by Jackie J
The
Earl and Countesses time at their summer retreat was drawing to a close and
preparations for the return to Buckshire manor were underway. Neither looking
forward to the week- long journey home but for different reasons. Malcom, the
doddering Asthmatic half blind Earl had benefited from the clean air of the
Alps which he would miss and the Bath chair to which he was confined made
travel difficult and uncomfortable. The yellow fever, contracted shortly after
his marriage to his second wife Constance, had ravaged his body and left him
with failing eyesight and aged beyond his years.
For her part, the vivacious
Countess, the second wife of the Earl and less than half his age, would miss
her secretive dalliances afforded to her in this foreign land. With the Earl, house
bound and left in the Chateaux, the long walks, taken by the Countess,
regularly terminated at the lodgings of Lord Edmunds for the physical pounding
her young body craved, which, of course, her crippled husband could not
provide. The Earl had two women in his life, his adulterous wife of course and
his daughter, his pampered princess, the
jewel of his eye, nothing was too much for her, she could do no wrong, whatever
she wanted she got, something the stepmother of the spoiled brat resented with
a passion. The question of inheritance never far from the Countesses’ mind.
When
Miss Jarvis, the housekeeper at Buckshire Manor, received the preposterous
demand from Miss Annabella she was dumbfounded. She had seen what had happened
to other staff when the little witch could not get her way, the girl did not
know the meaning of the word no. Anxious for her position Martha confided in
the Countess what Miss Annabella had asked of her.
Constance
laughed out loud when her housekeeper told her what her stepdaughter had
demanded of her whilst she and the Earl were away for three months at their
summer retreat in Switzerland. Martha expected to be told to ignore Annabella,
that the Countess would have words, bring the stupid girl to her senses.
Not
so, the Countess stood from behind her writing desk and closed the study door
before retaking her seat.
Constance
looked up at her housekeeper and asked her to sit then, with disguised humour
in her voice kept a serious expression and spoke.
“Well,
well, well, Annabella. Daddy's little princess a maid, Annabella wants to be a
maid, to be dressed and treated as a maid you say. Who would have thought it? What an exquisite and intriguing prospect! Annabella to become one of my maids. How perfect will that be! What have you said to her?”
Sat
across from her Mistress Martha was wishing she had not mentioned the matter
now and feared all this would not end well for her.
“Nothing, Mistress. I said she should reconsider the matter, but she was quite insistent,
very insistent, said she would see to it that I would lose my position at
Buckshire manor if I did not comply with her demands. It does not make sense, Mistress. You insist on the strictest of rules for your maids at the manor,
Miss Annabella knows this, she herself treats the maids so shabbily, shouts at
them. It just does not make sense what she is asking. How could I possibly
treat Miss Anabella like I do the maids here? But that is what she wants from
me, to treat her like a common housemaid, and all that that implies. That's her words, Mistress.”
Constance’s
lip curled into a smile.
“Not
a word of this to anyone else. Tell her that you agree to do what she asks,
but that you will need an agreement from her, in writing, when you have it
bring it to me, we will speak later on this matter.”
Martha
stood from her seat and curtsied somewhat confused with the Countesses
reaction.
“Yes, Mistress, as you wish.”
Martha
was opening the study door to leave when the Countess called her back.
“Wait,
before you go, do we require another maid at Buckshire
manor?”
Martha,
even more confused, spoke honestly, one of her best maids had been dismissed
and not replaced over a year ago.
“I
can always use an extra pair of hands, Mistress.”
The
Countess had always known, since marrying the Earl, that the Earls daughter, to
put it politely, was mentally fragile if not unstable. Most who knew Annabella
putting her mood swings and petulant, irrational behaviour down to her being
somewhat immature for her age. This ludicrous request, being made of Buckshire
manors housekeeper by Annabella, serving to confirm a madness that, with the
right encouragement, could be exploited, tip the pretty young thing over the
edge? Constance chuckled to herself. Malcom’s precocious, arrogant daughter, at
her own request, wanting to become one of my fawning housemaids, perfect, just
perfect. The silly girl was even paying Martha for the privilege out of the
generous allowance her father insists on her having. If all goes to plan there
will be no more allowance for Annabella, Annabella, now that is no name for a
maid, let me think, Annie. Constance laughed out loud. Yes Annie, a most
suitable name for Buckshire manors new maid.
Sat
at dinner Constance looked down the table at her husband. Before his illness
she had so many plans for them both but now, with Malcom wracked with pain and
confined to his bath chair, all he thought of was his daughter. With Annabella
seeking to be confine herself below stairs perhaps that could change.
