CONTRACTED
by Anastasia
Devereaux
CHAPTER ONE:
LUNETTE
The message on the
card was simple. “The usual coffee shop. 1 p.m. tomorrow. Arrive drag.”
As he entered the
coffee shop, Stewart fingered the card and flipped over the other side. He knew
what was written there — it was his own business card, after all — but it
always made him smile a bit.
“Anastasia
Devereaux Household Services: old-fashioned service, old-world respect,” it
read. It sounded so pretentious when phrased that way, but then, a certain
amount of formality was inherent to the game. “Sounds like a stripper name, or
maybe a drag queen,” Lunette had told him years ago, when he first made the
proposal.
In three years, he
had not yet come up with a phrase to genuinely describe what he was doing. He
didn’t consider himself transgender, not really — when not dressed up, he felt
quite male — nor did he think of himself exactly as a crossdresser. “I’m a drag
queen who does housework rather than perform onstage,” he’d once said, and that
felt as accurate as anything else. “Sissy maid” was a term he’d encountered,
but it felt … inadequate … to describe what this was. He wasn’t in this for humiliation;
he genuinely liked living as a servant. He called Ana “my other face,” and that
was as good as anything.
He had a wide
array of housecleaning clients, more than enough to keep him busy full-time,
but she was special. Lunette Stillwell -- a name no more real than Anastasia’s,
but one that made their personal game all the more insular -- had been with Ana
since before she’d had a name. The first person he’d come out to with his
crossdressing-maid habit, and one who’d helped him come to terms with the
identity. Six years now Ana had worked for Lunette, at least once per week and
sometimes more frequently, as a housemaid, assistant, occasional home
renovation labor and carpenter on Lunette’s house-flipping business. The latter
task tested Ana’s versatility, but she was more than read to accept
orders.
Lately she’d been
distracted by other tasks, and he missed their easy interaction, so this
mysterious summons certainly had his attention. He knew the coffee shop she
meant -- the same one down the street from his apartment, the place where he’d
first come out to her.
“Arrive drag,” it
said, and he followed the instructions, so to speak. He was more comfortable in
women’s wear anymore -- specifically Ana’s wide array of maid outfits -- but he
could fake being a cis male with the best of them. And he appreciated Lunette’s
habit of calling it “drag” when he dressed as a man. It made Ana’s identity
feel all the more authentic to him. Ana’s face felt more real to him than
Stewart’s did.
He looked up as Lunette
strode in, dressed in full business wear. He knew her well enough to pick her
out by her stride and the distinctive click of her high heels on the floor. She
paid no attention to him at first, taking her time ordering her coffee.
He waited as she
assembled her order and came over. It took everything he had to stay seated.
Ana always stood in Miss Lunette’s presence; Stewart did not. Nonetheless, she
paused uncomfortably for a moment before pulling out her chair, then sat and
pushed her sunglasses -- very expensive sunglasses, he was quite familiar with
her tastes by now -- up on her forehead.
She wasted no
time. “I have a business proposition regarding the young lady of both our
acquaintance,” she said, using her old habit of referring to Ana as a separate
person when they were out of character. Which, these days, was fairly rare. He
couldn’t recall the last time he’d dressed as a male in her presence.
“Well, as
Anastasia Devereaux’s business manager, I’m all for hearing new prospects,” he
said. He kept half an eye on her hands as she stirred cream into her coffee. It
felt somehow … wrong … to be both sitting in her presence and not attending to
her drink personally.
“I’ll get straight
to the point. I’m interested in retaining Miss Ana’s services exclusively,
full-time, for the long term.”
He took a deep
breath. “Define full-time.”
“My real estate
management has gone better than I expected. That Victorian mini-mansion we’ve
been fixing up? I’m not going to flip it after all. I’m planning on moving in
there myself. And it’s a big place. I’m going to need help maintaining it, not
to mention assistance just keeping this real estate stuff going.”
“So you want her
as your assistant?” he asked.
“Ohhh, no. Much
more than that.” She took a deep breath. “I want Ana as my live-in maidservant.
