by Jackie J
Having washed the pots after supper Annie
joined Raymond and his father by the fire and started her sewing. Raymond
smiled she was in full bloom and he could not wait for the baby to come.
Raymond and his father shared a pipe and talked about the fences they had been
replacing at the back of the top meadow. A more perfect scene of domestic bliss
would be hard to find.
Despite the apparent tranquillity at Rose Cottage Annie had been troubled but kept it to herself. During intimate moments Raymond had naturally asked Annie about her life before coming to Sandowns. She only really knew what the Mistress had told her, the rest, there seemed to be no more. It was of course put down to her illness. There was nothing temporary about the effects of the amnesia Annie suffered, resulting from the brutal drug induced coma Lady Hogarth had subjected her maid to. Whilst she recovered memories of a fictitious past had been wickedly planted in her enfeebled mind. She was an orphan, she knew that, her Mistress had told her, she had been a maid at a large residence, she knew that her Mistress had told her, she had been found wandering and destitute by the Mistress and given employment at Sandowns. She had awoken some nights following fanciful dreams of being in a large mansion, but not as a maid, but more like a young mistress. The dreams had mainly followed visits by the beautiful Miss Annabella who regularly visited her Aunt at Sandowns, but the medicine her Mistress gave her had always calmed her and stopped the nightmares. She wished she could remember more to tell her love, but she could not. Raymond always told her not to worry, he loved her for what she was and who she was, not what had happened in her past. A loving placation of her worries but worry she did.
Another day found Annie and Gwen busy at
the big house. More new furniture was being delivered and the old furniture was
being taken out by Raymond and his father whilst Annie and Gwen swept, mopped,
and polished. Most of the rooms had been refurnished recently, the new furniture
more expensive and of higher quality than what it was replacing. In fact, the
whole manor was looking rather splendid. No threadbare areas on these new rugs
and Raymond was not required for painting anymore, decorators had transformed
the place, the wallpaper in the parlour and reception rooms was truly
magnificent. Gwen had been told, by one of the decorators, that it had actual
gold thread in the pattern. Lizzy in the kitchens had been treated to a new
stove and the pump over the sinks replaced with a tap that you could just turn
on and off and the water poured by itself. Annie and Gwen’s allowances had been
increased and both where now able to save, the same with Raymond and his
father. Why the sudden increase in affluence had occurred at Sandowns no one
really knew but everyone was benefitting.
The Mistress always looked nice but her
new wardrobe like the furniture was of a much higher quality and much less
mending for Annie. It was most noticeable doing the laundry, the fabric finer
and the garments draped so well.
More visitors were coming at the weekend
and Annie and Gwen were preparing the guest rooms. There was even a pleasure in
this, no more choosing the best linen it was all the best, the very best. Annie
was secretly hoping Miss Annabella would be coming she had not seen her for
quite some time. Miss Annabella was always kind to her when she visited asking
about how the baby was coming along and Raymond.
Annie never eavesdropped but, stood by the
wall in the dining room with Gwen awaiting instruction, whilst the guests and
Mistress dined, she hid her amusement when one of the guests, the Bishop, not
speaking quietly, and so easily heard, mentioned some lady having been placed
in chastity having committed adultery, at first Annie thought perhaps that’s
what rich people did in such a situation. Annie was sure she heard a Countess
mentioned, but this was a maid they were now discussing. Annie would have liked
to have heard more but she was now back down in the kitchens collecting the
next course of the meal. The new uniforms the Mistress had provided were much
smarter than the old ones but, no less bulky, could not hide Annie’s advancing
condition. The meal finished the guests
and Mistress, in good humour, retired to the large reception room. Each passing
by the curtsying maids smiled and whished Annie well with the birth, which was
getting closer and closer.
Days were starting to drag for Annie and
Mistress was always fussing and the doctor had been called yet again, Annie and
Raymond could not afford the doctor, but Mistress insisted and not to worry
about the money. The early hours of
Saturday Morning the first wails of young Raymond filled the Cottage. the Lady
from the village, a friend of Mrs Scripts, had done her best to keep the writhing
panting Annie comforted through the birth and now the little infant laid on the
breasts of a smiling mother. An excited Lizzy, Gwen and Mrs Scripts were joined
by the proud father who’s smile of pride looked like it would never leave him.
It would be two weeks before Annie was
back in her uniform with much interest shown in young Raymond by Mistress and
Miss Annabella, who had both visited the cottage to see Mother and child a
number of times. The perambulator gifted by Miss Annabella along with many other
accessories and clothing surprised the grateful Annie and Raymond who could not
thank Miss Annabella enough for her kindness and generosity. Whether it was
genuine concern or guilt that motivated Emily, or a combination of both,
mattered little to the grateful new family at Rose cottage. Wrestling the
responsibility of motherhood and her work at the big house new routines were
established. Poor little Raymond was passed around like a parcel he was so
cute. Lizzy, Gwen, Mrs Scripts and even Mistress welcoming the tiny thing into
their arms. When not being spoiled with attention, Annie found the Perambulator
Miss Annabella had provided a practical sanctuary for baby whilst at her tasks
about Sandowns.
