elite to maintain their position at the top.
As the lesson
progressed, I began to notice subtle differences between myself and my
classmates. It wasn't just their upbringing or their families' wealth; there
was something deeper, more intangible that set them apart. They had an air of
confidence about them, a sense of entitlement that came from knowing that they
would always be in control. They spoke differently, moved differently, even
thought differently. They were not ordinary girls, I realized. They were
representatives of the upper-class families who would do anything to maintain
their power over the lower classes, over people like me. I felt a growing sense
of frustration as I listened to Mrs. Williams' lecture. I couldn't help but
think that there must be another way for society to function, a way that didn't
involve the ruthless exploitation of the many for the benefit of the few. I
longed for a world where people were given equal chance, where everyone had an
opportunity to pursue their dreams and live a fulfilling life.
My heart pounded
in my chest as I raised my hand, gathering the courage to speak my mind.
"Mrs. Williams," I began, my voice trembling slightly, "I can't
help but feel that what you're saying goes against the very essence of what it
means to be human. The idea that some people are born to lead and others to be
led seems fundamentally wrong. Don't you think that all men and women are
created equal and deserve freedom?"
The silence that
followed my words was deafening. The other girls in the class exchanged
glances, their expressions a mix of confusion and disbelief. Even Mrs. Williams
seemed taken aback, her mouth opening and closing as if she couldn't quite find
the words to respond. It was as if I had thrown a stone into a still pond, and
the ripples of my question were spreading outwards, making everyone
uncomfortable. Now, I've just betrayed myself like an impostor, I thought.
Finally, Mrs.
Williams regained her composure. Her voice was cool and collected as she
addressed me. "An interesting point, Miss Jones," she said, her tone
almost mocking. "But you must understand that the world does not work the
way you believe it should. It has always been the responsibility of the elite
to lead, to shape society and guide it towards progress. To believe otherwise
is naïve at best, dangerous at worst."
The other girls in
the class nodded in agreement, their expressions mirroring Mrs. Williams'
disapproval. They were used to being taught that their role in life was to
uphold the status quo, to maintain the delicate balance of power that had been
passed down from generation to generation. Questioning this hierarchy was
unthinkable, a sign of disloyalty to their families and their class. I felt a
surge of defiance rise within me as I listened to their condescending murmurs.
I knew that I was treading on dangerous ground, but I couldn't help but speak
my mind. "It is not the responsibility of the elite to lead," I
insisted, invoking the ideas of the thinkers of the Enlightenment. "It is
the right of all men and women to determine their own destiny, to live free
from the tyranny of oppressive rulers."
Mrs. Williams'
expression darkened at my words. "You dare speak of tyranny?" she
spat. "The elite have built this society, have brought progress and
prosperity to the masses. Without our guidance, they would still be living in
squalor and darkness." She gestured around the room, as if to emphasize
her point. "Look at this school, this very classroom. It is our
responsibility to educate the daughters of the aristocracy, to prepare them for
their role in maintaining the delicate balance of power."
I felt my anger
rising as Mrs. Williams continued to speak. I knew that the teacher was wrong,
that there was a different way for society to function. But trying to convince
my classmates, let alone my teacher, was like trying to stop a runaway cart.
They had been so thoroughly indoctrinated with the belief in their own
superiority that they couldn't even begin to understand another point of view.
My heart heavy with despair, I looked around the room, taking in the faces of
my classmates. They were all so certain of their own righteousness, so sure
that they were destined to rule. I wondered how many of them had ever stopped
to question where their beliefs came from, or why they were taught to fear
ideas that challenged their worldview.
Meanwhile, Mrs.
Williams continued her tirade, her voice growing louder and more insistent.
"You may not realize it, Miss Jones, but you are playing right into our
hands. By presenting the arguments of our enemies, you are helping us to
strengthen our own resolve. You are proving that we must work harder to
maintain our position of power, to protect our society from the chaos that
would ensue if we were to abandon our responsibilities."
The other girls in the class nodded along, their expressions growing more confident as they began to see the logic in Mrs. Williams' words. They knew that their place in society was secure, that they had been born into a world where their every whim would be catered to. The idea of equality, of sharing power with those they deemed inferior, was abhorrent to them. They had been raised to believe that it was their birthright to rule, and nothing I could say would change that.