Very Downton Abbey, really. I’ll provide small quarters and all her uniform
needs, and in return, she gives me 24/7 service and sees to every need around
the house. Which, given its size, will be considerable.”
He tried to keep a
poker face at the immensity of the offer. He didn’t think he succeeded. “And
what, pray tell, does Miss Ana get out of this deal?” he asked.
“Why, the
lifestyle she’s always wanted, of course. The one I have heard about many times
and inferred even more by watching. Immersing completely in the role as a loyal
maid girl and leaving the rest of her life behind.” She pushed the empty
creamers aside, and he saw her eyes flicker to him. No surprise, he was
doing the same. If Ana was on duty, she’d have already disposed of her
mistress’ trash smoothly and silently almost before she noticed. Just like her
hesitation expecting her maid to pull out the chair. Months and months of
conditioning had trained them both about what to expect from the other.
“It seems to me,”
he said, “that this is more than just about my - about Ana’s fantasy.”
She grinned. “I
admit it. I’ve become very accustomed to the way Ana spoils me. I like having
my doors opened, my drinks served, my coat put on for me. Makes me feel like
royalty, or maybe The Godfather. Important, in any event.”
He leaned back,
taking it all in. “And you really want this? It’s one thing to be a part-time
game for us, but are you ready to go full-time? That’s a lot of responsibility,
to be the mistress of a maid at all times.”
She regarded him
coolly. “Remember what you said after I took Ana for that week on Key West? How
much she loved it? Despite, or maybe because of, the fact she was on duty and
in character nonstop, and that I never treated as anything more important than
my random help?”
“I did indeed. I
also seem to recall she got caned every time any of the resort workers annoyed
you.”
“Well, I couldn’t
very well beat THEM, now, could I? And I seem to recall myself that, what was
the saying? Ah, yes. ‘Being the maid means never getting to call your treatment
unfair.’ Point being, you spoiled the hell out of me that week. I only vaguely
remember the details of the vacation, though to be fair I was drinking a whole lot,
but I remember every detail of how well and how dedicated my maid was to taking
care of me. I think I got addicted to being served and treated like, well, the
Victorian mistress of the house.”
“I certainly
admit, it CAN be intoxicating, on both sides,” he agreed.
“And I’ve been
doing some reading and research lately. I found … a few interesting books on
old-timey servitude and I have some ideas.” She bit her lip slightly, despite
herself, at the thought. “I have to confess, they are some VERY interesting
thoughts. But you’ve been my part-time maid for five years now, dear; you’ve
learned to anticipate my needs very well. And honestly, it looks to be kind of
lonely in a house that big. I do like company, from time to time.” She gave a
crooked smile. “And I DEFINITELY enjoy the companionship of an obedient servant
who goes away the moment i tell them to.”
He shrugged. “We
enjoy what we enjoy.”
“Yes. And speaking
of which, you can expect PLENTY of corporal punishment if you do this with me.”
“Is that supposed
to sell me on this?” he said.
“It is, and you
KNOW it’s working,” she said. “I know full well what your life is like. You
barely feel natural appearing as a guy anymore, and you work for all those
housekeeping clients precisely to keep the feeling going. This cuts out a lot
of the middleman. This IS your hobby as well as your job. Being a maid is your
life. This just … lets you go all the way with it.” She leaned forward and
flashed a smile that he knew full well meant she was convinced she was going to
get her way. “You know this is what you want.”
He couldn’t
disagree with her logic. His bachelor’s degree in history was beyond useless,
and he’d gotten into housecleaning as a side hustle for lack of anything better
to do. Combining it with his crossdressing interest had turned out to be a more
lucrative business than he’d expected. “I still have all those housekeeping
clients, you know.”
“I do know. And I
regret that, but they can find someone else. Maybe not as good as Ana, but good
enough. And if this doesn’t work out, it’s not like you’ve lost anything. You
could move out and go right back to housecleaning for a dozen clients without
any trouble.” She was right on that front as well. Thanks to word of mouth and
Ana’s reputation around various subcultures from the bondage scene to roller
derby, he had more business than he could handle.
“I’m not talking
about being your fetish dispensary here,” she continued. “This is serious. And
long term.”
