tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post8359331935453221187..comments2024-03-28T18:12:56.268+03:00Comments on Ladies Becoming Maids: Story: What Annabella Wants Annabella Gets. Chapter 17.Camille Langtryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16945716778850774065noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-80544180645647789982020-10-19T00:39:48.893+03:002020-10-19T00:39:48.893+03:00I'd stopped reading Jackie J stories a long ti...I'd stopped reading Jackie J stories a long time ago. After noticing how her stories always garner so many comments, I decided to have another look, so I read this one. Now I suspect that a lot of readers here only read her to get in on the sport going on in the comments section, not because they expect to enjoy the story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-83771029168175873932020-10-18T22:30:30.326+03:002020-10-18T22:30:30.326+03:00The Countess has taken up residence at Whitegate P...The Countess has taken up residence at Whitegate Prison and she is experiencing the bowls of despair. I doubt that this is the end of her run at Buckshire Manor though I can see no one who is about to rescue her.<br /><br />Has Annie been lost to the story and is it all about Annabella (Emily) now? I believe that she is headed for trouble next. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-68680256524912343632020-10-18T11:24:53.828+03:002020-10-18T11:24:53.828+03:00Sorry I started this negative line of thought. I j...Sorry I started this negative line of thought. I just wanted to point out that Maid Anne got lost. Sorry Mz Jackie. =(Maid lukashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01129086773955386489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-47538779424781218582020-10-18T07:05:19.131+03:002020-10-18T07:05:19.131+03:00Shut up you whining div.Shut up you whining div.Charles Rydernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-41654917976691407332020-10-18T05:06:54.301+03:002020-10-18T05:06:54.301+03:00I'm always amazed by the bloody-mindedness of ...I'm always amazed by the bloody-mindedness of some comments here. I know, it's all fiction, but comments like this one still stink of misogyny.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-47446477818753030832020-10-17T19:50:33.907+03:002020-10-17T19:50:33.907+03:00"The whipping of women was absolutely prohibi..."The whipping of women was absolutely prohibited in 1820 by the Whipping of Female Offenders Abolition Act of that year." ["Corporal Punishment", <i>1911 Encyclopedia Brittanica</i>]Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-19449297549427752812020-10-17T19:17:42.953+03:002020-10-17T19:17:42.953+03:00All indications are that the time period is Victor...All indications are that the time period is Victorian England. I suggest that you look at the web sites dealing with prison conditions in Victorian England. The story is not too far off from the available information. Harsh and not too appetizing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-79023164373062136422020-10-17T16:46:16.776+03:002020-10-17T16:46:16.776+03:00https://bingobaker.com/play/79151ded48e47f03https://bingobaker.com/play/79151ded48e47f03Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-36394550469095711032020-10-17T06:19:31.895+03:002020-10-17T06:19:31.895+03:00Jackie J bingo? A Jackie J drinking game would be ...Jackie J bingo? A Jackie J drinking game would be fun also. One more round at each mention of chastity belts, strait jackets or dyed bobs; a double at each anachronism.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-39209561776308632612020-10-17T06:13:48.642+03:002020-10-17T06:13:48.642+03:00If they cut all of her hair off how am I supposed ...If they cut all of her hair off how am I supposed to get Jackie J bingo?!<br />Chastity belt is a dead cert once she's back at the manor but without dyed black bob I'm screwed!<br />Maybe it can be salvaged in the form of a wig or something?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-43568202324044467582020-10-17T05:42:22.737+03:002020-10-17T05:42:22.737+03:00Classic Jackie lol
Starts of well, and derailed of...Classic Jackie lol<br />Starts of well, and derailed off the line again. :p<br /><br />Oh well keep doin The Jackie hehAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-49271362734725529862020-10-17T03:04:48.074+03:002020-10-17T03:04:48.074+03:00@slave-maid You don't have to be able to have ...@slave-maid You don't have to be able to have done something to critique it.<br />I'm no carpenter but if a leg falls off a table I can surmise that it was constructed poorly can I not?<br />It's no surprise that you're one of the chastity belt brigade if this is what you think passes for a very good story.<br />Also, I wouldn't make assumptions on any critic's literary proficiency based on your taste in bedtime reading dear.Charles Rydernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-76496521108758893162020-10-17T02:57:14.057+03:002020-10-17T02:57:14.057+03:00If the Annabella in the title is in fact the impos...If the Annabella in the title is in fact the imposter Annabella and not the original.<br />The title would imply that the imposter Annabella knew all of these twists and turns were going to happen and that she wanted it to happen.