tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post8637511637068705650..comments2024-03-28T18:12:56.268+03:00Comments on Ladies Becoming Maids: Story: A Maid for Malangton Hall. Chapters 13-14.Camille Langtryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16945716778850774065noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-18935279270906425422023-02-08T10:26:39.812+03:002023-02-08T10:26:39.812+03:00I just read this whole story and I was wondering, ...I just read this whole story and I was wondering, if you could write a prequel for Maid Carrie?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-6442118783961994312020-06-03T01:23:57.959+03:002020-06-03T01:23:57.959+03:00Best story so far on whole site, thank you very mu...Best story so far on whole site, thank you very much, i was so enveloped in it - superb writing ... thank you againAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-81694690101519287242019-06-01T01:41:09.588+03:002019-06-01T01:41:09.588+03:00I enjoyed this story, and would like to write a se...I enjoyed this story, and would like to write a sequel.Jedd Clampetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10523801480150665583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-54721199581472455692018-09-01T22:12:41.239+03:002018-09-01T22:12:41.239+03:00Wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it a lot, it...Wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it a lot, it's easily one of my favourites in here.<br />The development of the scheme, from beginning to the end, is perfectly thought through and soo cunning.<br />To see how Rose is manipulated by her Mistress step by step is really easy to sympathize with.<br />The added lesbian element makes Rose even more pliable, being put into chastity after tasting the forbidden fruit.<br />I especially love the use of creative tools, the stooping chain is just brilliant with its piercing effect.<br />I hope to find more like this in other stories.<br /><br />Also, I personally like it a lot if there is no happy end. For me this ending is what I had wished for.<br /><br />Thanks for your effort!<br />L2M-Reader00014275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-47361123719129675302018-07-29T13:21:24.670+03:002018-07-29T13:21:24.670+03:00A truly wonderful story with great attention to de...A truly wonderful story with great attention to detail (eg. curtseying). Thanks so much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-43252401018289838782018-04-12T08:26:29.518+03:002018-04-12T08:26:29.518+03:00Great Story! I wonder if Maid Rose will ever get ...Great Story! I wonder if Maid Rose will ever get to visit with her friend Maid Carrie? Perhaps they can server together at a dinner party or something?Handcuffgirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15612000663501372411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-65691158139302006432018-04-05T13:43:32.144+03:002018-04-05T13:43:32.144+03:00This comment has been removed by the author.Handcuffgirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15612000663501372411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-5732439076923612522017-05-27T15:19:24.204+03:002017-05-27T15:19:24.204+03:00I can see Rose on her hands and knees scrubbing th...I can see Rose on her hands and knees scrubbing the wide concrete steps leading to the front door. Wearing her restrictive uniform with an added waist apron to protect her starched white apron, she is forced to scrub on her hands and knees, restricted by the shortened stooping chain which her mistress has ordered her to wear.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-89552295024920217272017-03-08T04:53:53.521+03:002017-03-08T04:53:53.521+03:00Beautiful story. I do adore the tongue trap. I wou...Beautiful story. I do adore the tongue trap. I would have enjoyed more regarding her clamping at nipples and clitoris on the effects of the piercing and her climaxes if any. <br />Very good story. I love them all. <br />Isabella Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18252851765520249551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-15882636136184446212017-03-07T04:54:13.746+03:002017-03-07T04:54:13.746+03:00If villains are to be traced,they must receive the...If villains are to be traced,they must receive their comeuppance!...What's RIGHTFULLY hers is much less than what she steals.L.E.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-62419014065920579742017-03-06T19:06:41.849+03:002017-03-06T19:06:41.849+03:00Interesting to hear that you plan on concentrating...Interesting to hear that you plan on concentrating more on the villainess´ view in the future, Jackie.<br />Yes, I think this would open complete new perspectives to a story like this. To learn about an evil woman´s growing confidence, her narcissistic view of the world and willingness to put everything and everyone under her thumb to reach her own goals and ultimately get whats rightfully hers ... What a beautiful thing to read!!! Anyone remember "Cleaner"...? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-21070993160517217122017-03-06T12:35:57.685+03:002017-03-06T12:35:57.685+03:00i read the story and i like it very much.sad that ...i read the story and i like it very much.sad that it ends.<br />like the details in story & small explanation about everything.<br /><br />i agree with Robyna Choleton that you should write a sequels of this story.like one where Miss Nightingale,Miss Stephenson and Miss Rothermere humiliates maid Rose also the fall of Miss Rothermere like she oppose something of Miss Nightingale,Miss Stephenson and gets punished/revenge.<br /><br />second sequel can be the revenge of Rose and Carrie, over Miss Nightingale,Miss Stephenson and mistress of Carrie,.like making them a maid legally.<br /><br />also as a reader it will be good if there is a prequel to this story where we gets to know how Carrie found out about Miss Stephenson & maids and how she became maid herself.<br /><br />love your story,hope there will more stories from you...<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-25594851624150560712017-03-06T09:59:06.964+03:002017-03-06T09:59:06.964+03:00While fascinated by the descent of women of high s...While fascinated by the descent of women of high status into squalor,I am invariably revolted by tales where villains escape punishment.So I applaud your proposed sequel!<br /><br />My preferred narratives in the genre relate to willing descents that the lady in question finds appealing.L.E.