“I understand.”
“And once I get to
the mental place to make this happen, I’m not easily going back,” she said.
“We’re talking about a total lifestyle change for us both. Are you ready for
that?”
“I am. It feels
like the time I almost got married, except that didn’t have as much
negotiation.”
“If marriages were
negotiated this way, I think everyone would be happier.” Stewart had to admit,
seeing her be this detached and businesslike about his own servitude was rather
excitingin its own right. And he knew she knew, too.
He took a deep
breath. “Okay, Miss Lunette. I’m in.”
She grinned
brightly. “All right. Down to brass tacks. How hardcore do you want the
transition to be?”
“What do you
mean?”
“I mean we started
this out kind of easy but I also know you had a certain amount of
non-consensual fantasizing you’ve never played with. Being forced into
servitude and roughly treated from day one. I can offer you that. If you want.
Because there won’t be another chance after that. So tell me. How hard do you
want it?”
His eyes glittered
as he took her hand. “How hard have you GOT?”
She smiled
tightly. “Hard enough. We’re almost done. Listen carefully. I want you to be my
maid, only my maid, and nothing but my maid, for the rest of your life. Do you
agree?”
“Yes.” He knew the
‘rest of your life’ thing was an affectation -- wasn’t it? -- but it gave him a
tiny thrill nonetheless.
“Say it. I want to
hear you say it.”
He stood up,
reached across the table and took her hand. He might have been dressed male,
but his face was entirely Ana’s now. “Miss Lunette, I want to be your maid,
only your maid, and nothing but your maid, for the rest of my life.”
The smile
flickered, then vanished under businesslike veneer. “Granted.” She slid him an
envelope. “This contains instructions for winding up your business, packing up
your apartment, and settling up your mundane affairs. You have six weeks. Keep
your crossdressing to an absolute minimum, only what’s necessary to finish your
business. You’re Stewart for the time being. Ana belongs to me now and I don’t
appreciate others having unauthorized access to her, including you.” She stood
and put on her sunglasses. Instinctively and smoothly, Ana pushed her chair
back in beside her. “There’s a phone number in the folder. Don’t bother trying
to figure out where it goes. When you’re ready, and you’re sure you’re ready,
text ‘All set’’ to that number and wait. You can back out right up until the
moment you send that text, then you’re MINE, understood?”
“Yes ma’am.”
“Excellent. Do not
attempt to contact me again while you’re preparing. You’ll have six weeks to
miss me and after that you’ll never have that problem again. You are
dismissed.” She snapped her fingers in his face - a deliberately humiliating
power play, and it made his heart leap - turned on her heel and was gone.
CHAPTER TWO:
TRANSFER
TWO YEARS EARLIER:
“I never thought
I’d say this, but you’re too good,” Lunette remarked to Anastasia after
wrapping up a hard day’s work. “And yet I know you crave a little discipline
and corporal punishment as a reward, but it’s hard to punish someone who hasn’t
actually been bad. What AM I to do with you, little lady?”
“It would not do
for a maid to tell madam how to do her job,” Ana said primly.
“Mm-hmm. I’m
giving you a direct order, girl. Tell me the best way to justify discipline
when you haven’t been bad, and without you needing to pretend to be bad. I like
your dedication just the way it is.”
Ana thought on
this a moment. She had often pondered this conundrum herself - she enjoyed
being on the receiving end of corrective action, yet it went against all her
instincts to fall short in her duties. “Well, madam, most of the time I only
work for you one or two days a week,” she said. “It follows that I am absent
and therefore madam is denied the service to which a lady of her esteemed
station is entitled for the rest of the week. If madam wishes a valid excuse
for particularly harsh treatment, she would be well within her rights to, upon
her maid’s arrival for duties, address her absence as if it was an unauthorized
running away, and follow up accordingly.”
“Hmmmmm.” Her
smile was best described as ‘devilish.’ “You are a clever girl. Perhaps too
clever and putting airs above her station. Come across my lap and let me show
you what madam thinks of a bratty girl who scurries away from her duties …”
NOW
Stewart looked
around his apartment. It was nearly empty. Following Lunette’s instructions,
his few possessions were packed up and ready for the storage unit.