"Miss
Jones," Mrs. Williams paused, looking at me right in the eyes, "I
encourage you to continue playing the devil's advocate in this classroom by
defending the theories of human equality championed by the Enlightenment
thinkers and their socialist successors. This will help your classmates to
explore the arguments of the enemies of upper-class rule and enable them to
hone their debating skills in order to better defend the status quo."
My gaze darted
across the room, searching for reactions, for judgment. But instead of scorn, I
saw a flicker of surprise, perhaps even admiration, in some eyes. Then, Mrs.
Williams asked several of my classmates to take turns debating with me, to
practice arguing against me for the importance of maintaining the balance of
power between the elites and the commoners. By doing that, they learned to use
language as a weapon, their words sharper than any sword. Using the concept of
"freedom" as a shield, I did my best to counter their arguments, but
I was alone against the whole class and found myself growing more and more
uncomfortable with the exercise. I couldn't help but see the hypocrisy in the
words of my classmates and in the way they praised the very system that
oppressed mankind. As they bombarded me with their arguments, I could also feel
the weight of their indoctrination bearing down on me, suffocating my ability
to think clearly.
The bell rang,
marking the end of the class. As my classmates filed out, Mrs. Williams stopped
me. "Miss Jones," she said, her gaze steady, "you may be a new
student, but your interventions in class have crossed a line. By challenging
the accepted order of things, you have violated an unspoken rule of Elmwood
academy. Your arguments in class makes me wonder if you truly belong in this
classroom."
Me and my big
mouth, I thought. Why couldn't I just stay quiet during class? I was pretty
sure Mrs Williams had seen through the charade of me pretending to be a
privileged student and was about to send me to my community service. But,
strangely enough, that didn't happen, as if the teacher had instead decided to
play a game with me.
"Miss
Jones," Mrs. Williams told me, "I will give you a chance to prove
that you are truly one of us. As a punishment for your behaviour, you will have
to write a detailed paper by next Monday proving that you understand how to
maintain the delicate balance of power between the elites and the commoners. I
noticed that you heavily relied on the concept of "freedom" when you
debated with me and your peers, so I ask you to demonstrate how the concept of
absolute freedom, as championed by Martin Luther, allowed in fact the existing
social hierarchy to continue, both during Luther's lifetime and in subsequent
centuries, how this concept later fostered the rise of capitalist dominance and
also how this, in turn, enabled the upper class to counter the greatest threat
that has ever weighed on its rule, i.e. the societal transformation embodied by
the Enlightenment ideal of freedom as expressed in the American and French
Revolutions, as well as in subsequent upheavals."
I was dumbfounded.
I had understood absolutely nothing about the subject of the assignment. I was
tempted to put an end to this charade by confessing my true identity, but,
instead, I quickly wrote down everything that the teacher had said.
"This is a
compulsory assignment," insisted Mrs Williams, "and you'd better do a
good job or you'll be expelled from Elmwood. I know that you are a smart girl,
or you wouldn't be here, so I am pretty confident you can succeed and prove that
you truly belong here. And if you do, I count on you to continue driving to
play the devil's advocate in our future lessons. But don't forget, I need your
paper on Monday morning. And it needs to be cold hard facts. No more equality
or human rights nonsense this time."
Leaving the
classroom to join my three companions Jessica, Emma and Olivia, I couldn't help
but feel a mix of exhilaration and anxiety. I wasn't unmasked yet and, with a
bit of luck, I might not be until the following Monday, when I had to hand in
my assignment. Jessica, Emma and Olivia congratulated me on my boldness,
admitting they would never have dared to intervene in class as I had done.
The day had been a
whirlwind, a constant dance between my real and borrowed identities. But as I
walked towards the secret garden, hand in hand with the privileged girls of
Elmwood, I knew one thing for sure: my journey had just begun, and the lines
between reality and possibility were already starting to blur. The weight of
the borrowed identity still pressed upon me, but so did a strange sense of
freedom. I was exploring this world, not as the girl I was expected to be, but
as a blank slate, ready to be filled with unexpected stories and experiences.
And who knew, perhaps somewhere along the way, I might even discover who I
truly was, beneath the borrowed status and the stolen privilege.