If maid Annie, at Sandowns, was treated well and shown kindness by its Mistress and housekeeper it was in stark contrast to how the new maid at Buckshire manor had been treated in the months since its arrival at the manor.
Miss Jarvis had been briefed well on the
reception for the returning Countess from Whitegate prison by Miss Annabella.
Annabella in truth being only the conduit for her Mothers regime prepared for
maid Connie. A Countess she no longer was, she was Connie, and if Miss Jarvis
wished to remain in position, she would ensure Connie followed all the
draconian protocols the Countess herself had previously insisted on for Maids
at Buckshire manor. Mrs Hardwick had
arrived at Buckshire manor and could not wait to conduct the training of the
new maid when it arrived. Having met Annabella, the girl who she had grovelling
at her feet, a trained and competent maid, Carol was confused. She was nothing
like the Annie she remembered, not at all. The picture of Miss Annabella still
hung in the hallway and yes, the likeness was clearly evident, it was just
something that she just could not put her finger on. When Carol arrived at the
manor it was as if they had never met? How could she have forgotten what Carol
put her through? When Carol mentioned this to Martha, she was told that
Annabella had a traumatic time recovering from her ordeal and it was best not
to concern herself with Miss Annabella. Even Martha’s dismissive explanation of
the change in Miss Annabella did not satisfy Carol. First it was the daughter,
a willing subject for subjugation, now it was to be the mother, the Countess
herself, who was to don the apron, willing or not. Carol was to be well paid for her services
and thought better than to pursue her interest in the strange changes of maid
Annie in returning to the gracious Miss Annabella.
Stood with Miss Jarvis Mrs Hardwick
watched the carriage containing the new maid for Buckshire manor pull through
the outer gates and up the driveway to the main entrance.
Martha gasped seeing what had been done to
the Countess when she meekly stepped out of the carriage at the side of Mr
Swinney. No surly flourish and confident strides, she looked common,
dishevelled. Her beautiful hair cropped, her dress creased and stained a pale
pallor to her face and an awkward shuffle to her gait. Was this really her once
domineering Mistress? Guided into the
manor, denuded of her dignity during her month of incarceration at Whitegate,
Constance never raised her head to seek eye contact with who had been her
housekeeper and her maid.
Mr Swinney smiled at Miss Jarvis handing
her the contract signed by the Countess.
“This is Connie, she is to be trained to
be a maid at Buckshire manor you will see that the contract is for three years
of service, I assume everything is prepared for your new maid in line with Miss
Annabella’s instructions?”
Carol took hold of Constance’s upper arm
and Martha responded.
“Yes, Mr Swinney we know exactly what is
required for Connie, rest assured she will be trained well Mrs Hardwick will
make sure of that.”
Constance, her spirit broken by her time
at Whitegate, was dragged into the kitchens. Florrie, the maid from Sandown,
looked in amazement as the Countess stood passive whist stripped naked by Carol
and Martha. She looked frail the gruel she had been fed for the last month had
not been a diet for the obese. Carol smirked tugging the stout straps of the
Bishops gift about the new maid’s intimacy before locking it in place bringing
a soft sigh of acceptance from the recipient.
Carol stood back and smiled with
satisfaction at the Countess’s secure confinement handing the key to Miss
Jarvis.
Kicking the expensive but despoiled dress
and underwear, the Countess had worn for her return to Buckshire manor, across
the kitchen floor, Miss Jarvis offered her new maid its underwear. Connie
stepped into the oversized bloomers without reservation covering the insidious
device she was now locked into. A heavy
cotton chemise and petticoat were followed by the slowly buttoned black woollen
dress before being handed her bibbed apron. Connie dipped her head through the
yolk and Carol tugged the tapes of the apron tight around the new maids still
shapely waist and formed a pleasing bow. Heavy boots to its feet the new maid
was almost prepared.
Miss Jarvis placed her hand under Connie’s
chin and raised her head before crowning her new maid with its unflattering mop
cap.
With Miss Jarvis’s fingers still under her
chin the weak eyes of Connie stared without focus at her once housekeeper, now
one who must be obeyed.
“Now you are dressed appropriately for
your rank Connie, you know the rules here at Buckshire Manor for maids, don’t
you? And you will also know I am responsible for seeing those rules are obeyed.
Well Connie, do you?”
This was to be her life now, the lesser of
two evils, to be a maid for her stepdaughter Miss Annabella under the control
and authority of her once housekeeper Miss Jarvis.
The Countess did know the rules for maids
at Buckshire manor, of course she did, she wrote and previously enforced them,
now, reduced to the rank of a maid herself, she would obey them, or face the
consequences.