The stack of
papers and instructions sat on his kitchen table. Three were covered in post-it
notes redacting everything but the signature line. “You’ll sign these without
looking if you’re serious,” the instructions read. He did so.
The weeks had
passed swiftly, winding up all his housecleaning obligations, sending existing
clients to new cleaners with his apologies, and generally shutting down
Devereaux Household Services, including the bank account and final taxes. Same
with his apartment and utilities. It was the sort of complete closure of
affairs one would do when moving to the other side of the world. He would have
told his close friends he was leaving, but he realized Stewart didn’t have
close friends. Anastasia did. His masculine guise was just a face put on for
the rest of the world, but his social life was hers. Everyone who Anastasia was
acquainted with already knew she was working for Lunette full-time now.
He’d expected to
feel more emotional at this point. But looking at his possessions, he felt
nothing. Stewart’s life was nothing more to him than a means to an end, and by
assuming Ana’s face full-time, there was little need for him to remain at all.
Everything squared
away except the text message stating he was ready, to an unknown number. His
finger hovered over the “send” button. Finally he took a deep breath, closed
his eyes and tapped. Opened his eyes at the tone of the ‘message sent” alert.
After that, nothing happened.
He wasn’t sure
what he had expected. “Well,” he said to nobody in particular, “I suppose
now I wait.”
He slept quite
soundly that night, for the first time in a while. Even though he slept only on
a basic cot, he found it quite comfortable. Miss Lunette had certainly required
Ana to sleep in worse straits. Stewart realized as he awoke that this was his
first morning in many weeks, if not months, with no tasks before him. And maybe
the last such morning, too, he added to himself.
He pulled on
sweats and a t-shirt and headed to the coffee shop down the street. Lots of
memories here, including coming out to Lunette for the first time.
“Morning,
Stewart,”’ said Erica, the shop owner. “Been a while since we saw Ana around
these parts!”
“Well, Lunette’s
been on vacation overseas and I’ve been taking a bit of a break myself. But I
expect we’ll be seeing her again sooner rather than later.” He didn’t bother
making a coffee order; Erica already knew his preferences very well. “You know,
you were the first to ever see Ana besides Lunette.” He hadn’t remembered that
fact in a while, but pondering Ana’s past brought a lot to the surface.
“Really? I never
knew that.”
“Yeah, it was
early on. I’d been working for her for a few weeks on and off, playing at being
her maid, and we were both feeling our way through it. Then one day she said ‘I
want coffee, let’s go for coffee’ and before I know it, we’re on our way here.
I was scared out of my MIND. I was still new to crossdressing and I’d never
shown anyone else. And here she was just hauling me out in public for all to
see. We came here and you were working that night.”
“I do remember
that much! You looked so natural it never occurred to me it was your first time
out. She ordered her coffee like it was the most ordinary thing in the world to
have a maid at her heel.”
“For her, I think
it WAS,” Stewart said. “I think you barely looked at me. You treated us like
this was no big deal. And that meant a LOT at the time. Eased up my fear. So
thank you for that.”
“Ha, you’re
welcome! Glad I could help. Even if I had no idea I was doing it at the time.”
“A funny thing
happened. Once I got used to it and relaxed, I found I enjoyed it. I saw her
walking around like she owned the building. And I just felt such immense PRIDE
at being associated with her. This whole thing started with me thinking it was
a humiliation game, but it grew because I was so proud of it.”
Erica grinned. “I
never once saw a guy try to bug her or interrupt her while she was doing her
own thing and you were off to the side. More than a few women I know asked if
having their own maid could do that!”
As Erica turned to
attend to other customers, Stewart took a seat and sipped his coffee with one
hand and scrolled through his phone with another.
He scrolled back
through their extensive text message history and found what he was looking for,
about six months into their time together. Lunette had started thusly:
have you ever had
a non-consensual fantasy?
And he’d replied:
-- all the time. I
really enjoy actively going for it, but there’s a part of me that wonders what
it would be like to be kidnapped or blackmailed and forced to be a maid for a
while.
why?