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-9548504317579494182017-03-05T23:44:36.067+03:002017-03-05T23:44:36.067+03:00With all the foreshadowing I was hoping there was ...With all the foreshadowing I was hoping there was going to be a twist at the end, something like Rose had purchased Stephenson company or that she knew more about contract law than they suspected. However that course was not taken. Still good though.Areadernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-91128783334319898542017-03-05T20:48:17.927+03:002017-03-05T20:48:17.927+03:00Thank you, Jackie J, for your comments above. Yes...Thank you, Jackie J, for your comments above. Yes, I believe there's sufficient justification for an epilogue. <br /><br />To continue the embarrassment of Rose, Miss Nightingale could arrange for another dinner party with Miss Rothermere in attendance. Then for a contrived reason, facilitated by an acting as angry Miss Nightingale, Rose could be accused of an infraction in front of the guests, and become subject to a publicly witnessed spanking of a Stephenson maid. <br /><br />Knowing of Miss Rothermere's supreme delight in witnessing such an event, Miss Nightingale could even offer the paddle to her, to give Rose a couple of appropriately hard swats at her already rosy derriere.<br /><br />Yes, it would indeed be a hoot if you could arrange for the fall of Miss Rothermere to a comparable compromise, as you suggested.<br /><br />You could even have a section where Rose (if she could speak, or write) challenge Miss Nightingale that she never had legal right to abscond with Rose's secured jewelry, or to continue to presume ownership of Rose's wardrobe of fine clothing. <br /><br />This occasion could constitute another put-down of Rose, to where she is spanked again and ordered to her room, and to latch and close the self-locking door behind her, until such time as Miss Nightingale would deem it appropriate to offer to let Rose out to attend to her required chores. <br /><br />Other possibilities to juice-up the epilogue abound. 'May as well embellish Rose's conditions of servitude while the window of opportunity presents itself. ;) Best wishes. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06632689534244222830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-67469900190554980362017-03-05T20:02:50.034+03:002017-03-05T20:02:50.034+03:00Superb story, Jackie J, I always enjoy reading you...Superb story, Jackie J, I always enjoy reading your writings. chemikerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14840251233872883339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-8820056470421941252017-03-05T19:48:22.599+03:002017-03-05T19:48:22.599+03:00Thank you all for you comments There are many bran...Thank you all for you comments There are many branches to a tree and twigs from each branch so the difficulty in writing is not to drift too far from the trunk.<br /><br />I enjoy writing and do feel and have empathy for the characters. My challenge is to try and write from the perspective of the likes of Miss Stephenson and Miss Nightingale but alas my mind is always with the one duped and taken to be the maid. <br /><br />Robyna.<br />Yes I never got to get Mrs Longmire and Mrs Worthington to meet perhaps an epilogue?? I will have a think about that. And of course that pious spinster Miss Rothermere perhaps we would all like to see her pulling a lacy bibbed apron over a heavy wool dress? <br /><br />Hugs and Kisses to all and again thank you for reading.<br /> A big kiss to Camille for her editing and this wonderful site<br /><br />Hugs and Kisses<br />Jackie J<br />XXX Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-70980605461055349012017-03-05T19:46:34.979+03:002017-03-05T19:46:34.979+03:00I really loved this one!!
I really loved this one!!<br />mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08750677299714818560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-81716256796202227042017-03-05T14:32:40.388+03:002017-03-05T14:32:40.388+03:00In legal parlance, Miss Stephenson as aided and ab...In legal parlance, Miss Stephenson as aided and abetted by Miss Nightingale in conspiracy, have committed fraud in the inducement, by their misrepresentation. <br />Rose (and other comparable L2M victims) would be lucky to discover that all contracts, and especially those which are fraudulent and unconscionable, are revocable. And that there is no statute of limitations for prosecuting fraud.<br /> <br />The challenge for Rose in such restricted conditions of her servitude, will be to make surreptitious contact with someone whom she could discreetly hand-deliver a pre-written message for help.<br /> <br />One of the admirers of Rose who attended the dinner function could serve in such capacity, presuming he visited Malangton Hall again, and given that Rose would be the greeter for all visitors under the prevailing conditions. <br /> <br />Miss Stephenson, to be further demeaning to Rose, following the necklace presentment to Rose and its attachment, could have then called it a "collar" and one that consigned the wearer to become the chattel property of Malangton Hall. <br />'Good story, Jackie J.<br /><br />A sequel of stories could be later composed that allow the defrauded maids to regain their former statuses, but that context would be a reversal of the L2M genre, albeit nonetheless delightful to read. This reversal of status context would permit the reader to root for the victims of compelled servitude, whom upon their redemption would become wiser for their ordeal and experiences. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06632689534244222830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-65854154821823754662017-03-05T11:01:30.275+03:002017-03-05T11:01:30.275+03:00So beautiful. I can't imagine why she would be...So beautiful. I can't imagine why she would be sad that she has lost her voice. The silly girl no longer has a need for it!<br /><br />She is being so well taken care of. She should be grateful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-86666055176031435422017-03-05T10:44:13.235+03:002017-03-05T10:44:13.235+03:00This has been a wonderful story, cleverly put toge...This has been a wonderful story, cleverly put together, the demise building brick by brick, well painted characterisations, thank you! It might have been nice for the two fallen ladies to have met in their new diminished states but that's a very tiny thing and I have really enjoyed this, it has been a fine piece of writing. Keep it up please, looking forward to your next work :)An Appreciative Readernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-82959575271306483612017-03-05T10:38:59.400+03:002017-03-05T10:38:59.400+03:00It's remarkable how, even though the ending of...It's remarkable how, even though the ending of this story was telegraphed over and over, the final moment when "Rose" discovers her betrayal was still...exquisite...to read.Arcadia Bergerhttp://arcadiaberger.tumblr.comnoreply@blogger.com