That first curtsy brought a pinching pain
from the device she had been locked into and an awareness of the heavy and
cumbersome uniform she now wore.
“Yes Miss Jarvis.”
Martha, whilst she did not show it, was
relieved at her ex Mistress’s willing compliance and acceptance of her new
status at Buckshire Manor knowing Carol was eager and capable of ensuring such
compliance was to become second nature for maid Connie. Standing back from her
new uniformed maid it was hard to believe that only a month ago the same women
stood resplendent in her finery issuing her instructions. The Countess of
Buckshire manor now looking vulnerable and meek dressed in the livery of her
own servants.
Martha turned her new maid to face Carol.
“This is Mrs Hardwick; Mrs Hardwick will
be conducting your training and I look forward to you becoming a truly
competent and respectful maid here at the manor.”
The Countess had been informed by her
housekeeper previously of what this woman had done with Annabella, what she was
capable of, and now it was her own turn to be taught and serve this maid.
Carol walked towards her trainee seeing
little trace of the Countess she once respected without question, especially
with her cropped hair and now dressed as one of her own servants. Her whole
demeanour screamed, I am weak, yours to do with as you wish. Whitegate had
certainly taken its toll and prepared the proud Countess for her life of
servility and subjugation.
“So, Connie, I am sure you will be no
trouble will you girl?”
Connie looked at Mrs Hardwick the maid she
had dismissed from her service and lowered her head before offering a curtsy,
fearful of what this woman had planned for her.
“No Miss”
And so, the Countesses of Buckshire began
her new life, the life of a common maid in the very manor in which she was once
Mistress. Beneath her skirts the reminder of the forbidden pleasures she had
sought and enjoyed with Lord Edmund. Six months in the service of Buckshire
manor, at the hands of Mrs Hardwick, and Connie knew little else only to serve
her betters. The maid’s quarters she had rarely visited now her only sanctuary
from the rigours of her endless days of toil.
Perhaps Constance at the outset had
thought Annabella would have relented, but there were no such thoughts now.
Perhaps Constance had thought her purgatory would be kept from the public eye,
how wrong she was. It was common knowledge that the once glamorous widowed wife
of the late Earl was now a working maid at Buckshire manor. Three months into
Connie’s subjugation Annabella had her new maid serve table to her amused
guests. All eager to share their experience of being served by the contrite
Countess reduced to the rank of maid and held in chastity by her stepdaughter.
The reason for the Countess to suffer such
indignity was never shared but rather under the threat of more thrashings, maid
Connie was made to confess to all that she always wanted to be a maid and to be
placed and held in chastity. That she was grateful to her stepdaughter for
allowing her the privilege to be one of her maids, for Miss Annabella to be her
Mistress. Strange, but the sincerity of her contrived and scripted confessions
convinced all it is what she wished and as such accepted.
Mrs Hardwick had had little problems in
developing and delivering maid Connie to the mistress of Buckshire manor, maid
Connie knew her place and under the stewardship of Mrs Hardwick and Miss Jarvis
was kept in it. What intrigued her more was Miss Annabella herself, and the
regular visits of her Aunt Lady Hogarth.
She had learnt it was Lady Hogarth who had “cured” Miss Annabella of her
perverse wish to become a maid. Outwardly there was not a trace of these desires
left, which Carol still thought somewhat illogical having witnessed maid
Annie’s behaviour first- hand. She wondered if Annabella, still harbouring such
thoughts, had conspired to have her stepmother live out her own fantasies for
her, it would seem with the cooperation of her Aunt, Lady Hogarth. Carol had
not been comfortable with Miss Annabella from outset and, what she now knew, or
strongly suspected, to be something much darker, confirmed her suspicions, but
there was one piece missing from the puzzle that she was determined to solve.
Intriguing story.
ReplyDeleteThat's a polite way of saying "has a hopelessly tangled plot". (Which actually doesn't matter as much as it should, since the reader can't care about any of the characters, so she won't mind if she can't keep up with who's enslaving whom at any given point.)
Delete...isn't that what some critics said about "Little Dorritt" by Charles Dickens?
DeleteActually , I'm really enjoying it, but I don't really have the words to describe how.
DeleteLady Hogarth or Miss Jarvis, I wonder who will enslave the former so haughty Countess and made her a VERY obediend maid. A wonderful story Jackie !!
ReplyDeleteMaid Annie. Finally some news.............
ReplyDeleteJust checking here to see if you received my follow-up email!
ReplyDeleteThe story continues with Connie learning to survive in her new situation. Is it permanent or just a bend in the road? We finally have some news about maid Annie. Carol Hardwick, the trainer/mentor, - she is the wildcard in this puzzle. What new surprises lurk in the background filled with hidden secrets? A most enjoyable story Jackie J. Ronnie.
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