-- Dunno. I guess
i felt guilty about enjoying it so much and it took some of the weight off me
if someone else forced me into it. But really, it’s about giving up the
responsibility. It takes the whole idea of giving all the burden to someone
else over to its logical conclusion. I wouldn’t be myself, I’d just be the
maid.
hmm. We may have
to investigate that sometime. If you’re still interested. You know I’m kind of
harsh.
-- Anastasia would
have it no other way, Miss Lunette!
Ha. Just remember
that she asked for it!
She never brought
it up again after that. Stewart began to wonder if she still remembered this.
She probably did; Lunette had a way of remembering everything.
As did Stewart. He
thought back to the first time he’d come out to her, in fact in this very
chair, all awkwardness and hesitation and stumbling: “Well, you’re flipping
these, these houses and you could use some help, and I-I would love to work my
butt off for you … and all I ask is that you let me wear my, my maid outfit
while I do it, and be a really haughty bitch to me in the process …”
He well remembered
the surprise on her face, followed by the grin that spread across her expression:
“I can DO that! But be ready to work!”
And work Ana had.
From the very beginning Lunette had worked her relentlessly, everything from
housecleaning to refinishing floors to painting rooms. Over their years
together, Ana helped Lunette expand her house-flipping business from a small
operation into quite a successful real estate business. Contractors eventually
became used to Lunette’s eccentric ways and her strange male-presenting maid
who showed up and seemed to devote endless energy to whatever task was placed
in her way.
Eventually,
Devereaux Household Services began to spread as a professional enterprise, due
in no small part to all the real estate contacts he made through Lunette. Ana
became a popular housecleaner with homeowners more than willing to pay a
healthy hourly rate. But all along, Stewart continued to provide Ana’s services
to Lunette pro bono. He felt he still owed a debt for her irreplaceable help in
his coming to terms with his feminine face, and the sheer vigor with which she
disciplined and role-played her way through the task of being Ana’s Household
Mistress was, in and of itself, more than sufficient payment.
And in the midst
of it, Stillwell Manor. Lunette’s dream project, a magnificent four-story
Victorian house -- bordering on mansion, really -- that she had purchased for a
decent price because of its incredibly run-down condition. The two of them
spent a year on it whenever they could find the time, slowly bringing it up to
speed. Stillwell Manor wasn’t a flip; it was meant to be her longtime home when
it was complete. Often she’d joked she would take on Ana as a live-in maid when
it was ready. Clearly that had been less of a joke.
He’d stopped
thinking of Lunette as his friend long ago. Lunette was the first client, his
favorite client, the only one addressed as “mistress,” and Ana was her
endlessly loyal maid. The roles simply made sense.
When last Stewart
had checked in, the house was far from done, but they’d completed about half
the rooms. He wondered what she had done in the weeks since.
When he walked
back into his apartment, they were waiting for him.
CHAPTER THREE: THE
LADIES
He knew them both.
Constance and Stella, old acquaintances from the BDSM scene. Constance was his
own age, early 30s -- in fact, they’d dated rather disastrously while in
college. They had, happily, remained cordial afterwards. Still, he knew her
well as a dominant with a particularly cruel and ruthless reputation. And Stella,
her apprentice of sorts, a few years younger but perhaps even more harsh. The
two of them were a well-known and respected pair in the worldwide BDSM
community, making an excellent living creating custom fetish videos on demand.
Constance continually filled the role of somber and dignified mistress; Stella
switched between professional submissive and dominatrix-sidekick depending on
the situation, and both personae worked well.
Stewart knew them
outside the scene, thanks to countless late-night trivia games at the bar and
Stella’s inexplicable addiction to NCAA basketball. He knew their faces when
they were not their BDSM selves, laughing, relaxed. He’d also scrubbed their
home while they lorded over Ana’s efforts. He wasn’t looking at their off-duty faces
now.
Both, he knew
firsthand, were capable of immense sadism and cruelty when the mood struck
them. Stella had delivered the most brutal caning of his life when Constance
decided Ana had done an insufficient job on waxing their floor. He was still a
little intimidated in their presence, never moreso than here.