Only
a week, after Martha had revealed to the Countess Annabella’s wish to become a
maid, Buckshire manors housekeeper received a written agreement from an excited
Annabella, which Martha gave to the Countess.
Martha
sat opposite her Mistress whilst the Countess perused the agreement and Martha
took note of the amendments she suggested. A name change, Miss Jarvis’s maid
will be called Annie, no use of Annabella’s private chambers, whilst not
mentioned in the agreement Miss Annabella’s apartments were to be stripped
bare. Miss Annabella, Annie, to use the vacant maid’s quarters and Miss
Annabella must only be referred to at all times in the third person. A maid’s uniform
to be worn at all times, including underwear and boots, the housekeeper to have
total and unquestioned authority at the manor and over her maid.
A
month before the Countess was scheduled to leave for Switzerland, the Countess
called her housekeeper to her study. The revised and rewritten agreement, that
Miss Annabella had given to Martha, now signed by both the housekeeper of
Buckshire manor and Miss Annabella Montgomery, sat on the Countesses desk.
The
Countess sat up in her chair and chuckled.
“So,
Miss Jarvis, this agreement is quite clear. I trust you will deliver on the
demands that Annabella has written, by her own hand in this agreement, and of
course the other matters we that have discussed?"
Martha
was still wary why the Countess would even countenance such a preposterous
proposal let alone actively encourage it and for it to be taken much further
than Miss Annabella could ever have thought would be the outcome for her. However, when a velvet bag was pushed across
the desk by the Countess, the contents being well known to the housekeeper of Buckshire
manor, there could be no doubting the intent of the Countess.
“Take
this and the agreement. I suggest you start making your preparations, the money
you will need is in the pouch by the door. Miss Annabella wishes to be one of my
maids and when I return from my time at the summer retreat a maid she shall be.
Do not let Miss Annabella down, Miss Jarvis, but more importantly do not let me
down. You know what you are to do, whatever that takes.”
Martha
left her mistresses study clutching the agreement and velvet bag along a
significant amount of money to cover expenses. The Countesses instructions were
explicit which Martha, who despised the spoilt Annabella, even found extreme.
This was to be more than the indulgence of Miss Annabella’s whim; this was to
be much more.
When
Martha was first approached by Miss Annabella, with such an absurd demand,
whilst not wishing to get on the wrong side of the Countesses daughter, by
dismissing the idea out of hand, she had hoped it was some foolish idea that,
having thought through what she was asking, Miss Annabella would pass it off as
some sort of joke, a tease. How wrong she was.
First
the request for a written agreement, such an agreement being quickly provided.
Then, when presented with the amendments, that unknowingly to Annabella had
been prepared by the Countess, Miss Annabella, with growing enthusiasm, complied
without question signing herself under the control of Miss Jarvis and into the
service of Berkshire manor with little or no consideration of the potential and
indeed intended implications for her.
With
the Countesses blessing and Miss Annabella’s written agreement to indulge her
perverse desires, the housekeeper of Buckshire manor had been given carte
blanche to reduce the precocious aristocrat, Miss Annabella Montgomery, to the
status of a lowly maid. Far from now wishing this to be a foolish idea or tease
Martha looked forward to her task with relish.
Three
months had passed, and Martha smirked with satisfaction at her maid whilst it
served breakfast, could the transformation of the pompous aristocrat, Miss
Annabella Montgomery, have been more complete? Not only did maid Annie display
simpering, curtsying, servility befitting of a housemaid, her domestic and
culinary skills, thanks to Mrs Hardwicks brutal tutorage, could not be
questioned.
The
arrogant Miss Annabella had initially been subtly encouraged and nurtured into
a life of domestic service, a life that she had demanded for herself from
Buckshire manor’s housekeeper. But,
subsequently, once entrapped in her own fantasy, forcibly coerced, browbeaten, degraded,
spanked, strapped, slapped, and subjugated until all thought of privilege had
been painfully supressed and stripped from her.
Beyond
Annabella’s capitulation and acceptance to the reality of being a housemaid,
the continual physical hardship and torment, to the point of emotional distress,
coupled with the unrelenting psychological indoctrination and manipulation of
her fragile mind, served to feed Annabella’s perverse desired persona, that of
a common maid.
The
Earl and Countess would be returning to Buckshire manor from their summer break
during the week ahead and Martha was preparing for their return.
With
the Countesses selections from her wardrobe, which Miss Jarvis had been given
her pick, laundered and return to their respective closets along with the
jewellery she had use of, Miss Jarvis returned to more traditional dress for
her role of housekeeper.