The following days passed like a dream. Convinced that the situation couldn't last, I did my best to make the most of the moment and didn't even try to think about the impossible assignment given to me by Mrs. Williams. But the worry gnawed at me. Where was the other Melissa Jones, the redhead? What had happened to her and why hadn't she claimed her rightful place? I even wondered if she'd been kidnapped at the train station and if my impersonation of her was preventing the authorities from coming to her aid. I felt no particular sympathy for an entitled girl like her, but I wouldn't want my silence to put her life in danger.
After one of my
law classes, during which the teacher had explained some of the flaws in the
legal system and had begun to show how to navigate the legal system to protect
the interests of the elite, and while I was taking advantage of a gap in my
schedule to go to the cafeteria, I noticed that a school maid was standing in
the hallway.
The maid - a
redhead - was looking at the flickering image on a large TV screen where the
student-run internal channel was broadcasting an interview with the dean of
Elmwood Academy, Mrs. Cavendish. Suddenly, I realised that this was the same
girl I had bumped into at the train station, the other Melissa Jones, the
privileged student whose place I'd taken. With shadows under her eyes, slumped
shoulders and weary limbs, she stood in the worn uniform signifying the least
respected position among the school's maids, i.e. a long slightly washed-out
dress, a starched apron, a maid's cap and a pair of cheap-looking shoes. Next
to her was a rubbish trolley she had obviously been using to empty trash cans,
but, at the moment, she was just looking at the TV screen, listening when Mrs.
Cavendish was boasting about the biometrics system used at Elmwood Academy.
Looking at the
redhead in her maid's uniform - or rather, in mine, actually - I understood why
no one was worried that I'd never turned up for my community service: the other
Melissa Jones had taken my place, just like I had taken hers.
The redhead was so
focused on the interview that she hadn't even noticed I was there. I wasn't
sure what to do, when suddenly another, older and better-dressed maid appeared.
"Girl," the older maid snapped at the redhead with an angry voice, "what
on earth are you doing standing there listening to that rubbish? Get
immediately back to work!" Then, she raised her hand and slapped the
redhead very hard in the face. "You're supposed to be cleaning, not
daydreaming," she barked with exasperation. "Your laziness is
unacceptable."
"I-I was just
listening to the dean's interview," the redhead stammered meekly, while
blushing.
"Listening to
an interview? While your work is left undone?" the older maid scoffed with
contempt. "You're a disgrace to the staff of this academy, and your
laziness is an insult to the school's reputation for excellence."
The redhead
lowered her head in shame, but didn't answer.
Horrified by what
I had just witnessed, I quickly retreated before either maid realised I was
there.
I felt sorry for
the redhead, but I really wouldn't have wanted to be in her shoes - or rather,
in mine, actually. The poor girl was really treated like shit by that horrible
woman - the older maid. And the slap she got looked rather painful. But, hey, better
her than me, I thought. But, also, how could she be such a loser and let that
happen to her? Why didn't she just say she was a privileged student and not a
community service girl? I knew I should have stepped in to put an end to her
ordeal, but the older maid was so frightening that I couldn't bring myself to
put myself at her mercy a minute earlier than necessary. Feeling ashamed, I
decided therefore to carry on pretending to be a privileged student as long as
I could. After all, I thought everything would be back to normal by the
following Monday, once I'd been unable to hand in my assignment to Mrs.
Williams.
But before my
fraud was going to be exposed, I intended to enjoy my first and, I presumed,
last weekend as a privileged girl. My next-door neighbour Jessica had invited
to her birthday party at her parents' castle on Saturday and my classmate
Olivia had invited me to an exclusive fashion show on Sunday. At first I had
turned down the invitations because I didn't have the right clothes for such
events, but fate seemed to want me to attend. The day before, a suitcase full
of magnificent designer clothes had been delivered to me. Apparently, the other
Melissa Jones had forgotten her suitcase and a stylish coat on the train and,
as I was mistaken for her, it was returned to me. And as luck would have it,
she and I, we shared the same size in shoes and clothing.
The weekend was
shaping up nicely. I was just trying hard not to think about the humiliating
tasks the redhead would have to perform while I was going to enjoy life to the
full with Jessica and Olivia. But after all, since the other Melissa Jones was
born, she'd been handed everything on a silver platter, whereas I'd had to
fight for everything I'd got. So it was only fair that I should also enjoy the
fruits of her privileges, at least for a few days.