Constance was
dressed primly in Victorian wear, looking like she could easily be the
headmistress of a country school. She sat with dignified elegance on the one
chair in his living room, while Stella stood by, wearing a full maid’s outfit
that would have been suitable for 19th-century burlesque. Constance’s jet-black
hair framed a somber, reserved expression framed by that belied her fiery
temper. Stella, with tightly ringed blonde curls falling around her shoulders
beneath a white maid’s cap, kept a sarcastic, severe glare that made it clear
she’d just love it if her target tried something.
He noticed a large
wooden paddle leaning against the wall by Stella. No, not a paddle -- three
holes and clasps at each end. It was a set of oak stocks and there was little
doubt whose neck and wrists were meant for those holes.
The two just
glared at him for several seconds, and he felt unnerved enough to fill the
silence. “Is … is this my pickup?”
Both giggled a
bit. Constance spoke first. “Pickup? Oh, no, this is a straight-up kidnapping.
Running away from your mistress was very unwise, and we’re here to put an end
to this.”
“Though you’re
welcome to keep running if you like,” Stella said. “You won’t get far.”
“I would say you
could choose the easy way or the hard way,” Constance continued, “but I’m
afraid the hard way was chosen for you long before you opened that door.”
Stewart’s heart
pounded faster. It’s just a game, he told himself. You’ve played this game a
hundred times. This is no different.
The other times
you didn’t close down your bank account and end your lease, another voice told
him. Ana’s voice, in fact. This is real.
He breathed
harder, wondering if he should look for a way out. “You’re not going to put me
in THAT thing, are you? Isn’t it a little … attention grabbing?”
Constance laughed
merrily. “Maybe for anyone else but YOU. Your neighbors already know you’re a
little weird,” she said. “Ana comes in and out of this place in all kinds of
getups. If we took you out of here in handcuffs and wore sweats ourselves, it
would raise questions and get the wrong kind of attention. Haul you out in
stocks while we look like historical reenactors? It just looks like another of
your bizarre games. Nobody will care. They don’t even gossip about you anymore,
it’s just part of the scenery.”
In a flash Stella
was upon him. She was stronger than she looked, and knew how to use her
leverage. Stewart found himself shoved against a wall, face pressed hard
against the wood, one arm pinned behind his back. Stella grabbed a handful of
hair with her other hand and yanked sharply, forcing him down to the floor, and
dug her knee into the small of his back.
“You don’t need …
to be so … rough,” he said, struggling for breath.
She jammed her
knee harder into his spine. “Nobody asked YOUR opinion.”
He was equal parts
thrilled and terrified. These are your friends … you’ve fed their cat while
they were away … this is all a game you asked for … Logical thoughts all, none
of which slowed down his pounding heart.
Constance strode
over calmly and slid half the stocks underneath his head, wedging his neck into
place. Stella grabbed both wrists and pushed them into the holes. Then
Constance dropped the back half of the stocks into place and snapped the clasps
shut on both sides. “There. NOW we know you’ll be well-behaved.”
Stella slid off
his back, grabbed his hair again and yanked him to his feet. “Nobody cares,”
she said. She leaned in close to his ear. “You see this outfit? This awful,
ridiculous getup? My mistress has forced me to wear it or something like it and
serve her nonstop for three days and whip me every time I fall short. She did
it all for one reason and one reason only: to humiliate and degrade me knowing
it was all YOUR fault so I’d be extra angry with you and treat you particularly
harshly. And trust me, it’s WORKING.”
She stepped back,
hoisted her skirt, and peeled the black seamed stockings off one leg, then
another, leaving a sheer shiny layer of pantyhose behind. “Two sets of hose on
top of each other, then these damn things,” she said as she rolled the
stockings together in a ball. Behind her, Constance tore a strip of medical
tape from a roll. “You have any idea how uncomfortable that is to wear? Don’t
worry, you will.” She squeezed the stocking ball together in her hand, then
stuffed it into his mouth, wedging it tightly. Constance stepped forward and
secured the strip of tape across his mouth.