Within
the isolation of Buckshire manor, with only herself and ex
maid Carol, Annie had been distanced from who she had been and the visits from
Martha’s friends and the brief interaction with the manors gardeners and groom
had seen no ambition for Annie to identify to be other than who she had become,
one of Buckshire manors housemaids. Martha however was a little concerned that
no matter how deeply ingrained Annie’s pretence, it would be put to the test on
the Earl and Countesses return. What Mollie and Jenny, Miss Jarvis’s
established maids at Buckshire manor, would make of the new maid was another
matter.
Summoned
into the parlour, having cleared away after breakfast, Annie, her gaze lowered,
curtsied.
“Miss?”
Martha
walked to her maid and having straightened its cap smiled running her fingers
around the silver band of accepted service at Buckshire manor which hung around
its neck.
“Well
Annie, the Earl and Countess will be returning to the manor shortly and it will
be your opportunity to show what a good maid you are, that you are deserving of
the Countesses collar that you now wear, that you truly are the maid Miss
Annabella wished for you to become at Buckshire manor.”
Annie
slowly raised her head and stared at Martha. Had Annabella’s befuddled mind
totally forgotten who she really was? The mention of the return of the Earl and
Countess, her Father and Constance, spiked her mind with unresolved puzzlement.
For months she had been Annie the maid, and an accomplished maid she had
become. Miss Annabella, the beautiful young women whose portrait hung in the
hallway, had, by insidious and relentless indoctrination, become a stranger a
figment, a fantasy, one to be respected and admired. Miss Annabella was the
daughter of the Earl and Countess. In lucid dreams Annie was the girl in the
portrait, she was Miss Annabella. These dreams, through the first month,
causing haunting mental conflict. The second month less so, but now no longer.
Beyond that first month any mention of such a fantasy being met with ridicule
and rewarded with punishment for such a presumption of association. Annie still
dreamed, of course she did, but now, even in the sanctuary of slumber, Miss
Annabella was thought of only in the third person. Annabella’s Memories being
accepted to be mere imaginings, fantasises of a lowly maid to live a life of
leisure and privilege. Miss Annabella the beautiful daughter of the Earl and
Countess had given Annie the opportunity to become a maid at Buckshire manor
and for which, like Miss Jarvis and Mrs Hardwick had drummed relentlessly into
her muddled mind, she must always be thankful.
Did
the news of the impending return of the Earl and Countess, her father and
stepmother, bring Annabella to her senses, incite Annie to break free from the
chains of self-delusional madness that now shackled her mind, body and soul?
Make her scream in denial of what she had wilfully allowed to become of her at
the hands of Buckshire manor’s manipulative housekeeper?
No,
of course not, Annie’s eyes returned to their lowered gaze of respect and
Martha smiled content that Miss Annabella, and all she was, resided hidden
away, driven deep in the recesses of the broken subconscious mind of her maid,
maid Annie.
the story gets better and better
ReplyDeletefor now this story is one of my favorites, the truth caught me completely
I can't wait to see how Annie will behave with her father, who, by the way, I'm sure he won't be able to recognize her.
and I have a great desire to see how she manages to work together with the two maids who accompanied her father on his journey, who surely will not recognize her
Absolutely amazing. Great set up and execution. I would be interested to see if perhaps the Countess would have need to “hire” another maid to perhaps pose as Annabella. Change the portrait around. See what happens when Annie is pushed into a corner. Would she lash out as we hope she will and rebel against it all, only to be taken down and let to know who she really is and who she will be from now on? So many great things are coming from this. Amazing to see such great art unfold before us. Thank you for sharing this with us. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Don’t leave us in suspense for too long though. I feel as though my mental state could break lol.
ReplyDeleteA not unexpected twist but an enjoyable one with so many potential outcomes
ReplyDeleteChapter 4 Fabulous. I love the coming of a cruel and evil stepmother...
ReplyDeleteLife won't be easy for Annie.
Thanks
Dear Jackie,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the next installment. Chapter 4 was absolutely precious. I did not anticipate all of the events as they unfolded, but I can't wait for the next chapter. You have delivered on a wonderful story and the back story of the characters. Everything is coming into focus as I look forward to Annie's future as a common housemaid. Will she wake up from her nightmare? Will the Countess get her reward? Or Will Mrs. Jarvis be called to toe the line? Jackie, you hold the key to the future. Please don't disappoint and thank you for the story.
Wonderful story, Jackie ! You're a soprano of our deep hidden dreams. Self imposed humiliation is very often the only way one can see to approach a person out of reach or far superior to you. Poor Annabella who wanted so much to be close to her stepmother... Now she will be her plaything for life. Not only one of her maids but a feet-kissing slave for a satisfied Mistress. Can't wait for next chapter !!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to see if the countess herself will fall in the clutch of her housekeeper...
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