<br />"I do hope my dear cousin Annabella secretly wants to be a maid and that my Aunt tries to facilitate that. I also hope that my mother and I should happen upon her being a maid and hatch a ludicrous plot to steal her inheritance. I also hope that my mother puts my cousin in a coma and then gets her knocked up by a stable boy. And I also wish to have my aunt serve as my maid but ultimately only after possibly being released from a prison run entirely by women who disregard the law. Yes, whatever Emily, I mean Annie, I mean Annabella wants, Somebody gets." ��Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-53226033293922636452020-10-17T01:53:48.986+03:002020-10-17T01:53:48.986+03:00I know what you all mean. I love Ms Jackie's s...I know what you all mean. I love Ms Jackie's stories, but sometimes they got too long and loose their way. I mentioned to Ms Jackie afew times about a story she started way back in November of 2018. She wrote the 1st installment and left me hanging. I wrote to her afew times and she wrote back she has not fingered out where to go with it.<br /><br />Ms Jackie. Your a fantastic story teller, but sometimes you get last in the sauce. =(Maid lukashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01129086773955386489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-63536133296391411672020-10-16T23:07:00.059+03:002020-10-16T23:07:00.059+03:00I think the Annabella in the title is not the orig...I think the Annabella in the title is not the original Annabella rather the title is more about Lady Hogarth and the new AnnabellaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-7527834793623039512020-10-16T22:59:54.009+03:002020-10-16T22:59:54.009+03:00Jackie J will start off with a promising plot but ...Jackie J will start off with a promising plot but then end up not being able to figure out a way to resolve it, so she throws in more characters and a new plot twist and goes with that till she gets stuck again, and just repeats the process on and on. I think she has talent, but I think she needs to recognize and deal with her own limitations, and not just keep kicking the can a little further down the road. She should limit herself to short pieces, and finish the whole thing before posting the first part. If somehow she feels her particular Muse demands long form expression, she might break her tales down into self-contained vignettes. A. Readernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-79822029894586231562020-10-16T22:43:05.769+03:002020-10-16T22:43:05.769+03:00I am starting to conclude that this blog has two k...I am starting to conclude that this blog has two kinds of readers. One group wants stories with believable plots, well-rounded characters and the other usual literary virtues. The other group wants stories with chains, chastity belts, and strait jackets.Anonymous5noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-38046763974721049632020-10-16T22:08:18.265+03:002020-10-16T22:08:18.265+03:00Perhaps the story would be better received if Jack...Perhaps the story would be better received if Jackie J added an aside or postscript to clarify that the story was set in a fantasy world.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-61095405233359364472020-10-16T21:48:24.142+03:002020-10-16T21:48:24.142+03:00Ignore critics and continue please.Ignore critics and continue please.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-69645198794272745812020-10-16T21:05:49.393+03:002020-10-16T21:05:49.393+03:00I think this is a very good story actually. I wond...I think this is a very good story actually. I wonder if any of those critics could write a story themselves, though I guess not. Please continue Jackie J. <br /><br />All I would line to say is that the Countess should be returned to Buckshire Manor and locked immediately into the chastity belt, then put straight to work as a maid, though may I suggest that her position be made permanent and that she be kept under the strictest of regimes with long hours of backbreaking drudgery, no rest bresks, no days off (ever) and being kept hard at work under the constant threat of punishment. I look forward to the next instalment. Keep up the goid work Jackie J and take no notice of the critics.slave-maidnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-6040638020602238142020-10-16T17:46:35.348+03:002020-10-16T17:46:35.348+03:00She's off on another tangent, this will probab...She's off on another tangent, this will probably run on and on and on because she doesn't plan where she wants to take her stories.<br />Just writes her contradictory chapters on a whim.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-15061601479888931612020-10-16T17:44:10.823+03:002020-10-16T17:44:10.823+03:00Jesus Christ, as if female police officers wasn...Jesus Christ, as if female police officers wasn't bad enough you double down with female warden and staff.<br />What time period is this set in?<br />There's so much wrong with this.<br />This wonderful, whimsical, fantasy prison also doesn't answer to the law apparently?<br />Your writing is a joke.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-54747691904607610642020-10-16T17:43:27.101+03:002020-10-16T17:43:27.101+03:00Ms Jackie. Are we getting off the story line here?...Ms Jackie. Are we getting off the story line here? This story started out as: "What Annabella Wants Annabella Gets" Maid Anne has been lost for the last few chapters. Just curious when we are getting back to her? It is her story.Maid lukashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01129086773955386489noreply@blogger.com