Stella perched
herself on the top of the stocks, holding him down to the floor while she idly
flipped the clasp of the stocks open and shut.
“One little
click,” she whispered, “and it’s the difference between your free existence
here and the miserable life of a slave. I could just get up and you’d be free,
would you like that?” His muffled response gave away no information. “You enjoy
the view from down there?” She giggled again, closed the clasp one last time,
and hauled him to his feet. “We’ll have to do something about THAT.” She drew a
dark blindfold over his eyes.
“Playtime’s over,
dear,” Constance said gently. “We need to get this runaway where they belong
and back into her mistress’ home.”
They half-led,
half-dragged him from his apartment and out the front door. Completely
disoriented, he couldn’t tell where they were going as they hauled him down the
street and finally stuffed him into an open car door.
From the coffee
bar, Erica watched them hustle him into the car and drive off. “Ha,” she mused.
“He must be having the time of his life there!”
CHAPTER FOUR: THE
MANOR
Stewart wasn’t
sure how long he was in the car. He had a pretty good guess where he was going,
though.
They dragged him
along, tugging on each side and keeping him well off balance, up a set of
stairs, through a door and into a house. At last they came to a stop and shoved
him to his knees. His kneecaps hit hardwood and he knew for sure where he was.
“We’ve brought
your wayward servant back to you, mistress,” Stella said.
“Very, very good.”
Lunette’s voice. As sharp, confident and delightfully imperious as he
remembered. “Well. Well, well, well. Anastasia Devereaux. What ARE we going to
do with you?” She waited a moment, then he felt a sharp slap across his face.
“What, nothing to say for yourself? I hardly think a gag is a good excuse for
ignoring your mistress.”
She pulled the
blindfold from his head. He was able to glance around briefly to confirm they
were at the base of the grand staircase in Stillwell Manor, part of the
magnificent entryway that had been the first area they’d completed. A
stained-glass window overlooked the polished oak stairway that led into a large
foyer with hallways going to either side. “Looks like the Addams Family
mansion,” he’d remarked upon first seeing it, and even cleaned up and polished,
that was still accurate. Lunette sat at the base of the staircase, in an
elaborate wooden chair set up in a thronelike manor, dressed in formal
businesswear again.
“So,” she said,
addressing Constance, “Is it true? Was she trying to escape me?”
“Oh, yes, m’lady,”
Constance replied. “Disguised herself as a man and had everything looking like
she had a long trip planned.”
“Tsk, tsk, young
lady. Don’t you know you’re indentured?” Lunette said. ““By very old
traditional rules of indentiture, running away is to be severely punished. I
have the right to see you taken to the authorities and imprisoned for theft of
my property, namely your labor. Is that what you want, you IMPUDENT, rebellious
girl? Everything I’ve given you, a home, purpose, a place in the world, and you
just run away like a little brat. Maybe I should just have you sent to prison
instead of allow you back. Would you like that, girl? Trade ruffles and
fishnets and a collar for handcuffs and concrete and a jumpsuit?”
Stewart knew
better than to do anything but shake his head vigorously.
“Did you do as
instructed and sign all these papers without reading?” Stewart nodded. “Good
girl. You’ll be interested in knowing that the first of them is a power of
attorney giving me full control of all your assets, such as they are. The
second is a note indicating you’ve recently felt suicidal ideation and violent
urges. More than enough to have you involuntarily committed if I called the
right people. The last is an undated confession and apology for stealing some
very expensive jewelry from me, which I myself have already taken the liberty
of hiding in your storage unit. More than enough evidence to be hard to
explain.”
She stood up,
walked over and regarded him coolly. Then knelt down and whispered in his ear.
“I had no idea blackmail could be so FUN.” She stood back up, yanked off the
medical tape, and pulled the stocking gag out of his mouth. “Make your choice,
jail or service.”
Stewart lowered
his eyes. He could no longer tell if he was playing at being defeated or was
actually defeated. “Servitude.”
She slapped him
across the face, the hard crack of her palm surprising even his two captors,
who exchanged a what-the-hell-is-this glance. “Ask it CORRECTLY.”