Dear Readers,
ReplyDeleteThe wait is over! I'm bursting with excitement to finally share a new piece of my story with you all. So get ready to find out how the delinquent girl copes with her new life as a privileged student. But most importantly, after you've experienced it for yourself, I would love to hear what you think! Don't hold back – your feedback is what fuels the fire. So dive in, and share your thoughts in the comments below!
your humble maid Melissa
Thank you! Another excellent chapter. Keep them coming!
DeleteI'm Chinese and I'm writing this on a translator. Your writing is fantastic, it's like I see another Mrs. Ann's Vacation being born. Looking forward to the follow up. And send greetings from a Chinese reader.
ReplyDeleteEven if the teacher, Mrs. Williams, finds out that the delinquent Melissa is not a real student, the Elmwood Academy administration might be hesitant to expel her. Admitting they accidentally enrolled a lower-class girl as a privileged student could be a huge scandal. It would raise questions about the school's admissions process and their ability to properly vet their students. The potential damage to the school's reputation could be significant, especially considering the wealthy families who send their daughters there. To them, exclusivity is a key selling point of Elmwood, and having a mistake like this exposed could cause them to lose trust in the institution. So, the administration might be willing to look the other way, even if it means having the delinquent Melissa stay on as a student under false pretenses.
ReplyDeleteI think the delinquent girl could use the fear of scandal to blackmail the school administration into keeping her as a student for good.
ReplyDeleteToo bad that means the other Melissa won't be allowed back as a student anytime soon. But at least, even if she's deprived of the education she was supposed to receive, she's picking up some useful skills along the way. Even if her parents decide to disown and disinherit her after her community service, she'll still be able to earn a living working as a maid.
When will you make an End of this Story Melissa?
ReplyDeleteThe climax is pretty clear in my head – a crucial moment that will seal the fate of both Melissas. While I know the final part of the story will offer a sense of resolution, there's still, before we get there, a vast landscape of events to come, filled with detours, challenges and surprises waiting to unfold, that will shape both girls. And the story won't truly end with that final part. An epilogue (or maybe even two) beckons, teasing the futures of both Melissas a couple of years later.
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@Maid lukas: To answer your question more precisely, I don't know when I'll finish my story, but I think we might be about halfway through.
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I hope this story continues for many, many, many more chapters.
DeleteMany more chapters please.
DeleteAre there more works written by you besides this series?
DeleteInterested in more of my work? Check out "My Summer Job" on this website. It's a story partly inspired by a real-life experience. Plus, another website has just released the first part of another piece I wrote some time ago. Just search for "Undercover Maidbot" on Google.
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I really enjoyed the chapter. It is good to see she is now properly buttoned up in the image. The bowtie neckwear and the royal blue suit jacket are very becoming. In the next chapter might she be wearing the school necktie?
ReplyDeleteEquestrian activities as mentioned are a regular social activity. In addition to riding astride, perhaps some sidesaddle riding lessons are in store for Melissa?
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ReplyDeletemaybe a continuation of the story about katrin and mimi, for example after a year of service
Thank you for the chapter. Perhaps Melissa, when working on the paper, sees the error of her ways, begs Mrs. Williams for forgiveness, and becomes Mrs. William's and the school's best student and soon exemplifies everything Mrs. Williams expects in an Elmwood girl.
ReplyDeleteI can imagine Melissa doing the research for the paper Mrs. Williams has assigned her and Melissa seeing in the older school yearbooks and other school archives how formal the school used to be when compared to its current dress, deportment, decorum, etc. standards. The information transforms Melissa. She decides that not only is she going to become the epitome of an Elmwood girl, but that she is going to be the catalyst to transform Elmwood to the more formal and exacting standards it had. Melissa soon becomes Mrs. Williams' favorite student.
DeleteThank you for yet another delightful chapter to this wonderful story. For one, I'm hoping the fraud is never exposed and that the 'original' Melissa is fully immersed in a life of servitude as a commoner for the elites. Again, my thanks ..
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ReplyDeletePerhaps beneath the surface, the delinquent girl possesses a natural aptitude for this world of glitz and glamour. With time, this hidden talent could blossom, allowing her to not just survive but thrive in this elite society. Ultimately, she might even gain their full acceptance, becoming a true member of their exclusive circle.
ReplyDeleteThis was a fun read. I look forward to reading more. :)
ReplyDeleteThis elite school offers an interesting curriculum. The "original" Melissa may be too nice for such a shark's nest, but her delinquent namesake may be better armed to navigate the murky waters of this den of privilege and entitlement.
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