tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post3376886327446316038..comments2024-03-26T14:24:36.869+03:00Comments on Ladies Becoming Maids: Story: Maid in China. Part 3. Camille Langtryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16945716778850774065noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-25165109351609434272017-07-10T11:28:53.099+03:002017-07-10T11:28:53.099+03:00I love your concept. Would it be possible that you...I love your concept. Would it be possible that you share your novel? My email: freiburgv30-money@yahoo.de thank you very much!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-2217787524111791202017-07-07T01:32:24.236+03:002017-07-07T01:32:24.236+03:00I have found great interest and inspiration in thi...I have found great interest and inspiration in this wonderful story. It´s powerful plot, full of imaginative elements, the rich language in combination with the fact that it unfortunately seems to have lost it´s momentum, finally pushed me to try to somehow develop it. I´m reluctant to present the result of my work, this for several reasons. Firstly, english is not my mother tongue, I´m therefore interested in finding someone willing to correct the text. Secondly, I have not been able to get in touch with Barefoot Servant. Finally, I´m not convinced that my work, considering it´s wider perspective of downgrading, would be appriciated in this forum. Those interested in the novel - it stops right now at approximately 250 pages...sorry - feel free to contact me at galonklubben@outlook.com. <br />The story is altered in order to solve one for me important psychological problem in the way the original develops the characters; Jenny´s motive to go from being Maddie´s best friend to exposing her to cruel humiliation. In my version Maddie´s loss of status is double, she submits to her maid´s role at the Kim´s house, but before that she becomes a bully victim at school, partially because her grades are falling. She is placed in a Special Unit for students with learning difficulties and at the same time set up by Skye and finds herself subjected to a particularily strict discipline. Jenny´s little brother is replaced by a sister, only slightly younger than Jenny. The sister is a notorious heartbreaker and a successful student, in glaring contrast to Maddie, who she despises. The sister orchestrates, together with Skye, Maddie´s gradual degradation, at school but later also at the Kim´s house. She manages to convince Jenny to stop protecting Maddie. As a consequence of Skye´s setup Maddie´s mother is having a hard time too. The version stops right before the departure to China.<br />As said, maybe this is too far from the main theme of this site, but still, it´s basic theme is downgrading. <br />Galooonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15006554904865436237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-38960229428974229992017-05-19T17:00:52.520+03:002017-05-19T17:00:52.520+03:00I hope this brilliant story has not been abandoned...I hope this brilliant story has not been abandoned... I simply love it so far....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-82595937439813204872017-04-25T02:06:18.476+03:002017-04-25T02:06:18.476+03:00Seconded!!Seconded!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-80773054893370204302017-04-24T12:33:15.483+03:002017-04-24T12:33:15.483+03:00It is my favorite story! Pls keep on your excellen...It is my favorite story! Pls keep on your excellent writing!! I hope there will be a new part soon.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-29830830025189752672017-03-27T19:00:20.669+03:002017-03-27T19:00:20.669+03:00One of the best story of this site, please please ...One of the best story of this site, please please let us see more of it :) :) :) Sissy Lounoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-64337966248861619732017-03-19T09:07:09.424+03:002017-03-19T09:07:09.424+03:00I wonder whether Maddie will be forced to undergo ...I wonder whether Maddie will be forced to undergo a stirp search at the air[port?huberthowhowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15123286817683728063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-78502142479429740552017-03-19T06:01:11.548+03:002017-03-19T06:01:11.548+03:00Please, please publish another episode soon xoPlease, please publish another episode soon xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-57921144471190110722017-02-20T17:06:38.121+03:002017-02-20T17:06:38.121+03:00Dear barefoot servant, i simply love your story in...Dear barefoot servant, i simply love your story incl. the foot fetish aspects. Do you have any websites you could recommend? Thank you so much!