Tears of pain,
genuine pain and more than a little shame, streamed down his face. “Servitude,
mistress. Let me be your maid and property in perpetuity.”
“Miss Anastasia
Devereaux, for your crime of running away from your proper place, I hereby
sentence you to perpetual servitude. You will be my property and see to my
needs for the rest of your life. Any complaints will be dealt with swiftly and
in a highly corporal manner.”
“And my very first
act will be to see you removed from those wretched rags and dressed like a
proper lady’s maidservant. You look like a disgrace, not fit for a proper
lady.” She waved disdainfully to Stella and Constance. “Take this girl out of
my sight until she’s ready for respectable service. The salon is at your
disposal.”
The blindfold went
back down over his eyes; the last thing he saw before being hustled away was
Lunette turning away as if none of this was worth her bother.
OOOH! Luv the beginning, Miss. Cannot wait till the next one appears.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Such comments definitely motivate me to get the next chapter done ASAP.
DeleteYou're always prisonner of your own desires but only your desires are worth living for. This one is realy a wonderful story!
ReplyDeleteLove the story so far. I love the slippery slope to feminization especially when it involves physical change. It's like a ratchet tightening the bonds as the bondage becomes more and more permanent. Interested to see where this goes.
ReplyDeleteSlippery slope? Wouldn't "running leap off a steep precipice" be more descriptive? The story's sentences are evocative and flow smoothly, despite their occasionally quirky syntax, but the writer has already thrown in everything but the kitchen sink in this first installation. Where is there to go from where without totally going over-the-top?
DeleteInterestingly enough, I entirely agree with this critique of my work :). One of the things I'm interested in exploring here is "once you've gone all the way to the edge in the game -- what's next?" What comes after the lady and maid have fully committed to their roles? One inspiration was a book Camille recommends, "Miss Millions' Maid," which focuses a lot on the "rich lady becomes her former maid's new maid" thing for the first forty pages, and then moves on to "all the scrapes the newly rich lady and her new maid get into, and how the maid gets them out of them."
DeleteSo yeah, this isn't so much a slippery slope as it is Ana running full-force into the wall and leaving a maid-shaped hole behind her like Wile E. Coyote :).
Thanks for the kind words about my writing, too! "Quirky syntax" is definitely a THING for me.
"Behind every mask, there is another mask." (Nietzsche) Beneath every degradation lies a possible deeper degradation. What you describe sounds like a high-risk, potentially high-gain literary strategy. Good luck with pulling it off. It's good to see authors here who are not afraid of a bit of stylistic experimentation and risk-taking. I thought that you used flashbacks very effectively to make Ana's willingness to accept this sudden change feel psychologically credible to readers. Every character seems to have his or her own backstory. It felt like you were dropping subtle hints that that the viewpoint character, Stewart/Ana, may not be a wholly reliable narrator, even to himself. It will be interesting to see where you take that. In any case, it offers an extra level of depth to the character's personality.
DeleteI deeply appreciate such detailed feedback! And it's nice to know some of my details came through as intended -- it was important to me that even the side characters felt real and lived-in, and not just there to service the fetishy side of the story.
DeleteI pulled at least a little bit of the random details from my own life; I used to be part of a circle of friends at a bondage club, and one of the girls I knew was VERY enthusiastic when she was in domme mode. When she was really going at it with a cane on me, I had to remind myself "remember, you played Monopoly at her house just last night!" to keep from panicking!
I do agree that the approach I'm taking is fairly high-risk; I have a couple of upcoming angles that I don't think I've seen in such stories yet. We'll have to see if the gain turns out to be worth it, or if I just Wile-e-Coyote MYSELF into the wall :).
I've enjoyed this story very much so far, especially your attention to detail and your effort to not strain the suspension of disbelief too much (although I find it surprising that half of Stewart's neighborhood is totally okay with him doing kinky stuff).
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the continuation! :)
The scene is set, characters described, now waiting for how this story develops
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this story Anastasia.
Accept the criticism, smile at the compliments 2Well deserved , and take on board all comments
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Oh my. This is high praise indeed, thank you!
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