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-85127611400085158412017-02-11T07:26:43.155+03:002017-02-11T07:26:43.155+03:00Thank you, Barefoot Servant, for your writing. Pl...Thank you, Barefoot Servant, for your writing. Please write another instalment soon. It's been a long time xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-46058522148869106292017-02-08T16:05:10.233+03:002017-02-08T16:05:10.233+03:00I definitely hope to write more... and soon. Sadly...I definitely hope to write more... and soon. Sadly, my day job is incredibly taxing and I have some pretty lofty reading goals on top of that. This weekend may actually allow an opportunity to write.Barefoot Servantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-38451970527513037302017-02-08T13:37:12.192+03:002017-02-08T13:37:12.192+03:00Such a pity this story was abandoned, or .......is...Such a pity this story was abandoned, or .......isn´t all hope gone? In my opinion it´s by far the best written story here, it definitely deserves more chapters; the expected airport scene, the stay in China, and, what I´m personally looking forward to most, Maddie´s coming back to her senior year. <br />The story has maybe taken a couple of steps away from realism - as I read it - but an ambiguous positioning in time opens for a more saga- like narration, with perhaps more extravagant debauchery. I´m not into foot fetishism, but if it doesn´t play the first violin in the plot, which I think it doesn´t so far, I can appreciate it. <br />Once again Barefoot Servant, I´m one of your fans, thank you for sharing and pleeeease continue. Galooonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15006554904865436237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-51888116182447431642017-02-01T15:48:06.004+03:002017-02-01T15:48:06.004+03:00One of the best stories in this blog. Cant wait to...One of the best stories in this blog. Cant wait to read the next chapters.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-30449870138801009622016-12-05T02:46:31.499+03:002016-12-05T02:46:31.499+03:00I love the exceptional detail, which of course a r...I love the exceptional detail, which of course a real servant would have to memorize and perform on command.Ethan Brandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04490022377256847172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-36943101531851442452016-12-04T21:07:12.674+03:002016-12-04T21:07:12.674+03:00Yikes!Yikes!Barefoot Servantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-48913300790301879682016-12-04T21:06:02.467+03:002016-12-04T21:06:02.467+03:00Thanks for the advice.Thanks for the advice.Barefoot Servantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-82584788382527872822016-12-04T21:04:45.283+03:002016-12-04T21:04:45.283+03:00Indeed! Maddie has had very little interaction wit...Indeed! Maddie has had very little interaction with Billy since becoming a maid in his family's employ. That should change soon.Barefoot Servantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-65566883175046851282016-12-04T20:46:16.243+03:002016-12-04T20:46:16.243+03:00Another aspect of Maddie's servitude that has ...Another aspect of Maddie's servitude that has not yet manifested itself is her relationship with the younger brother, whom I suspect Maddie had treated as an annoyance during her days as a guest in the Kim household. huberthowhowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15123286817683728063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-42172548166554517532016-12-04T19:25:09.627+03:002016-12-04T19:25:09.627+03:00I would suggest looking into how Vietnamese women ...I would suggest looking into how Vietnamese women are kidnapped and brought to China and then have no chance to escapeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-20512863580221818082016-12-04T19:21:16.549+03:002016-12-04T19:21:16.549+03:00Yes, it does become more dangerous. And if Maddie ...Yes, it does become more dangerous. And if Maddie is off in some city where the name is not transliterated properly and contact information wasn't given to Maddie's parents, and if they were notified that she begged to stay (even if she didn't), by the time she disappeared into another city, she'd never be found or have any ability to leaveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-70106521478069155092016-12-03T14:09:44.543+03:002016-12-03T14:09:44.543+03:00This site hates robots! I'm starting to think ...This site hates robots! I'm starting to think that it may have outsmarted me.Barefoot Servantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-6147532779218766822016-12-03T14:08:42.575+03:002016-12-03T14:08:42.575+03:00You're most welcome!You're most welcome!Barefoot Servantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-86526565927049544712016-12-03T14:07:12.254+03:002016-12-03T14:07:12.254+03:00The other side of the bridge? Right now, some loos...The other side of the bridge? Right now, some loose ideas and not a lot of time. <br /><br />As for the foot fetish, I can't deny it; I have one. I started writing the story purely to entertain myself; only later did I decide to share it here. It'll continue to have a place in the story, though I can't see it becoming any more prominent than it already is.Barefoot Servantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-41161275475196822842016-12-03T14:02:43.132+03:002016-12-03T14:02:43.132+03:00I'll take that as a compliment... more to come...I'll take that as a compliment... more to come.Barefoot Servantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-988993754670474624.post-9671170341269665522016-12-03T14:00:48.002+03:002016-12-03T14:00:48.002+03:00Glad you like it. I have actually been thinking ab...Glad you like it. I have actually been thinking about this. I sort of have an idea along these lines, but haven't taken the time to research the reality. Sometimes the truth is stranger (and more interesting) than fiction.Barefoot Servantnoreply@blogger.com